Rishbala 5S: Chain My Heart- Part 1 updated on pg.16 (12/08/16)

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Zoya2

@Zoya2

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Awesome Start of the story

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Nice start

I liked curious and confident little madhu. How can we forget hero Rk. Looking forward to next part to comment more..

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Uma

@uma88

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Interesting prologue. Excited for their next meet. Continue soon.

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was so Happy to see you with another story on Rishbala.😊

It was So Interesting Prologue.😊

Madhu and Her Father Part was so Nice.😊

The Stranger Conversation with Madhu was so cute.😳

The Letter and Gift was so Nice.😊

Madhu feelings on this was so Cute.😳

I think It is Rk only.😊

Please Continue soon.😊

Thats so sweet of you,that you dedicated this part to Sudha,thats so nice.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Badbuddy

@Badbuddy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Wow, beautiful story!!!
Starting from 4yrs Madhu, cute!!! Wow, not a cry baby!! First day itself, listened to teacher!!
And Madhu's birthday!!! On Sudha di's birthday, great!!

Wow!! Grand birthday celebration!! Rk irritating Madhu, hehe!! Mukund- Rk's little brother? Hmm
Rk is Madhu's neighbour but hasn't met yet. This means, they came their recently?? Hmm!! Rk's gift and cake!! And a lovely letter!! Madhu blushing, awww!!!Sweet!! Now, he'll give that letter each year!! Great!!!

Lovely starting!!! Seems a romantic story!! Eager to read more!!! Thanks for pm!!!!!!

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Pearl_TR

@Pearl_TR

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Lovely dear

It was cute

Beautifully written

Keep writing

Happy birthday sudha😊

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

awesome update 😃

so madhu is cute naughty and clever😃

and Rk did i need to say he is a charmer as always 😉

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Supervampire

@Supervampire

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

sweet nd lovely prologue

congrats for newstory

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

wow , loved it pls continue soon

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

i have to say, among all ur stories.. this is the story i liked most..
the cutie madhu is so cute.
. then after 13 years, the cute madhu grows to be a cutie beauty..😳
ahaan.."!! i like Rk's Attitude..
.. the way he challenged her to get to know who he is...
On the first meeting itself he called hee baby..😆
What next, on secondmeeting sweetheart, darling, honey..
And on third meeting they'll create a baby themselves😉 hehahe.. Am imagination are going wild🤣
But will blame u for that.. Coz alll ur Rk's are so fast except who am i wala Rk..!!
Thanks for pm & my like worked, see..!!😛 ⭐️ 😃
Superbly written souwmiya.. 👏

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