New Rishbala TS: Who Am I?- Last part updated on pg.18 (27/09/16) - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update dear. I loved rishbala scenes and it is so emotional dear 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish

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Brilliant finishing dear...

Rishbala's love story was narrated so neatly and beautifully...

The way u have written the dance sequence... the mudras (that's what we call those poses nah? the joy, angry, lust and pain?) actually u have said Rishbala's love story in that simple yet lovely scene... applaud for ur imagination dear...

yeah... their first meet was so joyous... Rk was a gone as soon he came face to face with madhu...

you know what? i felt this madhu greedy... yeah becos she asked him to get her Scooty for just breaking the rear lights LOL!!

awwee... their ride to the library on her scooty was one romantic moment...

i loved their love confession.. it was so sweet and DIVINE!!

Rk had tears seeing her dance gracefully... lovely lovely...

their death was painful... it would have been more painful if either of them had survived and to live without the other... so it's better they died together and living in heaven happily...

even if both had survived but Madhu couldn't dance then it would kill her and seeing her in pain will pain Rk too... so its better their divine love ended this way...

Madhu's sis was angry that Rk didn't call for an ambulance and look after her sis but doing social service but then realised her sis was no less... even she wasn't caring for her pain but was consoling an injured kid... it shows Rk loves her dance and Madhu love his social service mind... thats what we call as Match made in heaven jodi... and now the jodi is having dance jodi dance contest in heaven... LOL!!
LOL!! I felt like you played safe... you didn't dare to even match this Madhu-mathi with that Sultan... u let us readers to imagine whether Madhu gave him a second chance or not... fr me.. NO!!! she loves her jiju and can see him only as her sister's lover... so she can't romance Sultan with her jiju's face... so ullu sullu ki babaji ka thullu!!! LOL!!!

I will imagine like Madhumathi continued her sister's dancin class... after all she is madhu's sister and she could have learned some dance but she didn't show much passion before as she was lazy... but nw she will dance to keep her sister's name memorable!! but then she cn't become the legendary dance Madhubala... still she can dance and make her sis happy who is looking at her up above the world so high... like a diamond in the sky!! LOL!!

and that sultan can do some social service and at least try to reduce the rate of sins he committed in the serial and in all the stories!! LOL!!

Thank you so much souwmi for giving this unique and lovely story to read... it's so perfect! i loved it! keep writing more on rishbala...

(Hey you said pink part flash back nah? but the color looked like violet in my phone... blue in my laptop... and lavender in my office PC... nowhere it looked like pink color... I don't know why? 😆)


Thanks akka! Esp for appreciating that dance sequence 🤗
Wow akka...you said it right...heaven made jodi they are! Hahaha you want Madhumathi to continue her sister's dance? That's not possible I guess...heheh 😆
LOL Akka...rhymes too? 😆 Only first line missing 😉
Sultan and social service?🤣 That doesn't happen 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
👏👏 Loved your writing dear!!!
You did justice to the characters!!!
Sultan with Madhubala was not sounding great!! But you have your
own idea to make it better na..

So Rk was out with Mohan that time also...here, I loved Mohan a lot...
With old RK and with new Rk..his character and scenes, just loved it..

Beautiful love story of old rishbala...loved it..it was apt..
Scooty scenes...just love the scooty scenes...Rk- Madhu scenes
reminded me of one movie..
Madhu loving the touches but acting as she didnot love them...

Bittuji...I am wondering like Madhu..how can someone sleep in
between that much crowd...but who am I kidding Bittuji is Bittuji..lol

I am imagining Rk's reaction seeing Mdhumati for first time..
Haha..I thought he waited for Madhu too much, became exhausted and started seeing two Madhus lol..

And Madhu's dance...oblivious to surroundings, she danced crazily, so this is inspired from Shiv Trilogy... you love that a lot I think...

Madhu proposed Rk there..wow!! Loved the proposal...

So Sultan was already in picture...he went with Madhu, Rk and Madhubala... that's why he said Madhu while waking up..okkk.

That accident... Madhu lost her leg..her love for dancing...
What would be her condition that time..I can imagine why Madhumati became angry with Rk that time..

Oh..Madhu...loved her dialogue..''We may die Rishab...but our love doesn't. It will be alive forever. If there is a Rishab Kundra in this world, there would definitely be a Madhubala Rishab Kundra."
Just love this dialogue so much..that's why even if they died..
another RK (Sultan) and Madhu (Madhumati) are there...

And wow Madhu's love for dance was so strong.. her life was incomplete without Rk and her dance...she sacrificed her life and saved her sister..and Rk..he died too remembering their lovely moments...but glad they both died together and would be together in heaven..

Overall perfect story.. loved it...thanks dear for beautifully penning it and thanks for pm..





















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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

Second!!!
awesome update Sowmi,
madhumati was real twist in this story. ..
rishbala first meeting was superb. .., cute
madhu dance, confession. ..was soo lovely
wish they are alive. ...
rishbala ending was so emotional. ..
i feel like cry. ..
rishbala face was alive in madhumati and sultan. ..
twist was awesome dear. ..
madhu loss her life to safe her sister. ..and rk give his face to sultan. ..unknowingly. .
Thanks for pm dear. ..

Thanks Sappy!
Even I felt so emotional while writing those parts...
Welcome 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya2405

sry for late comment... 😛 u describe story so well that in the end i was crying while reading..i dnt have word to discribe it..thanks for pm 👏

Thanks for commenting Abhi and sorry for making you cry 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RijaMalik

thnku for completing...

it was a beautiful story.. 👏

Thanks Rumi 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mona_90

Awesome and beutiful last part..
Epilouge milega kya..

Thanks Mona! Will write and post in free time 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Yasmine16

Congo Soum..it was penned down amazingly..u made it..wat a twist..totally love it..keep writing..thanks for pm and yeah will edit soon..Thanks for index..

Thanks and Welcome Yas 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful chapter

Just loved it all the dance sequence was brilliant
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Beautiful chapter


Just loved it all the dance sequence was brilliant

Thanks Jade 😊

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