FF: Husband, I Love You! (parts 32 B, pg.161, dt.02.02.17)

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Radhika_G

@Radhika_G

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#531

In love with RK confession...❤️

Really you written so beautifully every line made the feel and intense of love.

Extraordinary and marvellous work..👏👏

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keerthana selvaprasd

@keerthiprasad

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#532

Wow...its so beautiful and lovely update Dr...loved it very much ...had a smile always while reading this update...
And tree house...I also never seen one for real...
Such a beautiful place for them alone in d forest near falls
Loved when madhu refused to gave the eggs to rishabh as saying they are unborn babies...
Glad rishabh gave her a beer so they had a heart to heart talk and rk realised his love's depth...
Loved when madhu asked rishabh to come close to her and made him lie on her chest and what she said.."you are my baby ,rishabh"...how cute it was...so lovely
Finally,rishabh told her that he had a expectations in mrg and she fulfilled it she also gave a motherly love...how sweet
Eagerly waiting for the next update dr..can't wait...
Thanks for the pm Dr...
All the very best..

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dharsii

@dharsii

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#533

Some fun and heart touching update.
Every update,U proved urself ,such a best writer I this forum..
The way of writing is really fantastic.
Madhu's happiness and her expression is lovely.
Rk is unique hubby.I have no words to express about Rk.
My mind is stuck ,While I am thinking about him.
Tree house surprise is fantabulous.
I never expect this surprise.
She is behaving like child.
I like her concern about that eggs(unborn babies).so sweet she is.Finally RK confess his love With lenghty memories.I like it .
Every incident with no.Madhu inner counters are outstanding.
In That one word "you r my baby Rishu" Rk flop and melt towards her.Last part was really super.
I can't wait .I am waiting for ur update.

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Rumi

@RijaMalik

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#534

beautiful update... 👏

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#535

SudhaILY, kudos girl 15 pages 5000 words but while reading I was feeling that it should go on and on, awesome update, loved it. Rishab spoke the longest and that too the love confession, they both are madly in love with each other. Madhu wanted the whole forest to know about her love, she in drunken state the convo was hilarious too, chicken in cracked egg, tying pony of ACP and wanted to shave too.

Sudha thanks for the PM dear.

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#536

Superb update.

Amazing work and applause for tge creativity, beautiful words and your effort for the update👏

My words arent enough for describing your work but I am still writing my comment.Also you said it was long update it felt so short😉 coz I can never get enough of your stories.

Firstly I loved their question answers. It was my favourite moment of this couple. Also Rk confessing and madhu's monologues were simply perfect.

But boy can Rk talk. Once he starts he doesn't stop.😃 Indeed he made up for his brooding silence. I loved his name for madhu chicken in cracked egg. Sober madhu is so crazy drunk madhu will eat rk alive. She started spilling her frustration when he asked her to confess now that was an insane moment. I totally loved it.Also wanting to tie his hair.

There were so many moments that made me grin like loon, awe at them. You are amazing. 👏 Keep writing

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Dewdivz

@Dewdivz

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#537

Lovely update my dr
Sooo cute madu 😃
Rishibala kiss
Plz update soon
Thanks for pm 😳

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Zoya2

@Zoya2

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#538

Fabulous Update 👏 👏

You have written everything excellently

So Madhu heard RK telling her that he loved her when she slept

(On the night when Madhu came home safely after saving herself from criminals with her kickboxing skills)

ACP Sir's confession of his love for his wife Madhu is breathtaking

Edited by .Zoya. - 9 years ago

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icegirl31

@icegirl31

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#539

Jst luv ur writing ...👏⭐️

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#540

In last update i got the vibe of it.
In forest what else it can be..
I had guessed for tent too, born fire, alcohol, the hugging each other & rolling around the fire like they did in sanaam re😆.
RK is cool.. Getting madhu to tree house.. Wow..!!
Innovative..
Something better than his usual boring self.
He seems free too.
They had moments, letting their heart talk.
Madhu very clearly confess herself.
And Rk.. Introducing A speaking Rishab kundra for the first time..
But whatever he said, it straightly touched the heart...
Madhu's inner thoughts were🤣..
Still they are two body, two soul🤣 and ya, hott kiss..!!
Out an out.. Fabulous update..!!
Thanks for pm..!!

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