RiShbala TS 'FITOOR' ||COMPLETED @PG.38|| (20/07)

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: poojitha96
Awesome part. Feeling bad for rk hope he gets well soon and happily live with his madhu
Tq for the pm...
Plz update soon ...

thanks dear... ya.. his disease is certainly sad... letz see.. what i store in for their future... lol.. 😃

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Mona_90
Awesome part.. Thank god rk ka parents uska saath hai sorry pehla part ma rk ka dialouge sa laga hi nahi tha lol and madhubala kitni cute hai yaar hamara rk phas gaya uska aankha,smile and talk ma and feeling sad for rk usa apna aap ko madhu sa dura rakhna pad raha hai apne heart ka wajasha and apne heart sa majboor hoka madhu ko dekhna wanha wapas aya hai.. Waiting for next part.. Thanks for pm...

Thanks mona... yaa.. dialogues was intentionally made confusing by me... u guyz were worried abt rk's parents... hehee.. rk ka haal sahi me dil hai ki manta nai types ho gaya hai... thanks for reading dear..!!

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: vishuv
Read the next part dear. And you broke my heart!

Awww... Souwmiya.. Fevicol du..😆 🤣

He has heart problem ?😭

Yeah.. Sadly yes..!! :((

So why you said there is no happy ending ? Hmmm...

Wait.. For lil while.. U will get to know in next 3 updates... ;))

Little RK saying' ahaan' and giving his dimpled smile ! woh...missed it yaar. Lucky little Madhu

Yeah.. Thatz one good sight..😉

And aaniya thanks for the PM. Or else I would be searching for your updates. Next time update on a new page dear !

😃 😆 oh... sorry for the inconvenience dear... for next time.. will surely do... :D thanks for reading...

Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 9 years ago

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Amazing update
Rk has heart problem hopefully he get cured
He is going to meet Madhu wow

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Rishkara

@Rishkara

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

hey aniya..

sorry for commenting this time 😎

VERY VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN.

RK IS FALLING FOR MADHU.😳

THANKS FOR THIS AMAZINNG UPDATE ANIYA.

PLZ CONTINUE UR AMZIG STORIES❤️

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Sorry... I forgot to read this story... I was thinking for long whether i read all ur updates & finally realised i missed this one to read & comment...

Okay coming to the update... I was fabulous...

First half was so lovely... I had a smile playing on my face but then when i start reading the second half... My smile dropped... & i got so emotional... As i fear u will kill Rk in this story... Oh please dont kill him yaar... I will forgive u for making sulthan a doctor... In return u give back my rk alive... Please...

Aww... He is here in shimla to see his little angel... But not to meet her... As they don't have any future... No rk... U r wrong... Even like u madhu is also waiting for u... Yes, that little girl is still waiting to meet her Rishab... I want them to live happily... Hope madhu will give him the courage to take the risk of heart transplantation & he survives too... I cant see him dying... Well.. In spite of telling all this... I want u to take thid story exactly the way u have planned.. If u have planned to kill him... Then its fine... Bcos u r the writer & u know whats the best for the story...

Will be waiting to read the next part...

Thanks dear...