RiShbala TS 'FITOOR' ||COMPLETED @PG.38|| (20/07) - Page 38

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

ch 1WOW!! what an unconventional way of meeting of Rishbala...I had never read two leads meeting each other like that...It seemed that madhu was his saviour not in that earthquake but she would be later too...Where is RK's parents? How can his parents not with a little kid like him?

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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

ch 1 contdAt last RK and madhu reached her parents and they were able to contact them...Hope Rishbala meet soon...WoW!! RK has grown up and still heremembered his moments with madhu...With time she had become his passion...But he washelpless...His weak heart didn't let him todream a happy life with his fitoor...It was sad...let's see what fate stores for them...Excited to read their 2nd meeting after many years , in the same place where they metfor the 1st time...

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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

ch 2AOMG!! Rishbala met same way they met years before...She was still the kind , helpful girl from past,but now she was no longer tiny...I loved the way u described RK's feelings for her when they again met...On the other side , the helplessness of both RK to see his parents' hope to see him fine , and his parents' helplessness to see their son not getting better , was shown beautifully...Poor mohan , he was being a sandwich between his wife andson...I liked the idea of keeping a secretary with RK for helping him...Who would be this? madhu?

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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

ch 2BWOW!! beautiful Rishbala moments...Loved theway both teased each other and lived each moments to the fullest...They both were sunshine to each other's life , brightening each other's every darkness with their love...Madhu's fainting was making me suspicious...Wasshe okay?

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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

Last partOh god! they confessed their feelings for each other...they became one , and their lovemaking was so passionate and beautifully written...But where did she go? There was something fishing ...Was she okay? RK was a chalta phirta disaster...always falling down like a dhosa...lol...But his fall was dangerous...he wounded himself...Glad that radha mohan came on time...End was near...he needs a donor asap...But who is this donor? Although I assumed that madhu would bethe donor , but I was more excited to knowthe way everything would be revealed...The last part was emotional... RK did find her , but through Dr. Sultan...Madhu was gone...She gaveher life in order to brighten up his...I loved this tale of loveand sacrifice...and u nailed it when u made RK leaving his last breath on the same stage , in the same hall , where they met and their fitoor started for each other...

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Originally posted by: Shree007

Read all part in one go...It was mindblowing, fabulous story.Last part is so emotional. It brought tears in my eyes.thanks for pm.

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Originally posted by: zelja89

Beautiful ending, loved it

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Originally posted by: vishuv

Aaniya you completed the story! I thought you would give us more sub parts. But guess what I'm very much happy with the ending you gave. Yea you gotit right! Rishbala is united in the end right? Dear the quotes and the poems you chose were beautiful. It exactly describedRK'S pain. And the letter Madhu wrote at last...girlyou made me cry.Dr. Sultan is old here! Wow here it looks like sultan is Madhu's uncle.He told the truth of the donor!Loved all the parts... can't believe Madhu lost hope on her life and left her parents! But she is a motivational factor for RK! Look at the irony.The way you brought the star bracelet in the whole story is well thought! RK died with it.Amazing story Aaniya. Thanks for PM! Keep up the good work!

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Originally posted by: MahiKir

Sad but beautiful... Made me emotional.. Please write more beautiful stories like this..

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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Amazing n lovely story ..as i already guess the ending its kind of emotional but not felt sad...Actually i lovex the way u wrote the letters n rk's loneliness n love for madhu...I would've loved iteven more if their love story is bit prolonged. ...but being short story has its own pros n cons. ..n missing their ling romance is the only con...Would love to read more from u...

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