Rishabala OS : Undeserving Love

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Amazing n superb os

Very different Di

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candle_light

@candle_light

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

its a beautiful story with different ending that makes this story a unique 😊

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

As everyone said a realistic end.

One can't forget how her heart was crushed and can easily come back to him the moment he apologizes.

This story going to be unique one.

I really enjoyed reading it.

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

I actually liked this story..

a completely different one.

what rk did to madhu..after that if madhu didint came back it's her choice..in fact a good choice..

if a person wronged you that doesn't mean everyone will.

and rk always tired to find a reason to show madhu that she is as same as dipali..

madhu moving on in her life..with her best friend ishaan..

her daughter will get both mother and father love..

loved it..

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Superbbb OS dear...
I'm happy she didn't gone to Rk in end...
Gul is sooo cute...
Ishaan is also Awesome friend to her...
loved it...

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

hmmm you are getting back on track woww

amazing concepts and stories...and one more thing , as Sudha said whenever I feel low or nt gettign sleep will read some of these and trust me I will just smile goshh such a lovely feeling..

Cominh back to the update, hmmm so RK was such a jerk and he deserve this..he has a son but he will never come to know abt this.Poor Madhu she is content with her life as she can see her RK in this lil one, Ishaan.

He gave a chance to Madhu just to have S#$ , he is so blind and was in his ways that he didnt realize how hard she tried to win over his heart.

What he said to madhu , GOD he is a such an ass how can he say that to Madhu..BTW SUllu again lol hate that ullu. So she somewhere knows that RK will never accept her but her hope failed again as RK being so full of himself.

Dips, goshhh why can't she be away from any story lol

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139271

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee
hmmm you are getting back on track woww
amazing concepts and stories...and one more thing , as Sudha said whenever I feel low or nt gettign sleep will read some of these and trust me I will just smile goshh such a lovely feeling..

Cominh back to the update, hmmm so RK was such a jerk and he deserve this..he has a son but he will never come to know abt this.Poor Madhu she is content with her life as she can see her RK in this lil one, Ishaan.

He gave a chance to Madhu just to have S#$ , he is so blind and was in his ways that he didnt realize how hard she tried to win over his heart.
What he said to madhu , GOD he is a such an ass how can he say that to Madhu..BTW SUllu again lol hate that ullu. So she somewhere knows that RK will never accept her but her hope failed again as RK being so full of himself.

Dips, goshhh why can't she be away from any story lol

that is so sweet yaar.. thank you... so glad i can cheer you guys up through my stories😊

ermm.. you got it wrong, Ishaan is Madhu's BFF and husband, Gul is RK and Madhu's daughter
Sullu and Dips are the official Despos in my stories😆😆😆😆

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Different concept, loved this OS completely. Different from your other stories but beautifully written. You are a brilliant writer.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

It was amazing and quite different from the usual stories.

Madhu is right on her stand and even I feel that RK is deep down so hurt to believe Madhu's love for him was true. After accusing her, when he realised the truth luck didn't favour him once again.

I liked the ending. Madhu learned to live after RK's betrayal.She also learned to find happiness in small small things.

The only regret I have is when RK looked for a slip from her side why didn't he look for that when he was with dipali. Either RK trusts her too much or Dipali is intelligent to hide her affair from RK.

Thanks for another OSlazy di! Got to see a different shade of RK yet again!