Rishbala FF: WANTED !- Chapter 8 updated on pg.81 (30/9/16) - Page 49

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Posted: 9 years ago
First!
Brilliant update! 👏
So the target was Sultan & he got missed because of Rk's presence? What the hell was he doing there?
When I first read the prologue... And Madhu said she could feel her parents presence I was like... Okay its gonna be a ghost story... Lol! Silly me!

Just one small doubt dear... The part in color wasnt flash back right? U just put it in color becos it contains the prologue lines right? Bcos i started wondering why not Madhu could have killed Sultan after meeting up with Rk... And Sultan's death news could be the happy news which Rk wanted to share... Lol! I know this so stupid to relate those two scenes... You have clearly titled this chappy "target missed" lol... Then how come Madhu would have kissed him? Lol! Rk probably wanted to share about his liking for Madhu to his mom and Rudra... But he hold it back to burst it in a better timing or after proposing madhu & getting her consent to marry him... Lol!

Loved the first half so much... Both the brothers were so worried for their mother but felt better when Madhu assured them by going through her medical reports...
Radha is stressing herself... I guess she needs a bahu to look after her Lol!
Rk, man, i know you are one dutiful police officer but you should spend more time with your momma & care her too... U get so much time to go phone shopping with you doctor dearest but cant spend time with momma bear? Lol!

I want Madhu's mission to kill Sultan to accomplish soon so that Rk can escape her from her crime & kept her under arrest in his bedroom! Oh my i started blushing at the thought... How sexy will Madhu look with her hands cuffed and tied up to the bed post? Rk staring at his criminally beautiful wife... Aww...

I m sure Madhu is not doing any mistake... May be a crime in the eyes of law... But not her... She is surely avenging for someone dearer to her... Curious to know what f**ked her calm and ordered life... She seems to be one respectef doctor... But she is the most WANTED in the criminal record i guess... Haha... Feeling sad for her that she could dream of a happy life with the man she loves...
She hated to go near that sultan or be touched and hugged by him (I wanted to strangle him for dreaming of having and even touching what's rightfully Rk's)... But still she did for someone's sake...
I want Rk to find Madhu's secret and help her in a way he can... He will surely understand her & support her too...


Story is getting so interesting...
Thanks for unfolding a bit of secrets... More to reveal... For that we will wait!

U r just doing a fab job dear... Handling the suspense so well & keeping your readers hooked up!

Take your time to update as i know u will be joining college by next week... Whenever u get time... Write in bits and piece.. One day it will make a whole update which u can post it...

Love u

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Second! !!
awesome update Sowmi! !!
Finally u reach prologue. ..
so..madhu is in mission! !
She trap sultan. .
i just want to kick that sultan when he said
she is his ' only his '
madhu scared from her past ..
poor madhu !!
Thanks for pm dear...
Edited by sapnaf52 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it. Why does madhu think her past makes her unworthy for rk? What is she hiding? Pls don't tell me she was raped or work as prostitute to get her villians to their end. That wuld literally break me. I get it that she's doing all this for her sister. It was her sister who killed ballu right? Hope rk helps her kill all her enemies and they unite and also save her sister. So u've reached up to the prolugue part. Waiting for the next update. This doctor police love story reminds me of theri movie. Hope rishbala get United and nothing happens to either of them . Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update :-D thank you for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
it was so Interesting Part.😊
Rk's Mother Condition is in Serious Condition,it was so sad.😭
Rk and Madhu Conversation was so Nice.😊
The way Madhu Consoled Rk was so Nice.😊
Why Madhu doing like this with Sultan?😭 I think She is Helpless.😭
I hope everything will be fine soon.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update dear Sumi..⭐️

awesomely written 👏

so Radhaji having cancer

and Madhu now is also taking care of her ..
she wants to tell Rk that she is here for him ❤️ but at the same time she also don't to ruin Rishab's life as she thinks she is bad for him

poor Madhu ..feeling so bad for her

and she is in the mission and had to trap Sultan for it ..
Sultan moron eying her lustfully 😡

but she stopped at right time and asked him to move out 👍🏼

ya you included prolouge here which is good to understand that scene properly..👍🏼

Rishbala moments ..aww want them to meet more .😳

.hope Rk knows about Madhu's mission

and she will be successful in her mission soon..😃

again you gave info about cancer ..and increase my knowledge ..😳

yup waiting for next part and also for other updates too..😉

thanks for pm dear.🤗



Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Soumiya awesome update, loved it.
Madhu is on mission but in the due course has fallen for RK but can't confess her feelings 'coz she thinks there is no future for them.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okay I havnt read the story! Lemme read the whole story and i will comment on it! Sorry dear was just busy with my own work!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update dear...So it looked like madhu is going to kill sultan but Rk came... I think she had kiled balraj too...what will be her past..Is mallick her father? Hope rk n madhu unite soon...her past shouldn't come in between...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update dear...
Hope radhaji gets well soon...
Loving the cute cute moments BTW rishbala...
Waiting for the next update dear to know more about madhu's secrets...hope there willnt be any rifts come BTW rishbala bcz of madhu's secrets...
All the best dear...

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