Rishbala FF: WANTED !- Chapter 8 updated on pg.81 (30/9/16) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

res...!! Omg souwmiya.. We are sailing on same boat...🤣 exam dancing on our head & we are here...!!🤣

Factu factu factu ! During Exam , our mind gets diverted..😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

unress...!!
Okk... Lets begins...😊
Firstly big hug & congo dear for ur fiirst story...👏 👏 Thank you aaniya !!
Now... I "wanted" to say you that u r going to be in a "wanted" list itseelfff if u dont updt the next part soon after this misterious & chilling updt...!! 🤣 🤣 Let me tell you something I would update it after a month due to my exams so may be the missing tag would be right for me !😊

I think its madhu madam who is in wanted list of both rk & sultan...🤣 yeah right baby ! But there is a lot more meaning to this title !
Umm... Madhu with sultan... Ewww...!! Even I am a sultan hater like you. Don't worry he can't even touch the shadow of madhu😆
I doubt is it really madhu sullu scene or u mixed some other scene & presenting it to us as madhu sullu scene... 🥱

That you have to find out dear 😳
& madhu seems evil... But see.. My username is also evil.. But am nott evil😈 so am sure madhu too wont be evil...😉 madhu and evilness goes hand in hand LOL, wait and watch😃
Ahhh... My handsome hero Rk❤️i hope he would peel off sullu's eyes for eyeing madhu & donate it to sullu's zombie kaka🤣
Awesome updt...!! Thanks for pm ⭐️

My pleasure aaniya !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AakifahZahraa

**dumbstruck**..

That's just awesome!
I never knew that you would write amazing stories sowmi. hats off! eagerly waiting for the next part.!

Glad that you found it awesome Aaku !!
Your first comment on my story ? Am blessed dear 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 4ever4love

very mysterious. Good luck.

Thanks for your feedback julie😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Glad you loved it pavi !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: poojitha96

interesting plot loved it tq for the pm

Thanks for the feedback buddy !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapnaf52

Hurrya ! one more new writer here ! But a half cooked writer LOL
& one more new story on rishbala
congrats sowmi,for story
write more on rishbala will definitely do ! Thanks 😊
Interesting start dear ,
excited for read,
waiting for update . sorry dear you have to wait for a month. My last exam is on 29th but will try to come here between !
update soon thanxs for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue.
very good first attempt.
what is Madhu's plan? Who is RK?
will be waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats Dear on your FIRST ever story and that too a crime thriller 🥳🥳🥳


Thankfully you saved me from getting a minor heart attack after reading the first seventeen lines of the prologue 😆😆 else I would have sued you for making me get a heart attack 🤣🤣🤣🤣 That's so great of Madz and more great of you my Dear , to stop the things that were going to happen between Madz and Sullu .


LMAO 🤣🤣🤣 Madz fooled Sullu Ullu by saying that she felt her parents presence ... I can't stop my laughter of Sullu getting fooled 🤣🤣

This is what is Love all about 😳😳 Even the mere presence of our loved can tell us so many things . Wait what was meant by Madz's line of "she knew that there was no happy future for them " ?? Why ?? Are they both agents or spies ??? Since you wrote that its a crime thriller that is why I was guessing Rishbala's profession 😆😆

Awww she broke my Rishu's heart by turning her back towards him 😭😭😭 Why is Madz ignoring RK inspite of this fact that they both love each other ?? I hope you reveal all the secrets soon 😳😳

So who is WANTED here ? Madz is wanted (by RK for love and marriage 😳😳) OR is it Sullu who is wanted by Rishbala ?? (I am guessing Sullu to be some criminal) 🤔🤔🤔


I hope you update the first part soon bcz you are WANTED in the forum to atleast update the 1st part 🤣🤣🤣


Girl ! you literally surprised me with your writing skills . Its too too too good . Why were you shying from writing since such a long time ?? No worries , better late than never 😳😳 Keep it up Dear and Keep writing more 👏👏👏


P.S. - Your title name is so catchy 😉😛


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unresed my comment on page 1 dear... Pls check it..

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