Rishbala FF: WANTED !- Chapter 8 updated on pg.81 (30/9/16) - Page 3

Originally posted by: vishti4eva

intriguing start

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Interesting prologue.

very good first attempt.

what is Madhu's plan? Who is RK?

will be waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: madhurish

Congrats dear for ur first ever story... 🥳

Aww... Thank u so much baby for dedicating this part to me... I m honoured... & so happy... See i m dancing...love u baby...🤗

Thank you akka ! Love you too akka😊

Coming to the update...

Mysterious update!👏

Just loved the way u have written it.. so professional! Is it ? Thank you. I can't believe that I could write a story ! I cant believe its ur first story...😲 But i m not too surprised bcos i know you have the potential to write good stories... U gave a very brilliant start... Amazing narration... 👏 thanks once again. Guess I wouldn't get bored of saying the same word again and again😆

I could guess even a single thing reading this prologue! May be u will shed some light to us in the next part... You can find it in the next part. But am trying to postpone the suspense element. Till then keep guessing...

Starting i was like ... What the hell is happening?? Sullu & madhu getting cozy..😲 No! Never! I "wanted" to shot sultan dead if he had laid his filthy hand on her... But... Nothing happened like that... So he escaped from me but not from Rk... He would kill him or killed him by now for nearing his madhu... I m placing my bet on Rk... That he is one notorious criminal...🤣

Don't worry akka sullu can't touch even madhu's shadow. Am a sultan hater. So I will take care of his life 😆😆

When she felt someone's presence... I was like is Rk stalking them or haunting them as a ghost... Lol! 😆 But she lied it was her parents & sullu fled away... 😆

Good job Madz! You fooled sullu... I m happy... I m happy...🤣

You will find a lot of fools in this story then...

Aww... She hurt my Rk.. Why?? When she loved him then whats stopping her?? 😕

Crime thriller? I have made my bet... But still asking...is Rk a criminal? A gangster? Goon? Or something like that... A man engaged in wrongful activities?? I guess he is the "wanted" one here... May be Madhu a spy or agent... Who wanted to bring him out of his underworld illicit business... But failed in her attempt & avoiding him now?😕 Whatever... I m all set to read the upcoming updates to know more... 😳 patience akka. Am just too happy that nobody could understand the prologue. I meant I didn't spill so much. Regarding their profession it would be difficult to find out 😃

Thanks for coming up with this interesting story baby...😃 I must thank you akka. If not for your motivation I wouldn't have posted it !

Good luck! Will be waiting for the next update.. No hurry... Do ur exams well & come back to post the next part..

Love u...😳 feeling is mutual😳😳

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

Congrats Dear on your FIRST ever story and that too a crime thriller 🥳🥳🥳

Thank you ishu !!

Thankfully you saved me from getting a minor heart attack after reading the first seventeen lines of the prologue 😆😆 else I would have sued you for making me get a heart attack 🤣 That's so great of Madz and more great of you my Dear , to stop the things that were going to happen between Madz and Sullu .

Revenge time baby ! Remember your prologue of race against time and planning a plan ? LOL was just joking 😉 seventeen lines ? That exactly you suffered the symptoms. Great !!

LMAO 🤣🤣🤣 Madz fooled Sullu Ullu by saying that she felt her parents presence ... I can't stop my laughter of Sullu getting fooled 🤣🤣

This is what is Love all about 😳😳 Even the mere presence of our loved can tell us so many things . Wait what was meant by Madz's line of "she knew that there was no happy future for them " ?? Why ?? Are they both agents or spies ??? Since you wrote that its a crime thriller that is why I was guessing Rishbala's profession 😆😆 then keep guessing ishu... Regarding knowing the presence of our loved one, that part was inspired from a Telugu movie, magadheera !

Awww she broke my Rishu's heart by turning her back towards him 😭😭😭 Why is Madz ignoring RK inspite of this fact that they both love each other ?? I hope you reveal all the secrets soon 😳😳

Dear ishu I don't think I could post the next part soon. I am flooded with exam till 29 may but will give a teaser... You know I would be panicking during exams, esp if it's a national level entrance exam. More than you all am interested to read your comments on the next part...

So who is WANTED here ? Madz is wanted (by RK for love and marriage 😳😳) OR is it Sullu who is wanted by Rishbala ?? (I am guessing Sullu to be some criminal) 🤔🤔🤔

Patience dear !!

I hope you update the first part soon bcz you are WANTED in the forum to atleast update the 1st part 🤣🤣🤣

Girl ! you literally surprised me with your writing skills . Its too too too good . Why were you shying from writing since such a long time ?? No worries , better late than never 😳😳 Keep it up Dear and Keep writing more 👏👏👏 thanks for the lovely feedback baby !😊

P.S. - Your title name is so catchy 😉😛

I decided the title after thinking for 2 days. You know the first impression should be the best impression !

Originally posted by: rishbalafan9

Congrats for your first story. ..thank you buddy !!

The plot seems interesting...thriller types intriguing to know more. ..Thanks for pm welcome dear ! Hope it would be as intriguing as you expect to be 😃