Rishbala SS: Do I still Love MR.Kundra? PART 7 UPDATED (Note on pg.4) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG back to back 5 super awesome updates ... Awesome start dear . So Madz became Ghajni I mean she lost her memory . Ohhh ofcourse I found everything good in my RK that is why I , Ishu - loves my RK so much hehehe ... Holy crap so this RK is really a jerk who has messed up things in past . I felt bad for Madz when he said all that - how he regrets falling in love with her and blah blah ... Uhhh Dips baby comm'on RK will only love Madz and not you , so why doesnt she gets this fact straight and let Rishbala live in peace ?? Ufff you dumbo RK you forced that kiss on Madz ... If that kiss was forced by RK on Ishu (that is me) then I wouldn't have slapped him , instead I would have loved it :):) Uff now from wher the hell Ria came ?? I thougt only Dips was there in this story to handle as a vamp but I guess RiPali are in a team .. Huhhh whattt , RK rapes Madz ??? Oh no plzzz dont make RK a rapist raping his own wife .. Its something that I really can't take in stories where a spouse abuses his own spouse ... Idk what you have planned to show but plz this rape thing is too much . If you want you can show physical or mental abuse but raping is really a very strong word and scene .. Without further story I can't say if you are actually showing that so I will wait for your story to proceed further .. The chapters were nice and I guess RK wants to repent and make evrything b/w them fine . Good going .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

OMG back to back 5 super awesome updates ... Awesome start dear . So Madz became Ghajni I mean she lost her memory . Ohhh ofcourse I found everything good in my RK that is why I , Ishu - loves my RK so much hehehe ... Holy crap so this RK is really a jerk who has messed up things in past . I felt bad for Madz when he said all that - how he regrets falling in love with her and blah blah ... Uhhh Dips baby comm'on RK will only love Madz and not you , so why doesnt she gets this fact straight and let Rishbala live in peace ?? Ufff you dumbo RK you forced that kiss on Madz ... If that kiss was forced by RK on Ishu (that is me) then I wouldn't have slapped him , instead I would have loved it :):) Uff now from wher the hell Ria came ?? I thougt only Dips was there in this story to handle as a vamp but I guess RiPali are in a team .. Huhhh whattt , RK rapes Madz ??? Oh no plzzz dont make RK a rapist raping his own wife .. Its something that I really can't take in stories where a spouse abuses his own spouse ... Idk what you have planned to show but plz this rape thing is too much . If you want you can show physical or mental abuse but raping is really a very strong word and scene .. Without further story I can't say if you are actually showing that so I will wait for your story to proceed further .. The chapters were nice and I guess RK wants to repent and make evrything b/w them fine . Good going .


Same Pinch...Even I like my RK only for his Psychoness...He is sooo Cute when he is in psyco mood...😳 And u know when I first started this story I thought of it to be on Ishika and Rishabh kundra (DVD) Actually...IS your name really Ishu? And Did I miss something in the editing?😕😕

IN this story...They are on a team till Rishbala separation afterwards they will start their cat fight for him😉😉😉 ( About that I was wondering if I could add a fourth member to the fight😉)


About that part there is actually no scene written like that...I just could'nt write like that about my RK...( But, it does happen though). That part was actually an experiment...A fellow Rishbalian suggested it...At first even I was against it but then I thought Why not scare the poor Readers😈

Anyway I won't leak much of it...But I assure you it is a U grade story with some kissing...

I hope you get the hint😉😉😉




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manna43

Welcome back ,dear.I read all the updates again. Quite amusing to see that rk runs after Madhu. Deepali never miss the chance to poison the brain either it is rk or Madhu. Rk is quite impatient. He has to wait for sometime n precap is more confusing.

Continue soon.


Thank you...

The precap is only a cliffhanger😃😃😃 But it is not a dream sequence nor a real one...It is an incomplete one...😉😉😉 I assure you you will be pulling of your hair with the next update...😈
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Superb updates loved it

Thank you berry much...😃 I have only added one extra part till now...Chapter 5 will try to update weekly...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

Awesome. Plss do continue. And do add me to ur pm list


Yeah sure...Please accept my Buddy request...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: farayan

Same Pinch...Even I like my RK only for his Psychoness...He is sooo Cute when he is in psyco mood...😳 And u know when I first started this story I thought of it to be on Ishika and Rishabh kundra (DVD) Actually...IS your name really Ishu? And Did I miss something in the editing?😕😕 Ohh dear same pinch , I guess everyone of us loves OUR RK very very much 😳😳 Yup that's true that he looks really cute when he is either behaving like a kiddo or when he is romantically psycho 😳😳😳Aww Ishika is also a nice name but I doubt if the fellow ppl of this forum would agree bcz of RishBALA 😆😆 Yes you can see my name Ishu written on my signature 😉


IN this story...They are on a team till Rishbala separation afterwards they will start their cat fight for him😉😉😉 ( About that I was wondering if I could add a fourth member to the fight😉)
No babes don't add another vamp . I guess Dips and Ria are more than enough for us 🤣🤣 Ahaan so cat fight b/w Ria and Dips 🤣🤣 that sounds quite hillarious


About that part there is actually no scene written like that...I just could'nt write like that about my RK...( But, it does happen though). That part was actually an experiment...A fellow Rishbalian suggested it...At first even I was against it but then I thought Why not scare the poor Readers😈

Anyway I won't leak much of it...But I assure you it is a U grade story with some kissing...

I hope you get the hint😉😉😉 I love you babes for this shocking yet sweet secret 😳😳 Ohh I am waiting for their kiss 😳😳


Thanks for actually relieving me from that precap 😛😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome updates. Im having exams tomorrow so will give long comments from tomorrow onwards
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I remembered the 1st part...but after that everything was blurred...Anyways...I re-read again and just loved it...So , Rishbala were happy but it was short lived offcourse due to stupid dumbass RK...So madhu has amnesia and dips as usual; has perfect timing to spoil everything...& that ria...I think dips set her up too...Arghhh...she is more irritating than dips...Waiting to see Rishbala to fall in love again...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I remembered oy first two chapters!! Thanks for continuing it buddy!! Thanks for the pm too!! Yaa rk should be lil patient to her but I like this fast and furious rk also!! Precap: it's shocking!! did I just read rape?? Eagerly waiting for the next part continue soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

Awesome updates. Im having exams tomorrow so will give long comments from tomorrow onwards

It is Okay...All the best for your exam...😊😊😊

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