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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update... I f**king love this rk... He is too hot & cool at the same time... If he likes a girl then he gets her with his charm... I was like... Man! No not in fligh too... But then the air hostess was bowled out... Lol
Finally he is here... I hoped rk will see madhu in the moon light & fall in love with her... You know like love at first sight...
After seven yrs he is back to india huh? So i guess he has his own sob story ... Lol.
Hehe... Rk's frnd knows him so well & he didnt want to stsy with him... If he had allowed him to stay with him then Rohan's family would have disowned him forever & kicked both rk & him out of the house... Haha...
Waiting for Rk & Madhu epic meet!

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 5 - Brilliant update... Loved it...
So finally the inevitable has happened... Rk madhu's meet... I was getting restless till they met..
Aww... Madhu is so weak hun... Physically & mentally too... If she goes in this rate she will soon die in heart attack... Lol.
Hehe... Rohan is gonner now... He got floored by looking at trish... Lol & now he wants to stay with rk... Kick him out of your house rk... He didnt let u stay at his place...remember that... Lol
So both the boys will route for their girls in the opposite house! Excited!
Thanks!
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: srksimran


hahaha oh yes dear how can I forget "Souwmiya"...LOL what a co - incidence😆...n no dear it's nothing like that Infact I am happy to make u happy..
N yes i will updte my index soon thanks for reminding me😊😆

Lol simran you are too sweet ! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you all for your lovely comments.😊 Here is the next part but before that I need to tell you all that this is my last update for now...I'll update all my stories after my exams are over...i.e. after 4th June...but may be if i feel like...like when I am bored from studying or so😆😆😆...i'll update...but can't promise😊 ...till then enjoy this part😉





Part 6

It was morning

Madhu gained consciousness...she looked around and found herself in Abhay's house. She harked back to the last night and remembering everything her heart started beating fast she sweated and breathed heavily...she couldn't believe that whether yesterday was a dream or it all happened in real with her...while she was occupied with so many questions in her mind...Someone knocked the door...she looked towards the door...and RK entered inside.

RK: Hi...I am sorry I know you must be angry...but I didn't have any other option...I don't know you...and last night you fell unconscious so I brought you here...I hope you won't eat me for this? (He said while coming inside)

Madhu was in shock it was not a dream but a reality he was again standing in front of her.

Madhu: Abhay (She said in a strangled voice)

RK: No...I am Rishabh

She died a thousand times listening to this. He was a carbon copy of Abhay so how could she believed...but she had to...she had to believe this cruel reality that he is not her Abhay but another man with his face...She shook her head in despair but suddenly something struck her mind and she stood up.

Madhu: How come you are here...I mean in this house? (She asked him...still hoping that he himself confesses that he is Abhay)

RK: Actually I live in New York...(And he started narrating his story to Madhu)

Madhu was totally shocked and covered her mouth while crying...and immediately ran away...as she couldn't take it more.

RK: Hey!! (He tried to stop her but she was gone)

Madhu quickly ran towards her house...and rang the bell impatiently...Trishna who was waiting for Madhu all night immediately opened the door.

Trishna: Madhu where were you...you told me...(she was all ready to scold her but seeing her in tears Trishna stopped and got more worried as why she is crying)...what happened Madhu why are you crying (She said carressing her face)

Madhu quickly hugged her only to get some comfort in her Didu's arms.

Trishna: What happened Madhu tell me please I am getting worried?? (She asked carressing her hair as Madhu was still crying)

Madhu broke the hug...She tried to Tell her but her voice got choked everytime. Trishna made her sit on the chair and made her drink water so that she calms down...Finally Madhu calmed down and gained some strength to tell Trishna the Truth...and she shared everything what happened with her last night and how she met RK. Trishna was all confused...she wanted to believe Madhu but how could she believe her...what she said was far away from reality.

Trishna: Madhu may be he was someone else...may be your eyes have decieved you (She tried her best to convince her that whom she saw was someone else)

Madhu: No Didu...why aren't you believing me...he lives right next to our house...I mean in Abhay's house...come I'll show you (She stood up and Made Trishna also stand by pulling her hand)

Trishna jerked off her hand and said

Trishna: Okay okay listen to me Madhu...we will go but not right now as you are getting late for your office and you can't take leave as you have just joined it so go and get ready we will go in the evening okay? (Trishna said it because she didn't wanted to create a scene at someone's house early in the morning plus she was also worried for Madhu...so she found this way to calm her down)

After an hour Madhu got ready. As she kept one step out of her house her gaze went to RK's house. She walked still looking at his house with the corner of her eye. RK was having a cup of coffee standing near the window with his mind still thinking about Madhu. Soon his gaze went on Madhu who was coming out of her house. He quickly kept his coffee on the table and took something and ran outside.

RK: Hey you!! (He called her)

Madhu turned around hearing a familiar voice. And her eyes were wide open in shock. RK smiled at her. She quickly turned her back towards him and started walkig fast trying her best to ignore him. On the other hand smile on RK's face faded away...he couldn't bare someone ignoring him and he followed her.

RK: Hey I am talking to you...Hey...Hey listen to me. (He tried calling her but she didn't listen to him at all...loosing his temper he grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him.) What's your problem I am calling you...and you are ignoring me why.

Madhu couldn't say a word...she was nervous, shocked and God knows what else but she was going through so many emotions that she couldn't understand what to do...she was frozen. RK saw this damsel standing in front of him fearing from his anger so he calmed down and said.

RK: Here take this...you left it in my house. (And he gave her her specs which she had left)

Madhu gathered some courage and took it from him...and wore it. RK looked at her and smiled. She looked so innocent but very unhappy. He didn't even come to know when he was completely staring at her while she was looking down...after few seconds he realised that he is staring at her and her jerked off his head.

RK: So we are neighbours? (He tried to cover up his act)

Madhu didn't say anything and quickly walked away from there. RK didn't understand what's up with her. He shrugged off and turned around only to find out a girl standing with eyes wide opened. He made a confusing face and looked at her from top to bottom...and realised that she is the same girl Rohan has fallen for. Yes it was Trishna.

RK: Hi (He said giving a weird smile)

Trishna gulped in...she couldnt believe her eyes.

Trishna: Madhu was right...you...you (She was unable to say anything further)

RK: Me what? (He asked him totally confused)

But Trishna ran away leaving him more confused. He jerked off his head and looked again towards Madhu who was gone far away from his sight. He again smiled and said

RK: "CHASHMISH" (And walked inside his house)

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RK was watching himself in the mirror. when suddenly his phone rang...he picked up..it was Rohan.

Rohan: Sup dude?

RK: Tell me one thing Ro...Do I look like Veerappan?? (Still looking himself in the mirror)

Rohan: Hahaha...what? (he chuckled)

RK: Ya I mean...I don't know...can you imagine...since morning everybody is running away from me...maybe it's because of the tanning what do you think?

Rohan: Hahaha...someone is running away from you...strange.

RK: Ya I know...and they were girls...and one of them is your dream girl.

Rohan: What??...really (he sounded more of happy)...Thank God!!

RK: For what??

Rohan: For not making her fall for you...somewhere I was scared what if she falls for you...anyway you have a magnetic effect on girls.

RK: Hahaha...but these two are different...hmmm strange (He gave a thoughtful look) But don't worry I am not at all interested in your love...I am worried about her.

Rohan: Her who??

RK: I don't know maybe she is her sister...the one we met last night.

Rohan: Oh the one who fainted...how is she now?

RK: She is fine...she is my neighbour.

Rohan: What a coincidence.

RK: Hmm...but there is something fishy...i don't know...she act's so weird.

Rohan: Hmm..but anyway...I called you up to tell you to get ready...we are going for playing golf...so get ready in half n hour...I'll pick you up.

RK: Cool...even I need a break.

And they both hung up.

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Madhu was lost in her own thoughts when Radhika came to her.

Radhika: Madhu where were you gone last night...do you have any idea that you left yor bag in the club itself...here take it...and don't be so careless again. (She returned her her bag)

Madhu: Thank you so much Radhika...It had all my ID card...debit card...I really owe this to you (She sighed in relief getting her bag back)

Radhika: No worries dear (She smiled back and left from there)

Madhu cross checked her ID and debit cards...And while checking something sturck to her mind.

Madhu: ID card??...I need to check his ID card or something that is a proof to his real identity. (she said to herself)

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Hope you all enjoyed this part...Do comment and hit the like button😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Yipeee FIRST 🥳🥳


Great start Babes 👏👏👏 Hmmm so finally hero brought his heroine to his ex lovers house 🤣🤣🤣 This is the first time I am seeing such a romantic triangle 🤣🤣🤣


Poor Madz she must have got a mini heart attack on seeing Abhay's look alike 😆😆😆 Ahhh at times your Madz irritates me with her waterworks 👎🏼😒 Agreed Abhay was her love but then crying all the time will not bring back Abhay from the clutches of death 😒 And as soon she starts realising this fact that her sadness is causing pain to Trishna the better it is bcz her grief over a dead person is just causing pains to living peoples i.e Trishu


Oh gosh even Trishna is in a state of shock seeing Abhay's look a like 😆😆😆 Poor RK . Becahara 😆😆 Tell him to use Fogg deo or Axe or Park Avenue so that Madz gets attracted to him and instead of running away from him, she just lands in his arms 🤣🤣🤣


ROFL Veerapan 🤣🤣🤣 No RK you are not veerapan but a sexy charmer 😆 but what to do , your future wife inspite of less costs of onionsi s eating so much of Bhaav 🤣🤣🤣


Hmm so finally Madz's brain has started working . So is she gonna trespass or enter as a neighbour into his house to search for proofs ??? 🤔🤔

It was a nice update and enjoyed reading it but plz reduce this wastage of H2O from Madz side . Does she even know that so many states of our country are facing water shortage and are having drought like condition and here your female protagonist is just wasting her natural H20 . 🤣🤣🤣 Tell her to save her natural H2O 🤣🤣🤣


Love you ❤️❤️

Edited by RagingBlaze - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Rese...
Unres...

Loved the update...😛
Nicely written...👏
Hehe... I pity this Rk.. Poor boy doubted his charm bcos those two beauties got shocked seeing him ... 😆
God! Kitna rothi hai yeh madhu?? If she starts her water works then she makes everyone cry.. Including the readers... 😆
Uff!! This girl is so deeply in love with abhay... Though rk is the look alike of Abhay i dont thing this girl will fall for him soon... It will be Rk who loves her & fights to win herheart...😳
All the best for ur exams dear...
Even i have my exams... So we all will come back with a bang after our exams... Bye!😳
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. Finally rk -Madhu met but Madhu took him for abhay n acts weirdly. Trish also run after seeing him .But rk asked rohan am I looked like veerapan.ha ..ha.ha.what next ?Have to wait long .No problem
Study hard n best of luck.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manna43

Nice update. Finally rk -Madhu met but Madhu took him for abhay n acts weirdly. Trish also run after seeing him .But rk asked rohan am I looked like veerapan.ha ..ha.ha.what next ?Have to wait long .No problem

Study hard n best of luck.



awww thank you dear for your comment and wishes😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Rk got conscious about his look hahaha 😆
Madhu hope r raised dat rk is abhay she will b heartbroken after knowing truth
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Posted: 9 years ago
gd part will miss ur updates all the best fr ur exams

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