Hold My Hand - RM SS part - 10 updated 03/11 page- 31

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Hey everyone actually This is a SS. Honestly I thought of writing this story even before I started writing Hum Hain Deewane Tere Deewane which is my first ever FF...but was a bit unsure whether you all will like this track or not...but anyway as now I have started please let me know do you want me to continue or not...thanks😊...this part is a small one as I have just started now and if you will like it I will update the further parts a bit longeršŸ˜‰


PART - 1 BELOW😊

PART - 2

PART - 3

PART - 4

PART - 5

PART - 6

PART - 7

Note: guys in this Abhay is PKYEK wala Abhay not that Abhay Kapoor...I mean he is a good guy not a bad one😊


Part 1

She was sitting on the rock near a beach. She pulled her hair strands to the back of her ear which were coming in front of her eyes due to strong blowing wind while she was reading something. Suddenly a drop fell on the page and she looked up her eyes were full of tears. She took the diary and brought closer to her chest and started crying loudly. She cried and cried and after few minutes she said "Please please come back...Please" she stretched the last word...and after spending some time over there she stood up and walked back home.

A bell rang and her sister opened the door "Madhu...where were you...I was so worried...are you okay" she said. Madhu didn't utter a word and walked in like a dead soul and straight away went to her room. Trishna walked into her room and saw her lying on the bed pushing her face against a pillow and crying. Trishna quickly ran towards her and kept her hand on Madhu's shoulder and called out her name " Madhu" and Madhu quickly got up and hugged Trishna and said "Didu please please bring him back...I can't live like this Didu...I will die" Trishna broke the hug and tried to wipe Madhu's tears and said " Madhu please don't cry...look he is gone now...and you have to face this ugly truth" "Didu what will I do now...how will I live didu...didu please bring him back to me" she again hugged Trishna while crying loudly.

Few weeks back

"Madhu please don't go na" Abhay said while sitting on the bed and watching Madhu packing her stuff "Abhay you know na how Important this conference is tome...I want my article to get selected...and I am only going for four days not for lifetime" Madhu said while picking up her perfume and keeping it in the side pocket of her bag "Ya...but what if you loose me forever?" He said it while looking at Madhu with a serious expression. Madhu looked at him and said " Just stop it Abhay not again...I am sick of these stupid jokes of yours" He pulled her towards her and looked straight into her eyes and said "I am serious Madhu...there is a tumor inside my brain" Madhu's heart just skipped a beat...she didn't know what to say and was just looking at Abhay in shock when suddenly Abhay burst out laughing "Oh My God...I caught you again." Madhu who was till now shocked suddenly got angry seeing Abhay's act " Do you think it's funny" She asked while crossing her arms against her chest. "Yes it is..I mean just look at you" He said while holding his stomach and trying to control his laughter. Madhu zipped up her bag in anger while still looking at Abhay and Abhay noticed this and stopped laughing and went behind Madhu and hugged her and said "I am sorry" Madhu pushed away his hands and turned towards him and said "Every time you crack these kind of jokes and say sorry...you don't even realise how deep it hurts me...ok now tell me...what if one day you come to know that I am having cancer and. .." Suddenly Abhay stopped her by keeping his hand on her mouth and he said "No Madhu never ever say That" "See...do you realise now what I go through when you crack your stupid jokes?" Madhu said while removing his hand from her mouth "yes I do realise and I promise from now onwards I will never say something that hurts you" Madhu smiled and hugged him and he hugged her back and she said while tears rolled down her cheeks " Please never ever leave me...or else I will die without you" Abhay thought of something and started getting nervous when Suddenly Trishna entered the room without knocking " Hey Madhu Abhay..." And she saw both of them hugging each other...and they quickly broke their hug seeing Trishna.

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Rishkara thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear continue plz nice story.looks like abhay died ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start, Simran!
It looks like Abhay is no more...n Madhu is in grief...
Achha tell me something, whom should I imagine as Abhay??
Looking forward to reading the next part...
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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šŸ‘ v v nice pl...do continue...v touchy


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shit lost my 1st spot ... No worries atleast came 3rd LOL... Hmmm so it looks like a sad cum happy story . Sad bcz Abhay dies and Happy bcz our Hero RK will enter into the story and Madz's life to fill it with happiness ... BTW who is this Abhay as in that Abhay Kapoor or some one else named as Abhay with a different sirname ??? Do tell me about it ... The first chapter was very nice ... So I GUESS Abhay din't lie to Madhu about her cancer ??? He was really suffering from it but he dint wanted Madhu to cry ever so he lied to her saying that it was a prank .. Poor Madz and Abhay ... I hope RK enters soon into the story and tries to make Madz smile asap ... When will you update HHDTD ??? Update that story and this story ASAP ... I am loving this story and I am already in love with HHDTD ... Nice , emotional starting .. Good work Simmi ... Proud of your writings Baby !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@rishbala4eva @RagingBlaze guys imagine Abhay of PKYEK...not that Abhay Kapoor...Wait I'll update it in the post itself šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

Shit lost my 1st spot ... No worries atleast came 3rd LOL... Hmmm so it looks like a sad cum happy story . Sad bcz Abhay dies and Happy bcz our Hero RK will enter into the story and Madz's life to fill it with happiness ... BTW who is this Abhay as in that Abhay Kapoor or some one else named as Abhay with a different sirname ??? Do tell me about it ... The first chapter was very nice ... So I GUESS Abhay din't lie to Madhu about her cancer ??? He was really suffering from it but he dint wanted Madhu to cry ever so he lied to her saying that it was a prank .. Poor Madz and Abhay ... I hope RK enters soon into the story and tries to make Madz smile asap ... When will you update HHDTD ??? Update that story and this story ASAP ... I am loving this story and I am already in love with HHDTD ... Nice , emotional starting .. Good work Simmi ... Proud of your writings Baby !!!


ty...And I am a fan of your writings...hehehe...I am going to update HHDTD soon...and don't wory this time I won't update it at an odd timingšŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting track good start plz do continue waiting to read more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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^^ Hehehe ... Thank you for clearing that he isn't Abhay Kapoor .. Poor Abhay Raichand , you showed him dead (but he was a vampire so is he gonna come back ?? LOL just kidding) ... Yes do update both the stories ASAP and thanks in advance for not updating it at odd timing .. Love you .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start.
Glad that you mentioned its abhay from pyek and not abhay kapoor. Nevertheless we love rishbala and wouldn't like them to be paired with someone else. Hope to see to and madhu meet in upcoming parts.

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