WILL LOVE YOU TILL THE END M NEW FF Part-7,page-13,updated-4/04/2016 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Awesome!
Quite a different n intriguing start...D 1st update itself began with a proposal...
Waiting to read more...
Do update soon. 😛
Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Nice plot .👍🏼

I guess sumthin bad n big mu between RM is coming up.
cont soon dear👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part - 2


Madhu was busy thinking as how she should convince her father for a night stay at Trishna's place...when suddenly the bell rang...Malik opened the door...and it was Trishna


Trishna: Hello uncle!


Malik: Hello beta...come inside.


Madhu got confused as why is Trishna here...she thought that now she will not be able to go to the party as Trishna is already here and how will she be able to fake a story...but then Trsihna said



Trishna: Actually uncle I came here for asking you that can Madhu stay at my house only for today...actually uncle my parents are not here...plus we have a test tomorrow so I thought that I will get a company and we both will study together.


Malik: At your place...no no...you do one thing...you stay here...you both can study here.


Suddenly Padmini interrupted


Padmini: Oho Malik you know na they can't study here...See a function is going on near by...the music is so loud...they can't study here.


Malik: Ok Padminiji as you say


Madhu was delighted on hearing that...she quickly packed her stuff and left with Trishna to her house...they were on scooty when Madhu asked Trishna


Madhu: Tell me one thing Trishna...how did you come to know about this plan?


Trishna: RK Karan and me were on conference call...when RK told me about today's party...and asked Me to talk to your father...as he knew that you will not be able to do this...so I Came here.


Madhu: Thank you so much Trishna


Trishna: But I am upset with you Madhu...you didn't tell me about RK and you.


Madhu: I am sorry Trishna...actually you left so early today...he proposed me after you left and then when I Came home I was busy thinking how to convince papa.


Trishna: Chill Madhu it's fine...and btw I convinced your father because RK asked me to come as Karan is alone and only couples are allowed...so I did this for him(she winked) not for you.


Madhu and Trishna laughed on this and soon they reached at Trishna's house...they were busy discussing that what they should wear to the party...when suddenly the door bell rang...Trsihna opened the door and saw RK and Karan standing at the door ...they both were looking hot all groomed up...RK had a gift in his hand.


RK: Hey Trish...where is Madhu?


Madhu came outside


Madhu: Who is it Trishna... (she saw RK and Karan at the entrance)...hey you both...how come you are here?


Trishna: First let them come in Madhu.


They both came inside and RK said.


RK: Well...we are here to pick you guys up to the club...I mean obviously I can't let you guys come alone...and there is one more reason for me coming here.


Madhu: (while crossing her hands)...and what is it?


RK: this..(he showed the gift to her)


Madhu: what's inside this?


RK: Well open it and see on your own.


Madhu opened the box...it was a dress.


Madhu: Wow RK this is so pretty.


RK: I know Madhu ...my choice is always good...come on now we are getting late wear it fast.


Madhu: What...is this for me?


RK: So what do you think jaan I'll be buying this for Karan?


Trishna looked at Karan and giggled...Karan too smiled looking at her...Trishna got all pink on seeing this...she looked down blushed.


RK: Come on guys get ready fast we are waiting outside ok.


Madhu: But RK I can't wear this...I mean I don't wear these kind of clothes.


RK: Not even for me Madhu?


Madhu: No...I can't


RK: (turned around and crossed his hands against his chest)fine then even I am not going.


Madhu: Oh God...why are you like this...why everytime you make me do what you want


RK didn't say anything


Madhu felt helpless and she said


Madhu: Fine I will wear this.


RK felt delighted and said


RK: I knew it...now go fast


Madhu and Trishna were getting ready...when Trishna said.


Trishna: Madhuuu...Karan smiled looking at me...Omg...I can't believe that.


Madhu: Wow Trishna...hmmm may be he likes you( she winked at her while wearing her bracelet)


Trishna: I wish...!( she crossed her fingers)


******************


RK and Karan were waiting outside


RK: Don't know why these girls take so much time in getting ready.?( he was kneeling his back on the car and was busy swiping his mobiles screen)


Karan: RK...she is getting ready only for you...and she is wearing what you like...so I Think taking much time is fine you know.


RK: Ya ya Guruji..( He joined his hands in front of Karan and bowed down in front of him)


Karan: May God bless you my child.( he laughed and raised his right hand as if he was blessing him)


Suddenly they heard something and looked towards the door...it was Madhu and Trishna locking the door.


They both were coming down...Madhu was continously pulling her dress down..to hide her legs...RK looked at Madhu...and he was all mesmerised with her beauty...no matter what she wear she looked beautiful in every outfit...


RK: Beautiful( he whispered)


Karan: Well now do you get what I was talking about?


RK didn't say anything he was completely lost in his Madhu he was clean bold by seeing this side of Madhu...it's not that she never wore western clothes in fact she regularly use to wear top and jeans to college but she looked even sexy in this dress which he gifted...RK was still staring at her when suddenly she snapped her finger in front of his eyes...and RK came out of his trance.


Madhu: Hey...what happened?


RK: You look beautiful Madhu.( automatically these words came out from his mouth)


Madhu: Thanks RK...but this dress( suddenly RK said)


RK: You look so beautiful in this dress Madhu...wait wait correction...actually this dress looks beautiful on you...and now stop pulling your dress like this you have already made it 12 inches longer by continously pulling it.


Madhu: But this dress is too short.


RK: No Madhu it's perfect( he leaned towards her and whispered in her ears)...What I am thinking is...let Trishna and Karan go to the party...we will celebrate our own party...who do you say?


Madhu: Shut up RK( she said it while blushing)


Trishna: Now if you guys are done shall we leave?


RK: Look who's talking...Trishna Madame...you both took 10 hours to get ready and now when I want to talk to my gf...you are finding it a time waste.


Four of them laughed on this and they soon left for the party.


*******************


At the club


Sultan and Dips were sitting at the bar and were having their drinks.


Dips: Where is RK...he invited us and he is only late for his party.


Sultan: Dips...let me remind you this party is for Madhu...and you are now RK's ex and only his friend...so stop behaving like you have full rights on him.


Dips: Sweetheart...I am his ex but he always listens to whatever I say...he still takes care of my needs...and that Madhu...she will soon get out of his life like other girls...but me I was and will remain his forever.


Sultan: Huh...what do you think I don't know...that what's cooking in your mind...you don't love him...you are only behind his money.


Dips: Well what's wrong in that sweetheart...you are getting a handsome man with a heavy bank balance what else do you want in life...and even I will see till when that stupid bitch will stay in RK's life...someday she will have to go from his life you know.( she drank whole shot of vodka in one go)


Sultan: Well I don't think that's going to happen.


Dips: What do you mean?


Sultan: Look there...( he asked her to look towards RK and Madhu who had just arrived.)


Dips turned around and felt jealous in seeing RK and Madhu together.


Please like and comment..Thanks



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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Awesome update,
loved it
and in this story also deepali is not good looks like she may create MU's b/w RM

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for ur pm . awesome update.
I have a feeling that bcos of dips rk and madhu gonna separate😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
nice update...but still not understanding how can rk fall for madhu just like that...u see after reading so many ffs of our rishabala...but still waiting to see whats next ...thank u...v much


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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
hey awesome update. loved rk madhu scenes n rk's stubburness. now dips is upto something. hope rk figures it out soon. waiting for the next part. thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
hii..firstly tnx 4 pm..secndly amazing updt..nw am getting a tid-bits of this story..rk & madhu is lyk teenage luv birds singing luv is in the air😆& dipu darling a crocodile keeping big bad eyes on rk & money😆& i thnk rishbala'll hv trust+mu issue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update.
God I hate that dipali bitch. Yuck
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Awesome update, loved it, waiting to know what happens in the party, hope Dipali is not upto something.

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