Rishbala SS: Lovefools Chap6 Updated (Pg 16)

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harini

@harini06

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Amazingly written
thoroughly enjoyed it
u described their feelings so beautifully
loved the update

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Amazing chapter as always. So beautifully written.

Madhu clearly has feelings for RK but is too afraid to do anything about it. I mean I get it... she is getting married in matter of weeks... practically it's impossible for her to do anything about it.. still ... would love to see how RK will make her realize that they are meant to be together... this, in some ways, kind of reminds me of DDLJ! 😆 Really looking forward to reading more of this!!

And oh yeah, love the title! And so happy that you have another story in mind! Would love to read that whenever you will write it! 😳

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Unresed my comment on page.12

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silverfire

@silverfire

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Brilliant...just brilliant.

U have written both their feelings so beautifully. The attraction, the pain, the separation. My eyes were tearing up while reading this update. That's the impact.

Even I want him to show up before she leaves the island.

I hate that Rahul already.

So glad u have another story in ur mind.😛

Thanks!

Plz add me to ur PM list.

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Awesome update buddy. Loved it. Rishbala r passionate towards each other. Hope they unite soon. Waiting eagerly for the next update. Thanks a lot for the pm

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Awesome part.

Now they are back. I hope rk is fighting for his love.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Awesome update, loved it. The feelings of love are mutual between Rishbala, curious to know what happens next, please continue soon.

Would be happy if you could PM me.

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

perfect title "Lovefools". suits them right .

AWESOME update. Actually , both of them r helpless .
. poor guy has fallen madly n badly for her.
loved every bit of it. Feeling so bad for rishabh. I guess he wud b at d airport.
cont soon dear .👍🏼👏⭐️

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k.atrina75

@k.atrina75

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Wow.. You are a brilliant writer.. Beautifully written.. And all. The maldives' scenes as if played in front of eyes.. So effortless and yet so vivid..

The story is awesome.. And I wish Rishabh takes away this bride to be from this one hell of a show off..