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candle_light

@candle_light

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

nicely writtend 😊
waiting to read further ..

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

you had me scared with those first words about Divorce! Sadly the kids always have to suffer through that. A bitter part to put into someone's childhood.

But back to the story... very nice beginning. You have explained the reasons for RK's personality and loneliness very well.

Madhu's entry is like a breath of fresh air in to RK's dark life.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Congrats on the new story, both are poles apart and this is going to make their life interesting.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Please continue soon, waiting for the next update.

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karthika

@jerrenkarthi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

nice starting waitig for the next update

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BEEVI

@bevi-najim

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

wow its sound like melody song excellent start

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi
Superb start
Cont soon

thanks. ya, i'll continue soon

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

@heemasomani -thanks dear. glad u like it.

@leena45678 - thanks. ya its a simple love story. even i love rain. sure . i'll update soon.

@rishbala4eva - thank you so much for your comments from the beginning of all my stories. even you're an awesome reader. i'll update this one soon. other ones i need to redo the chapters becoz of my cozins i lost y updates. i'll do that too. ur welcome.

@nithunavi -thanks dear. this one will be surely different. promise. ur welcome

@rima4ever - hey. thanks.

@sanju1205 - thanks dear. will update soon.

@mahimesha - thank u so much dear

@Amrtina- thanks and i'll cont soon

@vivian.drashti - thanks dear. but actually madhu has not yet seen rk. only heard.

@Anntempleton - thanks dear.

@silverfire - thank u so much buddy. and thank u for being an amazing reader. ur welcome.

@lathaprasad - thank you

@4ever4love - that was the exact plan😆. i know. it affects kids the most. love my parents for not fighting😊😊. thank you. it is the theme of the story.

@ananya2010 - thank u so much dear. ur welcome.

@jarrenkarthi - hey dude. first of all thanks for joining my fb page. thanks and i'll update soon.

@bevi- najim - thank you. i think it will be like one. and promise you no villains.

@.Tanmaya- thanks dude

Edited by madhumeandyou - 9 years ago