Rishbala ff OM SHANTHI OM- chapters 6 updated page 20

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ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Short and sweet update, love at first sight for both of them.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Eagerly waiting to read the next update.

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Mikolingam

@Mikolingam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

What a wonderful imagination story and abeautiful love story. I am speechless so well written the attraction is really awesome. The vampire sense is so strong he can feel that the girl his . Awesome dear awesome just waiting what will their first words to each other please continue am really waiting for the next update

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RAONE8

@RAONE8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

awesome story😳

lovely plot

glad that geet got to complete her studies..

now she got d chance to meet her mr.mylove

loved their 1st meeting

eagerly waiting to read more

cont soon

n plz do PM me when u update next

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Amazing story
Loved abhay n geet first meeting n how they could feel eachother presence
Loved abhay jeh n mukkund friendship

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sandy

@farayan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

read all the chapters in one go, and I'm loving it... I can't believe that you made piya your vamp, so is it gonna be maaya???
you know maan and piya'???

nice story line but pls be a bit quick the story is going quite slow...