Rishbala ff OM SHANTHI OM- chapters 6 updated page 20 - Page 2

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thank you all for your comments. i will apload it within few weeks.
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really good start dear!!! continue soon!!!
Congrats for ur First story!!!
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plot seem interesting ...😃
waiting for update 😃
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congo on new story
welcome to the forum
interesting concept
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plot seem interesting ...Big smile waiting for update ... 😊
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Love it... Please do share...
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Nice dear pls do continue whn u get tym
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First of all Congo on your new story babes 🥳🥳

OK so the character sketch is looking good .

Abhay as usual a vampire 🤣 but Geet is his love 😲😲 So first time an unusual pairing of Abheet rather than Abhiya or Maneet . Quite interesting 👏👏

Alright so Maan and Geet both are dead as in one dies out of accident and other one is killed and reason is unknown that means someone has killed both of them . OK I am waiting for the story to unfold now ...

OK so Rishbla are the reincarnation of Abheet . Not bad 😛😛 .. Lets see how you have planned the future chappys . 😳😳

Nice concept of reincarnation which mostly writers don't take but you have taken it so I am quite excited to know what is Rishbala revenging for and how and how they will meet and story starts . 😳😳

Update soon 😛😛

TC 😛

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Welcome to the Forum Meriliah, agree with you.
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i really want to thank sudha di (madhurish) for helping me with this as im new in IF. thanks a lot di. this ff is dedicated to you. and all my friends who replied to my ff plot , thanks a lot guys.


Rishbala ff- OM SHANTHI OM

They were two different souls from two different worlds.

He was a damn handsome vampire from the dark world. She was a mesmerizingly beautiful traditional Indian girl.

But they were meant to be one. Even when some evil cruel souls separated them , their fate was written that

They were inseparable. Little did those cruel minds knew that they would be born again and in this birth he would be one in their world and he will win back his love forever and also finish his revenge. In this world he was a world popular superstar. A universal heartthrob on whom the girls would die upon , and whom boys worshipped. He was the son of the billionaire ex superstar Mohan Kundra and she was a bubbly young collage going girl and daughter of a small clerk and farmer Shamsher Mallik . She was his biggest fan. But she Didn't know why she was attracted to him more than any human being could. There was a huge difference between them but still they met , to complete their incomplete love story.

CHARACTER SKETCH

Past life:

Abhay Raichand

A 150 year old vampire studying in wester collage in Mumbai. He is a collage heartthrob but is never behind girls even though they die to be with him. But then finally

He falls for geet. A new student in collage.

Geet Choudary

A traditional Indian girl from motihari who joins wester collage to continue her education. A very good chatterbox but shy girl.She falls for abhay pretty soon .

Piya Jaiswal

Abhay's classmate who has been in love with him for a long time, known to everyone. She is good at heart but

Lives very lavishly to show off her wealth.

Maan Singh Khuranna

Geet's relative and a small buiseness man. He wants to marry geet but geet never accepted his proposal. His cousin naintara is in love with him and wants to marry him.

Siddarth Raichand; abhay's evil brother who hates him.(I really do not like siddarth karnick. and Sultan or in presise hate them. Really wanted to shower my anger on them but didn't know how. In this ff I will make them suffer like hell. this guy for ek tha raja ek thi rani and sultan for troubling rishbala)

Misha and Panchi ; piya's sisters and abhay's secret helpers.

Kabir Singh Rathore

Misha's friend who is in love with piya.

Jeh . abhay's friend

Chand Richand

A rich business magnet , father of sid and abhay

Haseena Raichand

Abhay's and sid's mom

Rantika choudary; geet's mother

Ranik choudary; geet's brother

Alina raize

Geet's best friend

Balraj Chowdary; geet's evil father who cares about nothing other than money. He can kill his own blood for money and fame . he is a rich movie producer and friend of superstar Mohan Kundra.

Mukund Dixit

Abhay's and also Rk's best friend

NEW CHARACTERS WILL BE INTRODUCED LATER

PRESENT GENERATION

Rishab Kundra

Son of the billionare ex superstar Mohan Kundra and a loving Radha Kundra. The arrogant superstar of the nation and hearthrob of millions of girls around the world. Well trained shooter , music and the best of an artist. Heis reincarnation of abhay

Madhubala Mallik;

A mesmarzingly beautiful bubbly girl . reincarnation of geet. Daughter of a maharashtian small farmer and clerk shamsher mallik and his wife padmini living in banglore. She is the last year student of ideal engineering collage banglore. A huge fan of rk and her only dream is to meet him atleast once in her life.

Bittu Sharma aka bittuji; rk's

Personal assistant ,friend ,family e.t.c

rk best friend from childhood shaurya khanna. Helps him in everything. He is an orphan so lives with rk's family. They love him and pamper him a lot.

MUKUND , BALRAJ, HASEENA, SIDDARTH AND RANIK ARE STILL CONTINUES IN THIS PART. HASEENA AND SID ARE STILL VAMPIRES WHO LOST THEIR POWERS SO THEY CAN BE KILLED BY ANY EVIL POWER.

Mohan Kundra; rk's dad. Ex superstar and a current billionaire business tycoon. Balraj's friend .

Radha Mohan Kundra

Vidyut Sharma

Asp of Maharashtra police and also a secret agent in defence ministry. He is one of rk' close friends.

Shamsher and padmini mallik

Madhu's parents.

Roma and Trishna ; rk's friends and works for him. Trishna and shaurya are in love.

Abhay Kapoor.;a film star. Son of mohan kundra's arch rival harshavardhan kapoor.

He and rk do not hate each other and there is a link between them.

leelawati and sweety; madhu's dumb chaachi and cousin.

Sunny; a very fun loving guy. His character is a surprise. Even though not a surprise but something.

Ria; madhu's friend and rk's crew member.

Kukku Bhatia; mohan kundra's step brother.

Sikandar Bhatia aka sikky. Kuku,s son

Rk hates the bhatias

Dipali Bhatia. Sikky,s wife . always trying to get rk's attention but rk hates her. She wants to get intimate with rk and marry him divorcing sikky which is never ever possible.

Sultan Chowdary;

Balraj's illegitimate son and gangster.


Edited by madhumeandyou - 9 years ago

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