RiMa OS - A Day In Kundra Family

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: madhurish
MISS. BABY CUTE INNOCENT NAIVE BURN THEM ALL... is that really u who wrote the story??😲😲
I m shit shocked... 😲😲 rubbing my eyes frantically & pinching my hand to make sure i read a hot ahem ahem os from YOU!!😲😲 i was in shock so i couldn't comment earlier as i took my time to come to terms... Oh god... Roch & I didnt even train u to write exotic stuffs but u have excelled in it which means u know all...😲😲 oh good god... U r not a baby... Well, u r a baby like arjun who could see all while he was in her mommy's tummy..😲😲

Okay... I loved the os...👏 As u know i love romantic stuffs... ☺️

Hmm... Arjun will be a celibate i guess when he grew up...😆

Hayee... Angel is a darling... I m sure she is the reason for that "mean mouthed" arjun to be on her mommy's tummy by encouraging her parents to bath together before too...🤣

When arjun said them to stop as he cant tell further abt their cozy shower to his reader... I was screaming... U shut ur mouth kiddo...😡 U r just two months... U didnt even got your full human form but u r seeing all this & shamelesslu narrating so far & now feeling shy or disgusted... & i was calling angel to narrate the rest of the story... As i know "a night in kundra mansion" will be more blushy blushy...☺️

Well, really enjoyed reading this cute sweet sexy story...😛

Do write more dear...😳

OMG so much of compliments for me 🤣🤣 Don't get shocked dear even though you and Roch haven't trained me in writing such erotic stuffs but then later on I realized as a writer you need o use every aspect in your story .

So you don't need to be so flabbergasted 🤣 bcz I am like RK - always expect the unexpected from me 😈😈

Yes Angle is indeed a darling bcz hadn't it been Angel then how come my readers would have got some ahem *ahem moments* ☺️ Oh comm'on don't get angry on that poor Arjun bcz he is just 2 months old that too in his Mommy's womb 🤣🤣 By the time he is of RK's age he is going to be as good in romance as his father 🤣

Ahaaan so you want " a night in Kundra mansion" ☺️😈

I am glad that you liked the OS very much . TC and God bless you 😳

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi
Haha this was one awesome os
Loved it dear

Thanks a lot Dear . 😳

I am glad that you enjoyed reading it 😛

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: silverfire
Hahahaha...a hilarious OS.😛
Thus is one crazy family for sure.
Angel wants mommy to give daddy a bath😉 n arjun is pissed off with that. Can't blame the boy.😃

Thank u so much for this awesome OS.

LOL . Thanks a lot Dear 😛

Yes its indeed a very crazy family 🤣🤣

I din't knew you are feeling pity for Arjun 😆 Glad someone feels his heart out at Arjun. I am glad that you liked the OS . TC 😳

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri
Awesome OS

Thanks dear 😳

I am glad that you liked the OS 😛

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Hey it was different...& Hilarious !! LOL 😆😆

🤣 I am glad that you liked the OS . Thanks a lot Dear 😳

TC 😛

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: lovermg
Awesome os
Like it

Thanks a lot Dear 😛

I am happy that you enjoyed reading it 😳 TC

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -Roch-
OMG Ishu what a story <3 I read it twice ;) Finally you wrote some steamy ;) They way story flows is extremely cute! With the point of view of Arjun, the youngest Kundra who is still a 2 months old embryo in his mommy's womb! <3 He already knows about his family members. The introduction to the family was super cute. So he calls her mommy 'Sexy' ;) of course she is sexy indeed. What a deadly combination! A sexy mom & a handsome & dashing dad. Indeed an awesome gene pool ;) lol Maya & Arjun are gonna be the coolest kids on earth <3
Daddy took Maya to park & both of got dirty with mud :P Madhu chided them! Aww Maya wanted to have a bath with her daddy ;) what a cute request! Arjun says his sister was stupid in requesting such a thing but nah! That request made their mommy to think about bathing with their daddy dearest together ;) *Ahem*

I guess I read the steamy shower scene twice! ;) Lol Ishu! You are good at writing those stuff! ;) <3 Now I would keep pestering you to write more ;) :P Madhu reminded of their baby boy who is inside her womb. Or this desperate daddy would hurt him with his uncontrollable desires ;) Lol but they did it safely & our little Kundra witnessed his parents romantic encounter ;) :P how he would have stayed when his parents were moaning each other's names with pleasure ;) :P Lol

This 'A day in Kundra Family' made my day ;) It was awesome! Very well written. Cuteness & romance all in one! <3

PS- I was expecting a scene like Maya banging on the bathroom door while her parents are indulged in their romantic encounter ;) lol That would be really embarrassing :P

PPS- Loved this to bits & pieces <3 Keep writing more!! Posted this via mobile so the comment looks messy & emo-less :P Hope you won't mind lol

Finally a long comment from you Miss Counso !

🤣🤣 You read that scene twice 😆 Yeah like RK - expect the unexpected from me 😈

You wished for a steamy scene and I gave you 😛

Yes Madz is indeed sexy 😉 And credit for those erotic scenes go to Angel bcz had she not said her parents to bath together then you guys wouldn't have got such pleasure in reading the OS 😉

Awww dear I am glad that "their day" made your day 😳😳

Enjoy reading more and TC 😛

God bless you 😳