Dhoka...Betrayal Rishbala SS epilogue pg56 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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THANKS FOR THE PM...CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
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My new Rishbala ss What does my heart desire?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/4360117/what-does-my-heart-desire-rishbala-ss-last-part-pg36

Dhoka...Betrayal Part 2




Madhu freshens up and comes out of the bathroom with wet hair.RK catches her from behind.She is shocked.RK laughs.
MADHU:RK?You?I got scared.
RK grins.
RK:Why are you scared when i'm here?I will not let anything bad happen to you.
She thinks:Now it's too late.I wish you had entered my life long ago.If you were there in my life I would'nt have fallen in the muddy water.
RK:Yesterday my dream came true.I was waiting to get you.I
just can't believe that now you are mine.Only mine.
You know what I felt when I saw you first?I felt that you are made for me.What did you feel when you saw me first?
Madhu is shy.

RK smiles:I know that you also felt the same.
Madhu thinks:RK is so loving.I don't deserve him.

He holds her hand and keeps it on her chest:You are
my luck.
Madhu feels uncomfortable and tries to get away from him.
RK:Madhu!What are you thinking?
MADHU:I was thinking whether i deserve you?
RK:No Madhu..we both deserve each other,because we
are made for each other.
I'm lucky to get you.So sometimes i doubt whether I deserve you.
Her face becomes dull.
She thinks:RK trusts and
respects me so much.If he comes to know the truth... I have to stay away from RK.If i go closer to him..no..no..that's cheating.I can't cheat him always.Poor guy.He loves me very much.But he is
not getting anything from his me.


Madhu brings bed coffee for RK.

RK:Thank you Madhu.
He sips the coffee.
RK:Did you drink coffee?

MADHU:No.
He extends his cup:Drink this.
Madhu smiles.She thinks:I have always dreamt of having such cure romantic moments with you.
But suddenly her mind tells:No Madhu..you have to control yourself.
MADHU:This is your coffee.Then how can I drink it?
RK:We will share it.
MADHU:I'm sorry,i don't like drinking from other's cup.

RK becomes dull.
MADHU:Please don't feel bad.
RK:It's ok.

Evening.
RK:Madhu,get ready.We have to go for
a party.
MADHU:Sorry RK.I'm not coming for the party.
RK:What are you telling?My friends arranged this party
for us.Please come with me Madhu.
MADHU:Ok,let me wear a saree.
RK:Thanks for coming with me.
RK sits there.Madhu takes the saree.
M:I have to wear saree.
RK:Ok..
MADHU:If you are here how can i change my saree?So can you please go out of this room?
RK is embarrassed by her unexpected request:Ok,I'm sorry.
RK goes out.
He thinks:Why do I feel that Madhu is
avoiding me?Is my feeling true?

Madhu comes in a grand black saree.RK can't
take his eyes off her.
RK:Madhu..you look really nice.
MADHU:Thank you..You also look nice.
RK is excited:Really?I look good today?
MADHU:Not only today.I have always felt that you are handsome.
RK is thrilled by her compliment.

Party...
A song is played.
One guy announces:We ask all the
couples especially the newly married couple RK and Madhu to
dance to the song.
RK smiles at Madhu.
MADHU:RK..my mind is not allowing me
to dance.
RK is shocked:Why?

MADHU:I'm not feeling well.
RK:What happened?We will go to a doctor.
MADHU:No need.I will be ok if I take rest.


Madhu's cell phone rings.It is Padmini:Madhu,how are you?
MADHU:Fine mama.
P:How is RK?
MADHU:Fine.How are you?
P:I'm fine.Madhu...keep RK happy.Don't give him the
chance to worry.He gave you a new life.

Madhu becomes upset:Now we are at a party.So bye mama.
P:Bye.

Madhu thinks:I should'nt make RK sad.He deserves to be happy.
She looks at RK.He looks sad. She smiles at him.He smiles.
MADHU:Now I'm ok.We will dance together.
RK is thrilled:Really?
MADHU:Ya.
RK leads her to the dance floor.Madhu and RK dance together.

'Kurbaan hua
Teri tishnagi mein yun

Kurbaan hua
Teri aashiqui mein yun

Bekhudi mein bekali mein
Bekasi mein hua

Tujhko har duaa di, aur dagaa bhi
Aur fanaa hua

Kurbaan huaaa...
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..
Ada pe...wafa pe...jafa pe

Kurbaan huaaa
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa...'{Kurbaan}


Madhu thinks:How can i become so intimate with RK while i know that it is cheating?

RK looks at Madhu. Seeing her dull face,his face becomes dull.
Some stylish girls are watching them dance.
One girl:What a breathtaking dance performance!So passionate.
Another girl:They both look hot together.
Another girl:RK's face expressions are superb.It suits the song very well.RK is so romantic with Madhu.Madhu is so lucky to get RK.

Madhu hears it and feels sad.

She thinks:RK is my luck.They are right.But RK is unlucky to get a wife like me who is betraying him every moment.
She moves away from him.He becomes dull.
RK thinks:Why do I feel that Madhu is keeping a distance
from me?
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Fantastic Update

Madhu even though now married she was suppose to be happy but her state of mind and her turmoil knowing that she will always be termed unfaithful has to be the worst feeling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Awesome update... But madhu loves rk but she maintains distance with him... I feel bad for both what the reason might be but both should deal nd be one...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Awesome update , poor rk why won't madhu say the truth and let rk decide what is the next move. Madhu is married she should either act like a wife or tell the truth
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Awesome update. Felling bad for rishbala
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Awsme update
Loved it


Madhu avoiding rishu
Poor rishu he's trying to keep her happy

Bt her ignorance was hurting


What is bothering madhu
Cnt wait

Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Nice update. You've managed to keep the suspense well😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Fantastic yet Sad Update

RK really cares and is concern about Madhu and she also sees him been sad so she decides that he deserves happiness and smiles at him at she believes she is cheating him her mother tells her to always keep RK happy as he gave her a new life
it is very difficult for Madhu to come to terms as she already believes that she is cheating him she cannot get to close or intimate with him
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
aaah..Madhu is ignoring RK...he is trying to make it up..
Feeling bad for my babies...

thanks for the Pm and update sweety

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