Chand chupa badal mein Rishbala SS Last Part pg54 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Something tells me this is going to be an interesting story and a beautiful love story. Awesome start pls continue good job
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
very nice story hope rishab will realize his true luv soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vow...nice start...👏 😊

However, am eager to know howcome Rishabh's Dad knows Piya is not RK's true love...😲
and when and how will Rk realize... 🤔

plsss continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
This story is going to be an interesting love triangle
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chand chupa badal mein... The moon hiding behind the clouds Part 2
Madhu:Rishu...don't be angry with your dad.He will be very upset now.He loves you very much.
Rishab:You are supporting my dad?Why is he against my love?He knows how much i love Piya.


MADHU:He will understand how much you love her.Give him some more time.One more year is left.Right?
RISHAB:Yes,one more year is left.I hope he will realize his mistake.Living a life without Piya for one year...oh!I miss her Madhu.

Madhu smiles slightly even though his words gave her pain.
She thinks:Piya is so lucky to be loved by Rishu.
MADHU:Rishu..you look very upset.Chill.Everything will be alright.
His face is dull.
MADHU:Let's go out for dinner to be fresh.

Rishab and Madhu go to a restaurant.Rishab looks upset.
MADHU:Rishu..i have ordered your favourite food.Atleast now be happy.Be happy about having your favourite food.
He smiles.
He keeps his hand on her hand.Her face blossoms like a flower.
RISHAB:If you were not my best friend i would not have been able to sit like this now.I would have gone crazy.
She smiles.
RISHAB:I was scared whether you will also leave me alone.
Madhu holds his hand.
MADHU:I will never leave you Rishu.Because you are my best friend.You remember..we used to fight a lot during our childhood days.But we used to get along with each other very well.Now also there is no change.
He smiles.

RISHAB:I'm lucky to get a best friend like you and a best girl friend like Piya.When Piya expressed her desire to do higher studies i did'nt agree..because i did'nt want Piya to be away from me even for a moment.We had a small argument.Others thought we are breaking up.But everyone was surprised to see us together at the party.

Rishab recalls...

Past...

Party...
Piya was dressed in a black and red dress.She looked so attractive that Rishab was bowled over by her beauty.He could not resist himself.He went towards her surprising everyone including Piya.Because everyone thought that they had a break up.
Piya could not believe it.
PIYA:Rishab?
RISHAB:Won't you dance with me?You hate me that much?
Piya became upset.
She holds his arm.
PIYRISHAB:Let us dance.
He smiled.
They both are dancing to the song
'Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hai
jaane kya bole man Dole sunke badan
dharkan banii zubaan..{Khamoshi}.

Rishab and Piya looked at each other while dancing.

PIYA:I was surprised when you invited me to dance with you.Because i thought you wanted to break up with me.
RISHAB:Breaking up with you?If so,i would not have told you not to leave India for studies.I want you to be with me always.
Piya is very happy to hear how much he loves her.

PIYA:Rishab...i'm sorry.I will not go anywhere.
RISHAB:No Piya.You must do your higher studies.Only for one year.Time will go very fast.

She was surprised:Rishab!
He smiled.She also smiled.

Present..
Rishab:I told Piya that time will move very fast.But it's moving slowly.
MADHU:Don't worry Rishu.Wait patiently for your love.
RISHAB:Yes.

Rishab and Madhu reach home.The calling bell rings.Madhu opens the door.That is Rishab's twin brother Abhay.
MADHU:Abhay!Come inside.
Abhay comes inside.
RISHAB:Abhay!How did you know that i'm here.
ABHAY:I saw you both in the car.So i guessed you are with Madhu.
RISHAB:How is the situation over there?
Abhay:Dad is sad.But he is still angry.
RISHAB:Dad is stubborn.
ABHAY:Did Piya contact you after reaching UK?
RISHAB:No.Once she gets the number she will contact me.
ABHAY:I'm leaving for UK for my job.
RISHAB:Really?That's good.
Abhay says in her mind:I'm sorry Rishab.I'm cheating you.I'm going to UK not only for my job.My main intention is to gain Piya's heart.I love your Piya and i want her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Nice concept dear ,friends to lovers ,
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Mind blowing update

Really enjoyed it
Excited for next
Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting. Here twin brothers. Glad u r mixing pkyek n mb characters .Now abhay is after piya n rishbala will be together. Thanks for pm however I read obsession already. Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
hey jasmine wonderful story dear.

read all part in one go it was an awesome start dear.

do update soon dear.

n thanks for d pm dear

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