Obsession-Rishbala Sulbala FF last part pg103 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear
rishab was hurt.
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Posted: 10 years ago
RK loves muskaan.Madhu love sultan and sultan love Madhu too.for ye Madhu-RK milenge kaise yr and u know people hating muskaan but I m happy that she is the only hope Jo story ko patri pe layegi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cannot understand how Rk and Madhu
are going to unite
Keeping them aside the update is awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
am confused now,it sees like muskaan and rk will end up together,am waiting eagerly for the next update now.please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very superb update !! Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely concept! i can't wait to see how this turns out!😉 PM me too please😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey awesome update sry forget to unreseserved on 3rd part but cnt hv word at that time. coz dnt know what is going on story. u hv told earlier that this is rishabala story but after seeing so far there is no chance of rishabala in coming future. sry I didn't want to say this here but don't like d way u portrayed subala story. rk is broken when muskan told her that she don't love him but love her madly n posseisive abt her n ll make her his only n on d other side madhu n sultan story is going as picture perfect couple. how can rishabala end up together when madhu is happy with sultan not to forget u made them married couple. n here everyone is enjoying there new life except one person that is rk. u hv written all d part beautifully no offence on it but how d story is turning didn't like it bit. u r marvelous n amazing writer n ll always remain my fav writer but this story so just can't imagine rishabala not in same frame. I wanted to say lot more thing but dnt want to create Amy scene here. sry if my word hurts but what is on my mind hv tell u. that's it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I know all my readers are upset with the present track of Sulbala wedding n Rishab's obsession 4 Muskaan.
Whether Madhu really luvs Sultan ?
Did Madhu marry Sultan purposefully?
Does Sultan luv Madhu?
Did Sulbala have suhaag raat?
Does Rishab really luv Muskaan or is he in luv with Madhu?
All these answers will be answered in chapter6.plz wait patiently till pt6.All I can say is Rishbala will be together always.I assure u all that rishbala will b 2gether soon.Maybe in the next update itself
I thank all of u 4 commenting on this FF

I thank Sydell a lot for the surprise banner she made for me.
Obsession Part 5

Muskaan is sitting at a park looking at a photograph.Rishab comes there.
He thinks:Muskaan was very uncomfortable with me at the party.Still i did'nt care for it.I have to apologize.
He goes near her.He is shocked to see her looking at Sultan's photograph.His eyes become red due to anger.He trembles and screams:Muskaan!
Muskaan is shocked:Rishab!
RISHAB:Are you not ashamed to keep loving your sister's husband?I have not seen a shameless girl like you.

She bursts into tears:I am sorry.I tried my best to forget Sultan.But I just can't help it.
RISHAB:You can't help it?But one thing you should understand.Sultan does'nt love you.He loves only Madhu.Madhu is made for Sultan.
Muskaan's mind tells:You are wrong Rishab.Madhu is not meant for Sultan.

RISHAB:This can't be tolerated.I was willing to forget everything and start a new life with you.But you are a girl who stilly loves your own brother in law.It is a sin Muskaan.I can't tolerate this.I can't marry a shameless girl who is after her own sister's brother.How can you cheat your own sister?How can you stoop so low?It' better to end this relationship.
Muskaan weeps.


M:What?

RISHAB:Yes,I mean it.

She got scareSultan:That will break so many hearts Rishab.If Sultan, Madhu and our parents come to know this,they will be shattered.

RISHAB:Why did'nt you think about this before falling in love with Sultan?

M:I told you Rishab.I did'nt fall in love with him purposefully.It just happened.

RISHAB:Ok.But why did'nt you try to forget him at least after his marriage with your own sister?

M:I tried...but...

RISHAB:Then why do you still keep Sultan's photograph with you?

Muskaan feels upset.She herself does'nt know why.She tears the photograph.

M:I have torn his photograph.

RISHAB:Just because you tore Sultan's photograph you can't be considered pure.Because you destroyed only the photograph,not your feelings for him.

M:Rishab...please try to understand...

RISHAB:If you have destroyed your dirty feelings for him along with this photograph.tell me do you love me?

Muskaan was pricked by his question.

M:Rishab...it's not easy to love a person so fast.

RISHAB:Ok.But will you love me after our marriage?Any hope for that?

Muskaan became weak.She is not able to give an answer.

RISHAB:No.Right?Because you yourself had admitted that you can't forget Sultan even though you can try to be a good wife.

Muskaan cries silently.Rishab feels pain.He pulls her towards him forcefully.
Rishab:But you understand one thing.You better try to replace Sultan by me in your heart.Means only Rishab Khundra should have place in your heart.
Muskaan is stunned.
Mus:What kind of attitide is this?
Rishab:This is Rishab Kundra's attitude.I told you..I need you at any cost.
Muskaan can't tolerate it anymore.
Mus:But it's not easy Rishab.You can't order me to love you.
He gets irritated:Is it?Then you are going to pay for it?You will face the consequences of hurting me.
She gets scared.
Rishab leaves.





Rishab meets Sultan and Madhu.
Rishab's face is dull.
SULTAN:What happened Rishab?
RISHAB:I..I broke up with Muskaan.
Sultan and Madhu laugh.
RISHAB:This time I am serious.
Sultan and Madhu become dull.
MADHU:Why?Why did you break up with her?
RISHAB:She is not like you think.She is not a good girl.
Madhu becomes angry:Stop it Rishab.I know my sister very well.She is a nice girl.
RISHAB:No,you don't know her.You don't know what goes in her mind.She does'nt love me.
They are shocked.
SULTAN:What?
RISHAB:He loves you bro.
They are shocked again.
SULTAN:What?You are misunderstanding her for sure.
Rishab:No bro.She herself admitted that she does'nt love me.She said she can't forget you.
Madhu can't believe it.
Muskaan enters the house thinking "If Rishab tells them the truth..no,i have to stop him".
Everyone stares at her.
Sultan shakes Muskaan's shoulders roughly staring at her.
SULTAN:Muskaan...Don't you love Rishab?Tell you silly girl.
Muskaan does'nt say anything.She is very upset.

SULTAN:I understand what your answer is from your face expression.Ok,do you love me?
All are shocked as they did'nt expect Sultan to ask this question to Muskaan.
She weeps.Madhu is shocked.
SULTAN gets irritated:I understand your answer.But you understand one thing.You have ditched my sweet brother for a person who does'nt love you.I don't love you Muskaan.
It wounds Muskaan's heart.Her tears flow down.


SULTAN:I love only Madhu.
Madhu is relieved.She looks at Sultan with a painful smile.Her eyes are wet.

Muskaan runs out crying.
Sultan:Rishab..don't worry.Muskaan is living in a dream world.She is a foolish teenager.She is just having infatuation towards me.When she understands how much you love her,she will start loving you.
Rishab does'nt become happy.
He thinks:That's impossible.I have lost all hopes today.
Rishab goes.

Sultan gets ready fo go for a meeting.He doesn't see Madhu around him. Sultan looks for Madhu.He finds her gloomy in the room.
SULTAN:Why are you looking upset?
MADHU:I got scared whether I will lose you.

SULTAN:What are you saying?Why did you even think like that?
MADHU:Muskaan loves you.If you also love her...
Sultan is shocked:How could you even think like that?I love only you.

Do you think I can love anyone other than you Madhu?

Madhu looks at him emotionally:I am sorry.
He rests her head on his chest.He caresses her softly.

Madhu meets Muskaan outside.
MADHU:What did I hear?Still you love Sultan?
Muskaan is silent.She can't face Madhu.
MADHU:Come on tell me.
Muskaan bursts into tears.
Madhu becomes upset.
MADHU:I knew that you love Sultan deeply.Still I got married to Sultan.Did I do a mistake by doing that?
M:No..never.It was not a mistake.Sultan loves you very much.Be happy with him.
MADHU:I thought you have started loving Rishab.
M:It's not easy to remove one's face from our mind.
MADHU:I know..but still..anyways..please don't make Rishab upset.He will take care of you.He is a very loving chap.
M:Yes,i will try my best to make him happy.I don't want you guys to be upset because of me.
Madhu smiles.

Muskaan enters Rishab's office room.
Rishab was surprised:Muskaan!
Mus:I came here to tell you that I will not hurt anyone. I can't promise you that within a few seconds i will start loving you.
She keeps her palm on his surprising him.
Mus:But I promise..I will not keep unnecessary thoughts in my minds.
Rishab is stunned.

Muskaan walks away.Sultan watches it with a smile.

Sultan enters Rishab's office room with a smile.

SULTAN:Rishab bhai...that means she has started feeling differently for you. I told you..Muskaan will understand your love.She is changing and I am sure that she will start loving you.
You are going to get your Muskaan.

Rishab's eyes glitter due to the new born hopes about his love life.

SULTAN:Make her happy.She will realize that with you she will be happy.
Rishab smiles.
Sultan rings up Madhu and tells her what happened in the office.
Madhu is very happy.

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jasmine...update is awsomm..! But from last update im getting confused and even more confused with this update...I can't understand wer this story is heading to...Rk loves musk that his obession is towards musk...not for madhu...and here madhu and Sullu are loving eachother deeply...and musk now agreed for giving chance to this relation and getting married with Rk...and one more I can't take this Sullu madhu intimacy and lovey dovey scenes...I thought Rk's obession wud be for madhu and madhu loves Rk but here except musk rest 3 r confusing me...now r u going to marry musk and Rk...common I can't take one more heartbreak...already Sullu madhu marriage screwed me...not anore...oh god until 2 more updates I
Cudnt come out from this confusion I think... :( plz do continue again day after tomorrow...thnx for update dear !! U r really fabulous !! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update finally truth is out

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