Obsession-Rishbala Sulbala FF last part pg103 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Thank you for the P M.

Ahh !! what is love without a little obsession. Sounds interesting.

Looking forward to it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Interesting concept... read all the three parts... nicely written 😊
though m a little worried now -- Madhu and Sultan and already married and Muskaan knew she loves Sultan... I don't think RK would marry Muskaan now... but then when would Madhu realize -- she seems to be happy with the marriage 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Interesting story. I did not watch madhubala, but kind of knew what was happening through SBS.
But ur story seems interesting and want to read it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Beautiful update..Rishab is heartbroken..and even Muskan..Loved it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
oh no sulbala already married and muskaan love sultan.waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
amazing part. liked it.
madhu n sultan are so much happy. finally marriage... they are in love.
rishab took muskan for date.
he told her about his feelings, but she said that she is in love with sultan. it was love at first sight.
feeling sad for rishab. he is so much heartbroken.
what will he do.
what will happen if it comes to know to other family members...
plz update next part soon dear.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I thank all of u 4 commenting on this FF

I thank Sydell a lot for the surprise banner she made for me.


Obsession Part 4

Rishab rings up Muskaan:Rishab speaking..
Mus:Rishab?You forgave me?
RISHAB:I want to meet you.We will talk later.
He cuts the phone.

Rishab and Muskaan meet each other.
Mus:Rishab!

Unexpectedly with anger he pulls her towards him.
RISHAB:You want to know whether I have forgiven you.Right?

Listen..I can't forgive you.I am going to reveal the truth to others.
Muskaan is shocked:What?
RISHAB:I am going to reveal it to Sultan and Madhu.I will tell them that you rejected me as you love Sultan.You will also come with me to tell them the truth.
Mus:No..
RISHAB:Why not?
Mus:Please Rishab..don't do that.Madhu should never know this.If Sultan comes to know this,their married life itself will be in danger.

Mus:Sultan and Madhu's married life will not be broken as their love is very strong.Madhu's love for Sultan is not fake like the love you faked to me before Sultan and Madhu's marriage.Others should know your true colour.
Mus:Rishab please..i told you.I did'nt do this intentionally.Love happens automatically.It's not an emotion which can be controlled.
RISHAB:Yes.Love is not an emotion which can be controlled.So I still love you.
She is shocked:Rishab!
He pulls her towards him rudely:But at the same time I hate you.Because you cheated on me.
He grabs her hand and walks to his house.
Mus:Rishab..please..
Her words fall on his dead ears.
They reach Rishab's house.Sultan and Madhu come.They smile at them.
SULTAN:Rishab and Muskaan..good thing that our parents are not here.She feels that her daughter in law should not enter this house before grahpravesh.
RISHAB:Daughter in law?Muskaan?How do you know that Muskaan will be her daughter in law?
Sultan and Madhu are confused.
SULTAN:What are you saying Rishab?
RISHAB:What if Muskaan rejects me before marriage?
Muskaan sweats due to tension.Sultan and Madhu are petrified.
MADHU:What is the matter?
RISHAB:There is a big problem between us.
Madhu is tense:What is the problem?
Muskaan is so tense that she can't even look at others.Rishab stares at her.


Slowly Rishab smiles and his smile turns to laughter.
RISHAB:I was just kidding.Just to scare you both.Today is fool's day.
Sultan and Madhu also laugh.
SULTAN:Fool's day..you really made us fools.Very funny.But stupid terrible joke.
Madhu:You really scared us.But we take it as a joke now.

Muskaan is relieved.
Rishab stares at Muskaan.She is scared.

Madhu and Muskaan are in Madhu's room.
MADHU:Is everything ok?
Mus:Don't worry.Everything is ok.
MADHU:Are you sure?
Mus:Yes.
MADHU:I really got scared when Rishab talked like that.When he said he was fooling us only i got relief.Still i fear.
Mus:Nothing to worry about.
Madhu smiles:I want you to be happy with Rishab.I am sure that Rishab will make you happy.

Muskaan smiles:Rishab loves me like crazy.

Madhu smiles.

Rishab is sitting outside.Muskaan goes near him.
Mus:Thanks.
for not telling them the truth.
Rishab stands up and goes near her.
RISHAB:Do you know why I did'nt tell them the truth?
She is silent. He caresses her face with his fingers.Muskaan is shocked as she never expected him to be soft so fast.His fingers go through her face slowly. She can't react.
RISHAB:Because I love you.I don't want to spoil your image.

Muskaan moves away.

RISHAB:Please Rishab...no...I told you..I don't like this.I don't love you.
Suddenly he bursts into tears.
RISHAB:Why don't you love me Muskaan?Am I that bad?
Muskaan feels sad.

Tears roll down her cheeks:No Rishab.You are really good.Your love is too much for me.I don't deserve your love.Because though you love me a lot,I love some one else.But I will try to be a good wife.But I can't forget Sultan. I am sorry Rishab.

Muskaan goes away leaving Rishab in tears.


Sultan,Madhu,Rishab and Muskaan go for a party.
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The song '
Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein mal ke dekhi hai maine subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love

Jhanke badalon ki jaali ke peechhe se
Kare chandani ye mujhko ittala
Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe hai chhupa chhupa hua
Ishq wala love

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love...'(Student Of The Year)


is going on.
Sultan and Madhu dance.



Madhu sees Muskaan and Rishab simply standing there.Madhu goes near Rishab:Hey..why you both are not dancing?Usually Muskaan loves dancing at parties.Today what happened?
Muskaan just smiles.
MADHU:Rishab..dance with my sister.
Rishab smiles.He goes near Muskaan.Muskaan looks at Rishab with discomfort.
He keeps his arms on her shoulder to dance.She is nervous.
He holds her hands tightly
and dances.





Madhu smiles seeing them dance.
MADHU:Sultan..I feel very happy seeing Muskaan with Rishab.
Sultan smiles:They are perfect for each other.
Madhu smiles:Yes,like we are perfect for each other.

Unknowingly Rishab goes closer to her.
Muskaan is uncomfortable while dancing with Rishab.Rishab understands that and he feels sad about that.

He removes his hand from her understanding her discomfort.

Muskaan was relieved.
Rishab goes to the washroom and cried.

RISHAB:What a fate God!
Muskaan goes there.Seeing her Rishab gets angry.
He goes near her and cups her face in his hands roughly.
R:You don't even want to dance with me.Right?Why are you so rude to me Muskaan?
She was upset and helpless.
R:Is it because you love Sultan?Then understand...you are only mine.
She is shocked:Rishab!
R:Yes Muskaan.From day onwards I'm madly in love with you.In other words I'm obsessed with you.

Mus:Rishab!
Her eyes are full of tears.He pushes her and goes away.She is upset.
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
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ohhh god rk is hurt really bad
please make my rk happy soon
N pictutes were perfect
Superb update
Edited by v.p.joshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Superb update
Pics r perfectvto the scenes
Feel bad for rk
Continue next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey jasmine...tq...tq..tq soo much for ur fast update dear...!! Wonderful update with exact suited pics but I thought Rk wud be obessesion with madhu but here u made me confused till I read another update...Rk is obsessed towards musk :)
Anyways plz update again day after tomorrow :)...thanx again for the request of update I made and u have given it in short time

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