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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: momi78

Yippeee!!! Finally Rishabh is here!!! That is all I could read through my teared up eyes ... the last line ... and all my hopes returned! Thank you for bringing him back. It was heart wrenching to read what Madhu was going through.

I have battered hopes so much in this story, I will have to work really hard on restoration😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashitha235

Oh madhu... she still didnt realize she loves Rishabh... u explained her turmoil, pain, her helplessness and her will to escape from that hell... hate everyone at the party...

I was sure RK will find her and come to rescue... i feel tony,his boss and karan cant do anything if RK takes madhu... coz tony was supposed to take madhu in the evening as per the contract but he took her early... may be RK can argue and threaten him for breach of contract... i know am thinking too much.. you might hav planned something else... but cant help with ur stories... it is so interesting that i keep thinking😊
Fab update... already started counting hours for ur next update... thnx for the pm😊


breach of contract LOL It's no legal contract honey, where will he sue him?😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nanor

that was a heartbreaking update..it pains to see her feeling helpless amidst all these lecherous bas***ds...she is consumed by thoughts of rishabh, fearing for her safety and remembering all the tender moments with rishabh..
thank god rishabh has come
looking forward to see what happens in next update


I don't think I did a good job, because i cannot even beging to imagine what she must be going through and how she is NOT having a nervous breakdown.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SwEeTpOiSOnN

Awesum update... Aww poor madhu feel do bad for her, u r a superb writer... Madhu emotions n feeling beautifully writen... So she wanted 2 escape wit manav... Hope rk kills dat karan for daring 2 touch his madhu... N i want madhu 2 run n hug RK infront ov every1:-))


that would be too filmy for even this story dear, which is already bordering on being a mindless bolywood flop flick😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twinklev20

Hey Teekay...

Today...when i saw the update was up for this story...😲...my heart had started beating fast.....and i was shivering when i clicked the link on computer......dreading what must have happened to Madhu after she left from RK's house...😔

Thanks for clarifying Madhu's emotions and Madhu's stand in initial part of story...😊...I was actually very upset with Madhu to have left RK like that without meeting him one last time...he deserved it...no matter how hard it would have been for each of them...🥺

So Madhu is planning escape from Tony along with Manav...but it wud not have been as easy as she thought...atleast i feel so...🤔

I feel disgusting about the men treating women in such a way at the party...😡..felt like killing them...😡 😡...especially that GM...😡.😡.😡 😡 😡

But was relieved when Rishabh reached...😊...hope he saves Madhu smartly...😊...hope that Karan n Rishabh dont end up in a fight...😲

whatever...but plsss update sooon...cant wait for next part anymore...
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Oh well. I did not want to write TWO separation/goodbye scenes you know, so i made her run early 😊
Men treat women like that a lot of time at a lot of places. Not just prostitutes.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: karamukku

Another brilliant update TK ... I am glad that Madhu have made plan to escape and is waiting for manav to finish what she has told him to do. I loved it. She has decided to save herself... She is trying to change her destiny by fighting against it. Bravo girl... Proud of her...I loved the way her thoughts are ruled by Rishab. And she herself admits that her body only belongs to him... Loved it. Hope RK don't misunderstand her as she was gracing Karan's cheek with a her hand and a plastered smile on her face, when she saw RK ... Can't wait to know his reaction ... Is his wounds bandaged? Please update soon...

Thanks for the pm... This time I didn't cry... But instead I was so angry at karan and the fools around him...and the rest of the time I was lost in madhu's feelings for rishab... Amazing talent you have TK ...


Good anger is better than tears.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Excellent update teekay ⭐️

We got Madhu's side of story here. She loves him and did not want to create more problems in his already complicated life. She did not want to make him feel helpless and miserable. Of course Madhu have no idea about what happend with Rishab in these 24 hours. So she simply left. But I am glad that Madhu ask Manav to be prepared for an escape. She Is planning to escape after 1 week time with new client. This is what i expect from Madhu.. so i am happy. I knew this is her plan teekay 😊Karan Mathur is Madhu's new client. Everyone is hating him, but what's his fault. He is doing what Rishab did in the beginning ( I am not advocating him anyways..). But I am glad that he is not using her to satisfy his new associates in india. I am surprised and scared that Karan is keeping her for himself. I simply want Karan to go back after one week with out creating more problems for RK. On second thoughts Karan is far more better than Sultan. I still hope that Sultan is not Tony's boss. Don't want to see him again.. he is dangerous. .

I felt really bad for Madhu in the party. I cried for her when she thought how can a call girl like her give it back to that creep for hitting on her. She have no right..na?? You amazingly put her thoughts there teekay. I hope her not hallucinating Rishab there, I dont want these two men fight in the party to get unwanted attention. I have a doubt to ask teekay.. Will Rishab accept Madhu the way she is? Will he accept her if she sleep with Karan?? Waiting for the next part dear. Pls update soon..


These days, you get what is in my head while writing a chapter better than anyone else. 👏 You totally get how my concoluted head words, you anticipate my suspense and twists and weird logic. So I really like you the best, because I dont have to explain anything. You can write my stories for me now. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rdave1

My body shook in anger as I read this chapter. I continuously clenched and unclenched my fists. It was so hard not to feel my skin scrawl as I was reading what was being done to Madhu. The vile old man who offered her money for a blow job and that bas***d Karan Mathur to whom women are something to be conquered and possessed. The only saving grace of this chapter was the last line. Hopefully Rishabh will ours and Madhu's saving grace.

Please update soon. Great update as always.


Anger is good. Anger is better than tears.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aan-rish


Ok, if I was RK.. I will accept her. I am not saying it just like that, RK himself was a married man. He have slept with his bit** of a wife. Atleast Madhu is not his wife. She is not even aware of his love for her. So It doesn't matter if she sleep with karan or not. I have seen in some stories , RK as a play boy who sleeps around with various women. All of us considered it as cool. But if Madhu do the same noone will accept her. According to me if RK can be accepted after sleeping with other women , then Madhu should also be accepted. Atleast she dont have any other option here..


For this Rishabh at least, it couldn't matter in the least if Madhu had ever slept with anyone else. More so, if it was against her will. Nothing can affect his love for her because his love is born out of a much purer place. That is why chapter 25 was such a crucial chapter of the story.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolashu

Awesome update :) What exactly happened between Tuesday evening to Wednesday evening? When did madhu see Karan's anger? too many questions.. Hope you will clarify in next part. Rishab finally found Madhu.. Wondering how that's gone go down with Karan.. Please update soon. Thanks for the PM


All the suspense is gradually winding down, all this shall be disclosed too😊

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