Rishbala TS: Fifty Shades of Kundra (Part 3, Pg. 17) 4/8/2015 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
My Goodness! What a ride!!๐Ÿ˜† Like I was being pumped up n down!โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿคฃ It was f**kingly breath-taking. really so good. How madhu took control in the round 2 to be equal with RK was astounding dear. Where u got such wonderful sex ideas woman??๐Ÿ˜‰ The whole bed scenario was pictured in my mind automatically as I went through the lines. Effortlessly I was like watching them! Mind-blowing.. The last part brought the sad past of their miserable wedding 1 but liked the idea of celebrating it. After all it was the phase through which they fell in love and came closer. If RK haven't married Madhu forcefully nothing would have happened..that day came prior to this heavenly night of love. it was all part of their love-hate relationship..๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thanks for PM n writing this marvelous erotica..๐Ÿ‘
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๐Ÿ˜† I had an erotic dream about Rishbala and it just had to be put down on paper. ๐Ÿ˜† It's pathetic but I actually dreamed up these two getting busy. Happy to hear that you were able to imagine them in action. ๐Ÿ˜ณ That was my goal. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰ Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: silverfire

OMG! That was hot.โ˜บ๏ธ

Even though I was prepared after reading ur teaser I never expected madhu will give him an oral.
Their conversion after that passionate love making was very cute. Where RK tells her she is more superior to him n madhu tells him she doesn't want to change anything in their history. That was very touching.
Truly a divine, magical couple, a jodi made by God n fixed in the heavens.
Thanks a lot for this TS.
Thanks for pm, di.


๐Ÿ˜† I had to do a lot of thinking whether to include Madhu giving RK a head. ๐Ÿ˜† Then I decided, it's 50 shades. Full on erotica is mandated. ๐Ÿ˜† I am glad their conversation at the end turned out to be a hit. That was unplanned and was added on last minute before I posted!
Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Very hot update, full of passion, romance. The convo at the last was beautiful, how R.K tells Madhu that he was a brute and she changed him and Madhu telling him that she does not want to change anything, was very touching.


Thank you! I am delighted that the conversation at the end has been well received because it was totally unplanned. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the pm
wonderful update
what a finish
loved the story


Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kawan

loved this super hot update...
madhu took control over RK and make him beg to her...

loved it


Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: muzikk93

Woah that was super hot๐Ÿ˜‰ thanks for such an entertaining update๐Ÿ˜ณ


Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: susan7

very hot update โ˜บ๏ธ

loved their convo
thanx a lot 4 this story & pm


Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

God..its so hot to read โ˜บ๏ธ..we all need cold showers after this update...

Tainer di ur just outstanding, being a writer I know how difficult it is to pen down such an intimate scene with emotions and love...aaah..ur amazing..

sad that this Hot hotty TS is completed...but greedy we...want more of this..

Thanks for the๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ TS di...ur outstanding


Aww! You're a sweetheart. ๐Ÿ˜ณ It was hard to write about some parts of the intimate scenes but the reaction from all of you readers have been well worth my efforts. Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

comment updated on page 21 ๐Ÿ˜‰


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rdave1

Naughty naughty RK. Taking the driver seat? Boy is asking for punishment not that he will mind. LOL

Brain Twin, it's hot sexy sweet; all things Rishbala. ๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you Brain Twin! You know the boy enjoys being punished by biwi. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Give him his wild cat wife and he will roll over to do her bidding. ๐Ÿ˜†

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