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Part 9

Karan took Madhu from that place and asked " Madhu, where is your concentration, i severely warn you, if you play like this, surely we are going to loss, and i have to answer all the people in the organization, as i am the one who suggested to select you for this match.What happen to your trust on yourself, whats happening madhu?" That is when reality hit madhu and she said sorry to karan and told " Will never let those things happen, I'll not make you feel regret for choosing me, saying so , she went to sneha and they both discussed with karan about the match. Rishab who happen to hear the convo between Karan and madhu, felt very sad for her, he blamed himself for this situation of madhu. His thoughts were disturbed by a voice. "Hey hero, where were you, i came to search you, the match gonna begin, come lets go back"said deepali. Rishab went with her and the match continued.

Int he first set, the rival team had upper hand and the second set was almost a draw , the third match will decide the winner of the match. Madhu said to herself " No, I will not turn towards him, i cannot let down Karan sir and sneha. I'll control myself". And after that madhu's full concentration was on the match, and rishab felt little hurt, that not even once, she turned towards him. And finally madhu and sneha won the match, Rohit and karan came jumping inside the tennis court and they four had a group hug and there were victory cheers from all side.

Madhu and sneha took enough photograph with the cup and went to place it in the sports room, And while returning, sneha pressed madhu's hand, as Rishab came in opposite direction, he came near them and shook hands with sneha first on their victory and when he was about to turn towards madhu, he found her missing, and sneha said " Sorry, karan sir was waiting for us, will meet you later" and she went. Rishab self thought " So you started to maintain distance😊, its nothing but good for your life, am a unlucky guy, doesn't want to give my unlucky nature to you, you are such a sweet girl, i pray to god that he doesn't allow you to taste the bitterness of defeat in your life🥱". Days passed by.

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Madhu's house

sneha : " Why have you not packed your luggage til now, have you forgot that today evening we are starting to our 5-days trip"
Madhu : " Am not in mood to enjoy, you all go and enjoy"
Sneha : " Have you gone mad, how can we enjoy without you"

Madhu phone rang and sneha picked up the call on seeing the caller name.

Sneha : "Sir, this girl is going mad day by day, i guess, she's want to skip this tour." and handed the phone to her.
Karan :" Madhu these are the unforgettable days in every one's life, pls don't spoil," and he continued " Be a good girl and start packing, we'll meet in the evening," Saying this he cut the call.

Sneha : "Madhu, i know whats your problem, Don't stress yourself, lead your life happily, accept what comes to your life and don't feel for the one that is not determined for you, its all fate, your worries cannot change anything, leave it, if its destined for you, surely you'll get back, if not, don't worry, live happily with whatever you get."

Madhu nodded her head and got up from her bed, padmini came with lunch for both the girls. After having lunch, they both packed madhu's luggage. Sneha left to her home, saying she'll come and pick up madhu in the evening"

Madhu get little relieved after spending time with sneha, she went to the living hall to watch TV. She watched TOM and JERRY, and was laughing with that. After an hour, she felt light-hearted and went back to her room, she took her mobile to check for message, and found one missed call from Rishab. Her heart skipped a beat seeing his name. she decided to call back and ask his reason to call and so she called him.

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After the tennis match, madhu completely started to ignore his presence, it hurted him, but he didn't expressed it. And today he heard Rohit telling his friends that this time he'll accompany with his friends, as madhu is not coming to tour. Rk felt sad, for madhu not joining this trip, so he decided to speak to her and ask her to come.


RK self thought "How will I start?, and where will I start?, how can I directly ask her to come to tour?, what will she reply?, will she consider my request?, or ignore me as-usual?". Lots of questions running in rishab's head. With that confused thoughts she dialed her number. The ring went till the end and there was no answer. Rishab just nodded his head and said "Expected " and he started home to pack his things.

RK's room was filled with dress and other items that need to be packed. He turned and found his room to be so clumsy with all clothes scattered here and there, that is when his phone rang and the voice on the phone pronounced " Mad-hu" . He was stunned at first, then he picked up and said "hello".

Madhu "I left my phone in my room, and was downstairs watching Tom and Jerry, and now find your number in missed call, did you call me "
Rishab " Still watching Tom and Jerry" and he laughed.
Madhu "Whats there in watching it, its my anytime fave show" and she continued " By the way you didn't tel me why you have called"
Rishab doesn't know what to reply, so he said " Sorry by mistake called you, i was packing my dress, have you finished packing" He indirectly asked her the question.
Madhu :" All done, waiting for Sneha to come and we'll start then"
Rishab: "Oh then fine, will meet at the evening"
Rishab felt happy that she's also coming and without knowing he asked her
Rishab : " I'll be going through your house, so if you want you can join me"

Madhu's eyes popped out on hearing this and she replied " Its OK, deepali will be waiting for you na, so you pick her up and I'll come with sneha" and saying this she kept the phone.

Rishab held the phone before him and said " Oh jealous, where will you go sweet-heart, I'll come and see you there"
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Part 10

At College Campus,

All students gathered near the main entrance and all were eager about their 5 days trip around Mumbai. Rishab was busy chatting with his friends, but he didn't stop stealing glances from madhu. And also, madhu was totally confused after his call, and mainly his offer to pick her up on his way to college, she didn't speak about this to sneha, as she was not very sure about anything. And both started to play hide and seek to each other, as it started with rishab. Rishab saw madhu sitting with sneha, but she didn't turned his side, so he just smirked and hid himself between students and watched madhu, madhu who turned her head found rishab missing and searched for him, suddenly he came out from the crowd and smiled at her. Madhu smiled sheepishly 😆and turned immediately. This continued for sometime, and then the students were asked to get into the bus to start their travel. First half of the seats were allotted for girls and second half for boys. Madhu got inside and kept her luggage and waited for sneha to come. Rishab entered with his luggage and he gradually moved slow near the seat where madhu was seated. Madhu's eyes widen in fear and she nodded a no😳. Rishab just winked at her and sat on the seat back to her, as it was the start of the second half.Madhu breathed in relief.Karan had already informed that he will be joining them late in the night


After traveling around 2 hours in the busy traffic, the students reached Kajrat,Karjat is a preferred spot for weekend holidays, picnics, river rafting, trekking, hiking, and mountain climbing. It is a favored destination during rainy season. so the students were asked to proceed to their rooms, two persons are asked to share a single room and were asked to assemble @ 9 for dinner. Madhu and sneha entered into a room numbered 1347 and rishab waited for them to enter, so as to get their room number and he happily went upstairs and entered in the room opposite to her room. Madhu and sneha freshen up and sneha was lying on the bed, madhu came out and was standing on the lobby, that is when she noted Rishab eying her from the opposite floor. Madhu bent her down and her cheeks started to become red in color, she again raised her head to look at him, when he waved his hand to her, she simply nodded her head, and she thought he might be friendly to her, but his next action, got her breathe struck in her throat, Rishab blew a flying kiss to her, madhu ran back into her room, without turning back.

Later, all students assembled for dinner, Madhu was very careful to stay away from rishab on sneha's presence,as she might not like this. Once when dinner was over, Rishab signaled her to check her mobile, so she did and found his message which read as follows :

" You are so cute, when you turn red, matching to your dress😊"

Madhu smiled at reading this message and she quickly put her mobile back to its place, and went back to sneha. When she reached sneha, again her mobile beeped and she took and found another message from rishab. " Waiting for you near the stairs" and she smiled herself and told sneha to leave as she want to have some water. Once when sneha is out of sight, madhu slowly started moving stairs, while checking others. When she was very close to stairs, she find rishab standing there with a single red rose, she became numb. Shocked was a very little word to explain madhu's place at that time, so she smiled at him and went near him and he returned back with a smile. When he opened his mouth to say her name, they heard another voice calling her name " MADHU!!!!".
They both turned together and found Karan standing there. Actually he didn't see Rishab standing there,so he came near madhu and held her hand and asked about sneha and rohit and took her away. Madhu's eyes were totally on rishab and rishab had traces of tears in his eyes😭.

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Part 11



Madhu, Sneha, Karan and their friends were chatting in her room, but madhu's concentration was not there, she remembered the sad face of rishab staring at her, when she was dragged by karan to her room. She wanted to meet him, but her friends will not let her go. She thought for sometime, and then she got up and said " Am feeling sick, i need some fresh air, so i'll just go around for sometime and come back" Sneha got up and said " I'll come with you madhu" , but madhu avoided her saying she was fine, and asked them to continue, and she went in search of Rishab, she checked in his room, and found it to be empty,and fianlly she came out of the hotel near the swimming pool, she just stopped hearing her name being called, she turned and found Rishab standing there. Madhu widened her eyes and said " Rishab, you are here, i went to search for you in your room" and rishab smiled hearing that she was searchinng for him, and she continued "Am sorry rishab, you were about to tel me something, but before that karan sir took me" she sighed. Rishab Continued " Its ok, madhu" and he bent his head down, when he heard madhu say " If you are free, can we talk now " and rishab smiled at her and guestered her to sit near him by the pool, she removed her sandals and sat and both felt the chillness of the water, they both acted like small children and put their leg forth and back into water, when rishab teased her saying " You are so small, that you are not able to touch the bottom of the pool" madhu moved forward and tried to touch the bottom of the pool, when she slipped and rishab held her and took her out of the pool. Madhu was almost drenched, both were laughing at each other, when it started to drizzle, Rishab held her hand and took her under the roof, so as to not get wet from the rain, but madhu shrugged his arms and went and played in the rain, he found her very beautiful like a 5 year old girl, who happily dances in the rain forgetting everything around her. He wished to join her and dance with her, that is when madhu found the rose floating in the pool, she came near rishab and asked " This is the one, which you bought for me, right" and he nodded,

madhu pouted and said " I need that" Rishab smiled and asked " What?" and she repeated " I want that pls pls pls" Rishab got into the pool and brought the rose to her and before he could say anything she took the rose and continue with her dancing.

After sometime, madhu wa very tired of dancing, so she came and sat near Rishab, who remained as a observer the whole time.Then he started " Madhu, you know why i maintained distance with you? Because am a unlucky guy, whomsoever the person may be, if i get closer with them, they will leave me, and i have enough of these, so i decided to stay away from you, but when i saw you that day getting scolding from karan, i decided to friendly with you again, so i came to congrajulate you, but you left there, and now again it happened with you. I don't deserve you, am unlucky guy madhu" and his face dropped down. Madhu held his hands and said " I Don't believe in luck, i just believe in what my heart says, and now it says that you must be a lucky charm" and they both laughed .

And after sometime, Madhu said " My friends might be searching me, can i " Rishab said " But on one condition, tomorrow you must come and meet me" she nodded and they both left.Both didn't slept that night properly, and madhu got cold due to rain and she didn't come down for
breakfast. When Rishab saw sneha coming alone, he decided to check madhu, and went to her room without anyone noticing. He opened the door and found madhu lying on the bed. He went near her and said " Madhu" she opened her eyes and she panicked what if anyone saw him at her room, she asked him to close the door immediatley, and then he find the pills lying near her bed and asked about it. She replied that she having cold and light fever,and she continued "Don't think that your luck made me sick, as i played in rain, i deserve this" Rishab smiled and sat on her bed and asked " How will you have breakfast, wait i'll bring it for you " and he got up , when the door opened , karan and sneha stood with food for madhu in one plate. All were shocked seeing each other.

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Part 12

There was utter silence at first, both Karan and Sneha didn't expect madhu to be with Rishab and also Rishab and Madhu didn't expect Karan and Sneha to enter the room at that time, Rishab nodded his head to madhu and was about to leave, when madhu said " Rishab wait" Karan was so much shocked with this behavior of madhu, but sneha was really very happy for her friend, and she understood,why her friend was on cloud nine, the previous night, when she came drenched fully. None of them opened their mouth and silence prevailed for some time, then it was karan who started to speak, and he said " Sneha, Madhu need to rest, so make her to take rest,we all can meet again for lunch, til that madhu will take rest" saying these he glared Rishab and left the place. Sneha smiled and made bed ready for madhu, whereas Rishab and Madhu had a small eye to eye conversation.And then Rishab left the place, when madhu came behind him and said " Don't take this serious and involve your luck with this and feel for that" Rishab smiled and nodded his head to her and replied back " Will be waiting for you" and he left. Madhu smiled and came inside. With a smile in her face, she went to bed.


Madhu woke up and found sneha sitting near her with her earphones, listening to songs, Madhu stretched her hands and yawned a little and took earphone from sneha's ear and she kept in her own ear and listened song wit her. Sneha took off the earphoned from their ears and said " You seemed to be in good mood? Is anything happening between you both" She laughed rasing her eyebrows, but madhu cut her short saying " If anything happens,surely i'll let you know, you are not only my friend, but more than that" saying this she hugged her and sneha was very happy to see madhu happy after so many days.

Madhu and sneha reached lunch hall, and found students gathered over there, sneha found Karan and waved her hand to him, and he started approaching them, and madhu's eyes were constantly searching for him, but he didn't find him anywhere, but she was sure that he'll meet her now recalling his words " Will be waiting for you" and suddenly she found someone held her by her waist from the back, and she turned immediately and found Rishab standing there, madhu immediately came out of his grip, and said "Rishab!!!" and he laughed, hearing her voice sneha turned back and saw Rishab standing there, so she said "Hi" to him and he replied back with a "Hi" and before they could speak anything more, karan reached there, both karan and Rishab passed an angry glare to each other, and with fake smile, they both shook hands and four of them sat on a table for lunch. All started to have lunch, and til finishing that only madhu and sneha were talking.

And then karan spoke, "Igatpuri, will be our next destination, and there will be only few hours of travelling. Igatpuri is a hill station, but it also has lakes, dams and forts. Mostly by evening we'll reach there and we'll go straight to the dam and then the fort and we wil rest for the day, and tomorrow morning we may go to see view points" Madhu and sneha were listening to them silently, whereas rishab paid no interest to him, once Karan took a leave from the place asking the firls to wait for him to come back, Rishab raised his voice " What is he upto?" Madhu shushed him, but sneha said " Come again" Madhu gave rishab a kick under the table and rishab managed something saying " How is he able to remember every small things?" Sneha returned with a plastered smile and left the place to get some water, when madhu said " Rishuuu, can't you keep quiet for some time, they are my friends" Rishab smiled saying " Love the way, you call my name" Madhu smiled and said " You know how to distract me from what am saying" and she was about to get up from the place, when her leg hit the table and she missed her plate, and all its content fell on rishab shirt, Rishab glared at her and madhu playfully took her hands to his shirt and drew with all left out and said " See, how i have designed your shirt" and rishab felt her very close and kept his eyes closed.
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Part 13

Finally their 5 days tour was over and all were ready to leave back to their home, both madhu and Rishab were happy about the time they spent with each other, since deepali was not there, Rishab completely spent his time either with madhu or with her thoughts, and he was very happy about it. Madhu was so worried that neither she or Rishab didn't speak out their heart, both know that they liked each other, but never confessed.

All the students got into train and took their respective seat, Sneha was continuously speaking to madhu, but her concentration was on some other thing, some other person in particular. Rishab who crossed madhu, just smiled and waved his hands to her.

After everyone got settled, Karan came back to meet madhu and sneha and also rohit joined them, but the usual joy in rohit's face was missing, he was so sad, and when asked about it, he said it was due to tiredness and left the place, and karan found it odd, but didn't raise his voice against him, though he thought to ask about it to him in person. Karan and sneha were talking continuously about how nice the tour was and about the places they have visited, and that is when Karan found madhu was physically present here, but her thoughts were some where, so he signaled sneha to stop and they all went to bed.

Next day morning, all stayed at home, and as it was sunday they all took rest. Rishab felt restless without seeing madhu, he want to see her or atleast talk to her, so he messaged her, but there was no reply from her, he even tried to call her, but her number was switched offf. So he remained silent for sometime.After few hours, Rishab again tried to call her, but again find it switched off, so he guessed there was something wrong with her, he called sneha, and she picked up the call after 3 rings.She picked up and asked "Rishab , what happen? Why you calling me?" and then rishab replied "I tried calling madhu, but her number was switched off" Sneha cut him off saying " Wait madhu is here with me, i'll give the phone to her" and then madhu spoke "Hey Rishab, my phone got repaired, so was not able to call you, thank god , you called me" and she continued "Rishab, if you are free, can you join us for the party to be held at my home" Rishab asked "Is there any spl reason for this party madhu" and she replied "Nothing a small success party from my dad to his partner, i would be happy if you join us" rishab protested "I don't know anyone there madhu, and you will be busy" but she cut him off saying " Rohit, sneha and karan sir will also be there,so you would not feel bored" then he replied " K, i will join, but not long, just for some time and that too for you" and he kept the phone.

Madhu was very happy and she was in her lala land singing and dancing with sneha, she told " sneha, you know what, today i'll tel Rishab about my feelings, and if he too feels the same, i'll tell about him to dad, so that they both can meet each other and will get to know about each other" Sneha replied "Acha baba, now its time to get ready, and they both started to madhu's house"

At madhus house

Malik got hold of madhu's hand " My daughter seems to be more happy today" She replied "Its because of my dad's success, as nothing is important to me than your happiness".

Malik turned towards padmini and told " Padmini, today Verma family coming home not only to attend the party, as i have mentioned before, they wanted to have a relationship with us, if everything goes well, we can inform everyone about it by today.

Padmini replied "Everything is in god's hands, lets hope for the best."

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Part 14

Malik went near his daughters and looking at them he said "My princess, your papa wants to tell you some thing about" and he was cut off by madhu saying " Vermas, or i must say, trish sasural" and trish blushed and said "Madhu chup", and Malik continued " So your mom told you both everything," and turning towards trish he said "I'll hand you over in the hands of a beautiful prince". Madhu slef thought "Even i hope to introduce the prince in my life to you papa" and they all smiled seeing each other. And happiness was all over their house.

And at evening, all arrangements for party were going in full swing, and madhu and trishna came down beautifully decked in their anarkalis, and 'greeted the guest who all arrived', both trish and madhu were waiting to meet the people who are gonna bring a big storm in their life. All the friends of Malik, trishna, padmini and madhu arrived, but madhu's eyes were constantly fixed on the door, waiting for someone, and as if knowing her thoughts, sneha and karan started to tease her and madhu's cheeks became red when they teased her with her rishab, and that is when he entered the hall, scanning all the places for his madhu, and finally he spotted her, madhu ran towards him,and introduced him to everyone present there,and this made rishab little embrassed, but he remained silent.

And then the vermas came in, first entered Amar Verma, followed by his wife Smriti Verma, and followed by two young men - Rahul Verma and his bestest friend Mithun Choudary, and the senior verma introduced them all to the crowd, and everyone shifted to the dance floor, Rahul advanced towards Trishna and forwarded his hand to dance, and trishna gave in her hand blushingly. Then when madhu was expecting Rishab to offer dance with her, there came another hand from behind, it was Mithun choudary, madhu doesn't know what she has to say, she turned towards her father, who smiled at her and nodded his head, allowing her to dance with him, madhu turned her gaze towards Rishab, who stood there turning other side slamming his hand against the wall in anger,a nd then sneha came to her rescue and she danced with Mithun, whereas Madhu ran behind rishab to convince him.

Then they all danced together, Trishna with Rahul, Sneha with Mithun, Madhu between Rishab and Karan, so as it will not raise any doubts, and folowed by rohit and other friends, whereas Mithun was contiuously eyeing Madhu, and he understood, that her full concentration was on Rishab, he immediately left the dance floor, followed by Rahul, leaving behind a shocked Trishna.

After 10 minutes

Rahul and Mithun come down the steps with Rahul convincing Mithun saying "I will do anything for you Mithun, you are my only friend, and i will not loose you at any cost, whether it may be trishna or madhu or anyone from my family, you are always my first preference, and they both joined the dance floor, Mithun turned towards Madhu and smiled evily thinking " You have to come back to me, thats your fate"
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Okay, here goes the rest of the story, as i have planned before

The vermas informed them that they want madhu to get married to Mithun, along with Trishna and Rahul, on hearing about how good business man Mithun is and about his family background, madhu's parents accept for this, as they have no issues, madhu was so adamant and she didn't agree for this marriage with the excuse of her studies, but Malik identifies about Madhu liking towards Rishab and he went and spoke to rishab and said that he was a hindrance in madhu life, Rishab completely break down and moved out, but madhu didn't agree to marriage.

So Vermas stopped trish marriage saying they want to have both the marriage together, madhu with a sad heart decided to clear the problem with help of Mithun. Mithun, who was cunning, planned a trap for madhu, he said her to leave this issue to him, and stay happy, while he wil solve her issues between her father and Rishab, saying this, he took madhu with him to US, where she could do her higher studies, and there was no news of Rishab.

It was 2 years now, Stil Mithun has not succeeded in winning madhu's heart, he tired to remove all things that was related to Rishab, and Madhu had no idea of all these, Sumithra choudary, Mithun's bhabhi is the only person to support madhu there, and Mithun meet Rishab in a business deal and they both were shocked learning abt each other presence, and soon madhu meet Rishab in a mall while going out with ankit, where Rishab mistook ankit as her son and he felt hurt how she moved on, finally sumitra comes into scene and explains both Rishab and madhu about how they were cheated,a nd finally they wil get united.

Sorry, if i have bored u with the story, this was what i have planned. Finally i have done my part.
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Read the whole story di it was superb
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Read the full story. Wow...
Superb story.
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