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Nice, the concept is nice.
The update was good, bt it had quite a lot of grammatical errors.
I guess, u should proof read it once b4 updating, this would help.
I hope u don't mind my suggestion.
It makes d update more readable n holds the reader's interest, if their r less no. Of errors, especially in sentence formations.
The update was good, bt it had quite a lot of grammatical errors.
I guess, u should proof read it once b4 updating, this would help.
I hope u don't mind my suggestion.
It makes d update more readable n holds the reader's interest, if their r less no. Of errors, especially in sentence formations.
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
