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RISHABAL OS: ETERNALLY YOURS!
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Banner credit goes to Piyu di! or you can say drashtifan1. Di Thanks a lot for creating such a Beautifull Banner!!! Love you!
Dedicating This to Vinu di for eagerly waiting for the os! Love you di! Dedicating this to Meghu or Abhiya4life for completing one year on IF and also to Piyu di for such an beautiful banner! Love You both! And Especially to Kavya di! Love di! Wherever you are be happy!🤗
Dear Diary,
Boo! Scared You right! Well I know I haven't like written something in you since ages right...But don't worry from today I'm like going to start writing regularly!!! Guess what Diary?! Today was My first day In college and it was horrible...To start with I woke very late but reached the College at time .Too Funny right! And then when I asked a girl named Dipali where was the 1ST PU class she just told me to go straight and take a left and when I did that I found myself going to the Boy's washroom but luckily I saw the board above before I could go in. I ran away from the place and then bumped into someone... And then when I look up to see him I just drowned in his chocolate brown eyes...Oh should I even say this He was one hell an Eye Candy!' But again I was taken back to my reality when he asked sorry and went away. After that I found my class and slowly a teacher came in and introduced himself and asked all of the students to introduce themselves...and when I told my name ... everyone started to laugh saying Madhubala what a filmy name! I just cursed all of them under my breath and sat down. The day was so damn boring with all the introduction of the teachers and their subjects! Oh now I am myself felling bored writing...Hope you don't mind diary! I will meet you tomorrow saying about my next worst day in college! Till then Bye! I hate to say you this Will Miss you!'
Writing this Madhu closed her diary and started screaming "Ma!Ma! I'm very hungry prepare something fast!" Padmini came into Madhu's room saying "Why are you screaming as if an earthquake has come! And Madhu don't you think that just ten minutes before you had an ice-cream?!" asked Padmini while raising her eyebrows. "Oh Muma don't you know I'm a big foodie I always eat every other ten minutes something or the other". Said Madhu winking at Padmini ."Oh God! What have I given birth to hun? She always keeps eating something or the other but she doesn't become fat. How is that possible" asked Padmini to the God while staring above. "Muma! Don't stare at the sealing because god isn't there! And I eat more but I don't put on weight because My Calories get burned fast!!! Simple!" told an enraged Madhu."Okay...Okay whatever! Come have dinner so that your calories get burned fast "said Padmini sarcastically to her daughter and went from her room. Well both mother and daughter love each other so much but they still act and fight like kids. Well that is what happens with every Mom and daughter. After having dinner Madhu slept.
Dear Diary,
As told I'm writing regularly to you! And you know what today was a very good day for me. Well not so good but still good! Today out of all my pathetic classmates I made a new friend Vinu. Well to say she is very sweet and a Cute girl. And you know what?! We both are so much alike!!! I am foodie even she is! She is talkative even I am No less than her! Well I just hope that we both be best friends like forever!!! You know what diary today when I was going to my class I suddenly bumped into someone and you like already know him na!? Yesterday only I told you right that I bumped into someone and guess what I bumped into him again!!! Yeah...Again! I was again lost in his Choclate Brown eyes when I saw him. Who could ever ignore him man! Then should I even tell you this I was again brought from my trance all because of that stupid bell! I ran away from that place and again I felt foolish of myself to run away!!! Okay now I think I should stop writing because I'm Hungry!!! Oh should I even say you this...I'm a foodie!!!
Okay Diary now Bye! Bye! Seeya soon and I Hate to tell you this Miss you!'
Madhu closed her Diary and went inside the kitchen to check what her Mom had done. She saw that her mom was still cooking so she went and back hugged her mom. "Muma! What are you preparing?!" asked Madhu. "Oh so Miss. Foodie came hun?" asked Padmini while smiling. "Yes Muma! Miss.Foodie came and she is very hungry! Should I even say you this? Now stop talking and prepare it fast so that I can hog on the food" said Madhu chuckling. "Okay baba will prepare it soon?"said Padmini."By the way Muma when will papa come?" asked Madhu very innocently. "He will come soon baby.Now please go to your room or else I will not be able to prepare the food soon and cannot hog on it!" said Padmini. "Okay Ma. Bye! Seeya.Waiting for the dinner!" said Madhu while running into her room. Soon they both had dinner and went to sleep. While sleeping "Muma..Muma you slept hun? " asked Madhu with her eyes closed. "Yes Miss.Foodie I slept" said Padmini. "No you didn't sleep! Muma I want to eat ice-cream!" said Madhu."God What should I do with you?! Go eat it's in the freezer" said Padmini and went back to her sleep. "Thanks Muma!" said Madhu happily and kissed Mom on her cheeks and ran into the kitchen.
Dear Diary,
Today was a damn good day you know I got t know his name. His name is Rishab Kundra! I was on cloud nine when I heard his name being told by one of his friend. Actually his friend called him as Rk and somehow I got to know his name. Actually he has a sweet name diary. Diary one more thing you know what I made one more friend Meghana! She is sweet, Cute and very formal and one more thing she is also foodie!!! Can you believe it?! Even I cannot! You know what I, Vinu and Meghana had an ice-cream party today.I wish we all remain Friends forever. I love them both so...so...much! You know one more thing I got to know that Vinu is his sister!!! Can you believe it diary?! Even I can't!! Today I saw Vinu talking with him and when I asked whom was she talking to and she replied that she wsa talking to her brother.Hearing this I was on the seventh heaven!!! No on the eighth heaven!!!
By the way I'm going now because it's boring writing and my hands are paining. After having a lot of ice-cream
So bye Diary! Seeya soon! I hate to say you this. Miss you!'
After writing Madhu closed her diary and started playing Candy Crush. Well like everyone she was also addicted to Candy Crush. Whenever she is free she plays that and now she is 400th level. Nobody could never beat Madhu in that.
After 3 months...
Dear Diary,
Guess what Today's day was really very terrible!!! And now I'm literally crying!!! Yes literally crying. You know what today when I was passing through the corridor I heard Rishab's Friends teasing him about a girl.I think he is in a relationship with someone.I don't know why but I'm crying I just don't know why is it piercing me a lot! I just don't know I'm still having a crush on him and it's been 3 months I'm writing about him to you. I haven't told Vinu or even Meghu about him. Well I can say it Meghu! But I'm scared to tell it to Vinu because she is his sister and I feel that if I tell it to her our friendship will be gone!!! Well I,Vinu and Meghu we all became BEST OF FRIENDS!!!these 3 months and I still don't understand why my mind is doing this to me?! My heart is telling me to tell them but my heart isn't allowing me! Wait a minute Diary!!! Why is it piercing me a lot when he is in a relationship with any girl or not?! Why?!! Wait a minute again Diary?! Is My crush towards Rishab turning into Love?!! Oh God!!! Now I'm very..very...confused! I should better tell it to Vinu and Meghu! Or else in no time My head will burst..then my stomach will burst!!! Wait again for a minute diary?! Why would my stomach burst hun? OMG!!! I forgot to have my snacks and My stomach is already growling!!!
Okay now bye Diary!!! Seeya soon and I still hate telling you this Miss you!'
Madhu closed her Diary and went out of her room and ran into the kitchen. Today her mom wasn't there as she is gone out and her mom prepared lunch Madhu already ate and now she has nothing left to eat. So she was thinking what to do and she doesn't even know to cok right!! So she searched into the cupboard and took out Magie noodles and she prepared that as she didn't know anything else than making Magie .After having a good feed for her stomach she started calling Meghu. "Meghu! Pick up the phone yaar!!!" said Madhu .But alas Meghu didn't pick up the phone and she started calling Vinu "Vinu yaar!!Now even you too pick up the phone damit!!!" and at last after a lot of hard work Vinu picked up the phone."What is it Madhu!?" asked Vinu in a sleepy tone."Vinu!!! How many times should I call you Meghu wasn't picking up the phone and even you too!"asked Madhu. "Madhu have you gone mad!!!?? Did you check your clock it's 12 in the midnight and you are calling me now?! Is everything alright Madhu?!" asked Vinu in a concerned tone. "Oh is it ! Sorry Vinu I didn't check the time. No nothing so important. You sleep now I will talk to you tomorrow" said Madhu and hanged up.
The next day Madhu got up early and reached the college soon and when she saw Vinu and Meghu. She went near them and pulled them to a corner and told "Guys! I want to talk something important to you" "Tell us Madhu" both of them told in unison. "Actually guys I have fallen in love with someone!" said Madhu "OMG! Madhu that's great !" said both of them again. "It's Rk or you can say Rishab Kundra...Vinu I'm sorry for loving your brother I didn't mean to"said Madhu in a regretfull tone. "Aww...Madhu I am so damn happy for you and you are like asking sorry...Very Bad!" said Vinu "Madhu I'm so happy that you are in love with Rishab!!!" exclaimed Meghu. "Thanks Meghu! But Vinu aren't like going to be angry on me for loving your brother and I thought this would affect our friendship and that is the readon I diidn't tell it to you so many days" said Madhu. "Are you freaking gone crazy Madhu?! Why would I do that! I am like so happy that you are in love with my brother and Don't you know Love just happens!!!' said Vinu. "Madhu don't you know Love is Blind!'and all" asked Meghu. "I know..I know guys..." said Madhu." Okay so it is decided that you are soon going to be my future sister-in-law and I'm so exicted for it!!!" exclaimed Vinu. "I'm also damn excited for you Madhu!" said Meghu.
Dear Diary,
This is like going to be the last time I'm going to write you!!! You might ask why right!!! Well to say I have already fallen in love with Rishab and when I told it to Meghu and Vinu they encouraged me!!! But you know what?! I truly know that Rishab wouldn't accept me. I just don't know why but I'm damn sure he isn't going to accept me!!!I don't know diary I have told Vinu and Meghu that I'm going to tell it to him soon but I know that I wouldn't. I have even told Vinu not to tell about me to Rishab.Well I will and will always love him! But still I don't have the courage to tell him as I think that he will make fun of me!!! Okay I think Diary I should right now as I'm getting emotional and I'm also crying actually I'm multitasking.
Bye! Bye! Diary!!! Miss You This probably the last time I'm going to write on you!!!
LOVE YOU!!!
Saying this Madhu closed her book and slept.
The next Madhu was in a hurry to go to college and was running . She suddenly bumped into someone."Sorry!" she muttered and was about to go when someone held her wrist.She turned up to see who it was and got the shock of her life. It was him...Rk...Rishab Kundra the Love of her life. She was again held by his chocolate brown eyes.She didn't know what kind of Magic he poses in his eyes ...everytime she looks into his eyes she will always be captivated by it. She was brought out of her trance when he softly called Madhu. "Madhu I'm sorry for pulling your wrist but if I don't tell you this today I would never be able to tell you this again.Madhu ...I...Love..you!!!" said Rk stammering a bit. Hearing those three magical words Madhu was on cloud nine...No...Cloud ten. She had never expected him to propose her at all! "Madhu you might be wondering How I fell in love with you right?! To tell you the truth I fell in love with you the moment I bumped into you! I was just captivated by these brown Hazel eyes like how I was captivated the first time ever.I just don't know how tell you this but whenever I used to see you I used to always be wondering how did a angel like you come on this earth! Well I know now you might be confused how come I fell in Love with you without even interacting right??!! I'm just going to say you that Love just happens!" I never wanted to be loved until I met you.I never experienced the feeling of Love until I might you! Though I have never ever talked to you I still fell in love with you! So Madhu will you be Mine Forever?! Will you be Eternally Mine' asked Rishab. "Yes Rishab I am Eternally Yours!' I don't know how to thank god for giving me you! And to tell you the truth I fell in love with you the first day ever I bumped on you!!! I Love You Rishab!" said Madhu and Rishab just pulled her for a hug! Everyone else cheered for them. From the corner of Madhu's eyes she could see both Vinu and Meghu showing thumbs up to her and winking at her.
[Diary's POV]
Phew...At last that Madhubala left me!!! I had been living in hell these whole three months! I know she writes well but still Nobody will understand the pain of A Diary!!! I hope that Madhubala and Rk whatever his name his be together forever and now should I even say this Sayonara Everyone!!! PS: I'm in a hurry to meet my Girlfriend!
The End
Vinu di and Meghu I hope you don't have any offence in including your name in the story.
PS: I know guys this a stupid piece of writing!!! Please do tolerate this with me!
If you like the story please do drop your likes and comments. If not then I will try my best next time!!!
Edited by Shriya.bk - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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RES 😆

*UNRES* 😲

So finally you posted this after keeping me wait for more than 48 hours! 🤣You know how much I was eager to read this. 😉 It's worth the wait sister! ❤️

OMG you made me RK's sister! 😲 *Rubs my eyes again* 🤣I know I can never be RK's lover in any story! 🥺Madhu belongs to him! I couldn't even flirt with him because he is my biological brother according to your story! 🥺 Lmao 🤣 but never mind! I'm so proud to be his one & only sister! 😎 & I'm so happy that Madhu is gonna be my future sister-in-law. 😳

Aww you made Madhu, Meg & me the best of friends! 🤗 We make a crazy trio! 🤣 & all of us are foodies! 🤣& Shriyu you have almost mentioned one of my key facts in Madhu. 😉You know what it is! 😆 Eating a whole lot but never gains weight! 🥺May be I'm so haaawt & my calories burn too fast! ☺️ LMAO 🤣

I loved the way you have written. The 'Dear diary' way. 😳It's so cute! So finally Madhu & RK confessed each other! It was one cute romantic story! Loved it to bits! ❤️ Last but not least! Diary's POV! I hope he meets his girl friend soon! 🤣

Thanks a lot for dedicating this OS to me along with other sisters. 🤗That's so sweet of you. ❤️

Please do write a sequel of this! I wanna read more! 😆

Love you loads ❤️

Edited by -Vinu- - 10 years ago
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What the ??😡When i resed d post & When u r updating?😡 U lazy girl...😡okay cool.😳 I know u r busy with school works.😛
what was that shri?😆 Dont ur madhu have any other work in this whole wide world other than...
WRITE DIARY.. Poor diary!!🤣
EAT FOOD..poor paddy!!🤣
BUMP ON HERO..lucky Rk!!🤣
& Hero know to chant sorry sorry sorry after bumping on her accidentally...wait..is it accident or he secretly hides behind & comes on her way on right time??🤣...love blooms by bumping is a new concept baby...🤣
then suddenly one day he proposes...what a shock??😲
kab?😲 Kaise?😲 Kyun?😲 So many questions arised in my head...may be to know all that i need to read rk's diary..🤣
hehe...u made vinu rk's sis...poor girl missed d chance to drool over him.😆 Even u didnt give meg d chance too..u made her boost madhu...😆 So i m happy😃
okay it was one cute hilarious os shri. 👏
loved it.😃
thanks for d pm.😳
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was amazing OS shriya 👏 😆 Haha...I'm giving relationship advice...that is the last thing I see myself doing 🤣

Maybe I'll meet my future hubby by bumping into him 🤣 I hope so 🤣
And that Diary's POV 🤣 that was hilarious!!!! He can have a pink diary as his girlfriend 🤣

Overall very cute story shriya...and thanks for the dedication😃
I love my gift 🤗 thank you 😳
Edited by Abhiya4life - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice n cute OS Shriya!! 👏😃 Lovely..
N Diary's POV!! 🤣 Lol!!😆
Edited by reenina - 10 years ago
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yipppeee I m first on second page!!! hahaha!!!
wowww!!! awesomeee OS!!!!
so how was it vinu nd meghu dear???
loved it shri dear!!!
poor diary got relieved lol...
Edited by My_VivJaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😆 This is cute and Vinu and Meghna are in the story too.. wow!! That was fun reading
So Vinu. How was it to be RK's sister.. 🤣🤣

So Diary got relieved finally.. I really sympathized with the poor soul..

It was a really sweet story and obv Madhu was apprehensive seeing him.

But i think shriyu.. you should write it in RK's POV too.. cz we didnt get enough of him in this one. 😔

Edited by k.atrina75 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os
m also a big foodie 😆
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Av cute n sweet os.loved the way u named madhu friends as vinu n meghu.
So rk n madhu lived happily everafter.
Diary pov.lol
Thanks fr pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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what a long OS...😆
Okay after 2 weeeks I have finally read it...🤣
Love the dedication... Also Meghu and Vinu are awesome in this story! 🤣 Sorry Vinu and Meghu, better luck next time...😆 Hey maybe we can get Rohan kill this bala and both of you can have your shots at RK...😆 Yes both of you... Let say that Vinu and RK aren't biologically related...😆 But that would be so weird, being brother and sister all their lives and now a couple...🤣
Well Rohan kills suara bala... I hope Google baba translated that correct... Which I doubt... I was going for hog, but got pig...🤣 Well I hereby name thee suara bala (pig bala)...🤣 Wait we might don't need Rohan... That diary of hers can kill her...🤣
I loved the entire OS Shriya... So funny... Loved how she wrote her diary...🤣 And always ended it with I'm hungry need to eat... Well this suara can never be satisfied... I wondering about one little thing... She might not gain any weight, but her cholesterol is probably skyhigh...🤣 Enjoying the weather until it finish her off... Either that cholesterol of hers or that diary will kill her...
The thing I loved the most, apart from the rest 😆, is the diary's POV...🤣 I see a killer in that diary...🤣 When the time comes it will show it's true dark side...😆
Thanks for the OS Shriya and for the much needed PM...😆
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago

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