~Tanhai~ Rishbala ss LAST PART &EPI @15 updated on 13/12 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Loved the update, emotional one, waiting for the next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
First of all congratulations on new story Sweta .🤗
You write so well.👏
Both the parts are awesome .
Please do continue .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
nice update ...waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Lovely update
Waiting to see how rishab will win his madhu back
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Superb update !! I appreciate the idea given by reena ! Lets see how he woos madhu kundraaa !! But ge shoud also suffer for wat he did to madhu ! Plzz madhu dont give up yoyrself easily !! Make it diificult for him to make u !! Plzz send me th pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Awsome story...
Waiting to see how he will woo her...
They both are in soo much pain!!!!
Hope everything is cleared...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Beautiful . loved it👏 .👍🏼
Excited fr nex part. Hw wud RK woo his lady love/wifey/bestie.😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Emotional update! RK on a mission now. Waiting to see what happens next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 3

Rishab came downstairs...had little bit of breakfast ..that too when reena forced him and left to meet Madhu. Reena waved him back with a smile and prayed to babaji to make them come back together.

madhu was in her boutique. She too dint sleep last night . There wer dark circles around her eyes. The girl who was bubbly was lost somewhere. She was just a robot..who did her work..monotonously. It was early morning so..she decided to do the accounts as it would divert her mind from Rishab. She was wearing blue coloured sari her hair..open as it was wet. She started with last week' sales account. She got completely engross in that. She chewed the back of her pencil...and rolled her finger in her curls.

A smile broke across his face as she saw her. How cute and adorable she looked. Now he understood..why is mornings weren't good. She was missing..how could it be nice? Now its perfect. The boutique was a small one..but quite famous in the city. Rishab stood there watching her..quietly. Madhu had let windows open so..gentle breezes flowed around in. Her hair swayed with the gush of wind around her... She was still very engrossed in her work.

O God she looks beautiful...he mumbled to himself... she looked mesmerizing. Her eyes concentrating on her work..her high cheek bones which were still..so cutely chubby. He remembered pulling those cheeks. He smiled at this thought..coz now he wanted to do..lot of things to those cheek he wanted to bite them hard. He breath in sharply looking at those lips. The way her tongue revolved around the pencil.

He inwardly groaned at his thoughts. Being back here..in her life was totally bliss. He moved to the door. He open the door and entered inside. The door made a sound and it alerted her. She got up and smiled...wich vanish as soon as she saw him.

HE felt pang in in his heart but still moved towards her. She looked him in shock and then lowered her eyes. He stood at little distance from her gazing her. He wished to look in those eyes ...and it seem god granted his wish. She looked up at him. Her innocent eyes ..held his captive. None spoke a word. Silence seem to sooth their heart. Both their heart beating loudly.

Madhu was lost in his eyes AND so was he. Her hazels were seeking questions from him...they dint held him guilty they dint accuse him of..whatever happened. Rishab read those eyes and felt more pathetic. Their misery was ending. Her eyes still dint find him guilty. He sighed and opened his mouth to speak..

Madhu i..I.. he had no words to say...I he dint knw what to say where to start..

She swallowed and spoke softly How r u..how..is ur life??How come u r here...I mean .. she tucked her hair behind her ear..are u here for a some new project All the way looking down

No..madhu I ..i M here..He sighed I m here for us he said tenderly

She looked up and gazed in him confusion... He took one step towards her

adhu I m..here for you..for us. Those words were full of confidence and determination which made her heart flutter. There wasn't any doubt..since his eyes spoke the same.

She lowered her eyes with tears..

Why now...rishab?? after all this time ..now Why??

madhu ... hE paused cupped her cheek and made her look him

I knw I have done big blunders..no committed such a big crime..But I want u to give me a chance to rectify it..i want to set it right..

I want to..i want to be with u.. he said with sincerity I want to make our marriage work .. he brushed his thumb over that tear which fell from her eyes..

w..hhy??? she stammered holding his hand over her cheek

because I love u adhu.i always have..and I always will ... he said with all his love

She stopped breathing...she looked him wide eyed unable to believe what she heard.. She missed a beat.. He knew what she was going through.he nodded and pressed his forehead on hers and said again with all his love

I love you..adhu I love u my jaan.. She closed her eyes... She dint knw whether it was her dream or reality..whatever it was..it was beautiful. She never dreamed off him proposing her...tears slipped from corner of her eyes.. Rishab kissed the tear lovingly...something which he wanted to do yesterday too.. She shivered and held his shirt. She crushed it..as his lips moved over her cheek kissing her lightly. She felt butterflies in her stomach..Something which she used to feel..when he was around long back. He brushed his lips over her eyes..pecking both ..She sighed and closed her eyes. He moved to kiss her forehead and then hugged her..keeping her close to his heart. He wrapped her hands around his back and n place her head near his heart. He held her waist and pecked her head again. He closed is eyes . Both stood there..hugging each other soothing each other's hearts. Two souls were finally at peace after years. She smiled as she felt his heart beating in sync with hers. She placed a small kiss there . He smiled ..feeling her love.He knew she would never question him..simply believe him as always..but wouldn't bring herself to trust him. He wanted to start their new life with trust and love both. He sighed and parted her a little and she frowned feeling lack of warmth and looked him ...

He cupped her face and pecked her forehead and whispered.. madhu will u let me rectify my misdeeds..??Will u let me love you?? Will u give me fair chance to win u all over again?

She looked in his eyes which reflected love...only love for her she nodded .

Madhu u forgot ur wallet..back at home..so I Vishal stopped as he saw them.

He got aggravated with the scene before him..and marched towards them in rage. Bhai..app adi..tum

Vishal held Rishab's neck and punched him.. Bhaiii... Madhu screamed in horror.. vishal held his collar and dragged him out of the boutique.. amdhu ran behind him

Dint I warn u..enough..DO NOT COME NEAR My sis...I wont let u live RISHAB KUNDRA.. He raised his hand to slap him..again

Bhai..stop this now... madhu roared

Vishal stopped and looked her..perplexed. She came in between them . are u okhay..rishab she asked him worriedly and ran her eyes all over his body ... M fine...adhu and nodded wiping the blood from corners of his lips.

MADHU....vishal glared madhu angrily

Madhu turned back to vishal ..bhai.,.what r u doing..How can u hit him..??

madhu ..what the hell wer u doing with him..U stay away from him.. he glanced at rishab i knw how to handle him and moved a step ahead. to rishab
Madhu held him..bhai..please he is my husband u cant do..dis..please

Vishal stared her in shock.. He held her shoulders madhu what r u saying..this is the same person..who..

I knw bhai..she said slowly I knw..he wants a chance..

So..what ? ..wait what did u say?? Chance?? Whats ur answer?? he narrowed his brows

I ..I want to give him a chance bhai.. She whispered.. and lowered her eyes

What,..the hell are u crazy..?? he shoved her..

I m gona kill u rishab ..u cant to same thing again with my sis... he was ready to punch him..but this time rishab reverted back an punched him across his face. Vishal held his jaw and gritting his teeth glared him angrily..Madhu barged in between them..

Bhai...

Soorry vishal ..but u were nt ready to listen anything..u dint leave any option

Vishal glared him ready to pounce once again bhai..please..

Lets go..at my place maa will help to bandage u...

No...ooo... he screamed in pain

Bhai..chaloo..we shall discuss it there..

All there left to rishab's place.

All of them wer sitting in his living room. Madhu was sitting next to maa. While Vishal and rishab on separate sofas. Well I don't believe him..he is not at all trustworthy..what if he does the same thing again he said getting up...

Aunty u had seen her condition..u did witness her suffering..u want her go through all that again.. MAA lowered her eyes while..Madhu had tears. Rishab saw her and ..felt the amount destruction he caused to her..Her face showed her inner pain the craving she felt for his love

He stood up...vishal I promise I wont run away..I genuinely love her..and want a second chance he said facing him..

How can..I..

Vishal beta please give him a chance.. raj said. All turned their heads to see him. He came forward and glanced rishab and then Vishal.. Rishab felt sensation of gratitude for his father.

He wont run away..if he does..i promise u..Ill get him back to him..N u can do whatever u want we wont interfere..

Rishab nodded..in acceptance

Vishal glimpsed father and son..and then at madhu who was looking expectantly ..towards him

He sighed..well fine..but this time he has to pass a test..he had to prove himself U have to win her trust an mine,,.too then only I shall hand u my sis..

Vishal ill do anything..and everything u want... rishab said immediately with a smile on his lips...

Lets c..rishab .. vishal smirked and nodded

Rishab turned to look at madhu who was blushing ...and had a small smile on her face.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me first.🥳 Emotional update Sweta dear.😊 Loved Rk- Madhu convo.Their feelings,emotions towards each other all come out as soon as they get chance to talk.😳I like Madhu here melting and supporting him out of her pure love, bt she should nt melt so easily,RK has to prove himself to her. Its his exam now,the amount of pain he gv her ws nt small. Ya he should be given fair chance to prove himself to all of them actually,to win their trust. Let's see how he do this.😛 Loving it,update soon.😃
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago

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