~Tanhai~ Rishbala ss LAST PART &EPI @15 updated on 13/12

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tanhai


Hi all my name is sweta...I have three on-going stories n so glad to get such a good response from u guys..

Here I m back with an story


PART 1


Rishab was waiting at the airport. His plane landed 2 hrs ago..He still waited for her to come..to receive him. He smiled sadly . He deserved this . He deserved every bit of this pain. No one came to receive him...why would they??After all that he has done..

HE sighed and stood up to leave .

He called for a cab and got into it. As the car drove to towards his destination...the old memories came back to his mind. Those trees where he used to play with her , those farms...those days those beautiful days and them..only them.

As the cab stopped he paid the driver and got down. He had to walk down the lane to reach his destination. He remember cribbing about these narrow lanes to his father. Ambala was sweet beautiful and small city. His whole family never had any problem with their living style but he did. He always dreamed of something big. Something better than Ambala something better than their small livelihood

As he walked down he saw two children's playing. He smiled at them.

This was the same place where he met her years back during their childhood. His friend his best friend ...his companion his adhu(her nick name)..his wife... HE looked around to see minute changes in the surroundings but it was still the same. This place was till close to his heart actually his heart belonged here. He inhaled the aroma of his city. It felt nice to be back on this roads ...

He walked further and reached her house. He straightened himself and opened the gate . As he walked inside he felt the corners of his eyes burn..the whole place everything reminded him of her. He stood before the door n saw the name plate. Ms.MADHU MALIK...he ran his hand over her name. He so much wanted to scrape that malik out and shout that it was kundra..MRS.MADHU RISHAB KUNDRA ..his adhu his wife...A Tear slid down his cheek ..he felt so vulnerable already how would he face her now. But he had to. He to rectify his mistake . No his fault his doing.. which spoilt her life. He himself was responsible for all this loneliness in filled in her life and his too. His parents turned their backs on him..his frnds no one was with him .Initially he felt all dint support his dream coz of their mentality. After all they all belonged to small city and such low class people only lived their life the way it is and they don't dream. They maybe jelaous of his talent his potential. The dream of becoming an actor. This dream led him to the city of dreams MUMBAI.

With this thought he had left this city 5 yrs back on their wedding day. He breath heavily and he recalled his stupid thoughts. What a selfish cow he was! HE couldn't identify the gem of a person she was..his best frnd. Who supported him always..she encouraged him in front his parents ,fought with his parents to make them agree . And he betrayed her..he dint realize her love, he insulted her..he insulted her love..his love their love. He left her on their wedding day..for his dream.

HE composed himself and came back from his past. He wiped the sweat from his forehead and took a deep breath. He pressed the doorbell. He waited for the door to open desperately, couldn't wait to meet her.He dint knw whether she would be waiting for him..or had moved on. But she did deserved to punish him. He knew the sin he committed had no forgiveness but ..at least he could get punishment from her which can help to sooth is aching heart.

The door opened. And as he saw her the time stopped for both of them. HE forgot everything and could only see her. She wasn't wearing patiyals that she used to wear. She wore a yellow sari with red border along with a long chain. HE ran his eyes all over her. HE did notice her kumkum but she wasn't wearing any magalustra. He hair was tied in an messy bun with curls hanging down...It was no longer two plats.

He stood at the door with his eyes boring into hers. His eyes had joy ,pain, agony, helplessness. While her's were little shocked and then blank.

She dint move as she gaped him on the door step. She couldn't believe that he actually came. She had heard the news of his homecoming but dint expected him to meet her. She dint wish to meet him...at all... Even though she was happy for him and had moved on from their past but couldn't bring herself to meet him face to face. Those wounds will never heal..and meeting him..will only make her vulnerable. She dint want to face her past again..her pain which she had buried deep inside.

Who is it adhu Vishal..her cousin brother called her out.. HE came to the door to see what is taking her so..long and stood rooted to spot.

His voice broke their intense eyelock.

What are u doing here..??vishal barged in between them.

Adhu u go inside..now..ill handle him.. Vishal glared Rishab

Vishal..I Rishab spoke up...only to be cut off...

Shut up...I don't want to listen anything adhu leave..just leave I said.. he roared

Madhu stepped back and left slowly. Rishab saw her leaving resentfully.
oye... Vishal yelled and caught his collar.. How dare you step inside Ambala...

U bas***d what the hell are u doing here..Y did u came here to meet my sis..he pushed him down. Rishab tripped and fell down on the ground.

Vishal..listen to me he tried speaking again but Vishal held him up and made him stand only to punch him really hard making his lips bleed.

What u want now...did u come here to rub salt on her wounds that u gave her years back.. ha and once again punched him making him fall back again..

Bhai... madhu screamed as she saw vishal gearing up for a punch again. She glanced at vishal and then rishab. She kept staring rishab and spoke..bhai just let him go..please

Madhu just listen to me once he came forward but vishal held his shirt again..

Madhu raised her hand gesturing him to be quite. rishab kept mum and stared her in pain.Madhu blinked back to stop her tears .

Lets go bhai...please n turned her back. She muffled her cries in her pallo and ran inside.

Vishal threw rishab outside ..the gate roughly. Rishab was still looking in her direction.

Leave and don't ever come back..or else I wont leave u that timehe warned him. Rishab dint pay attention to him..he was still looking at her direction.

Rishab felt tormented seeing her in pain. The pain he had gifted her his best friend. on their wedding nite...

This will have 5-6 parts will..try to finish this by Monday...!! Only if u guys comment and give me ur reviews..or else I wont post another part..!!


In this forum...my other on going story is...first kiss story which my frnd vandy is writing for me...

Hugs to u baby 😳

FIRST KISS STORY

and her and mine combined story..

THE VENGEANCE LOVER

ANOTHER NEW STORY

SILENT LOVER

Sorry for mistakes!!

Plz add vandy28dd or crazy_swetamb to receive updates for these stories..!!



SORRY FOR MISTAKES!!


Do give me ur feedback..dearies..!!


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Sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX

PART 1- PG 1






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Posted: 10 years ago
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ohh ...nice...congos for new story swetha..
oke...so Rishabh dutched her for his dramz..why this guy becomes so selfish..huh...seriously...

Madhu is wearing Sindoor...means she is married ????
I want to know more...that was fab update..u unveiled so many things///

Awesome..continue soon 👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratz for new story dear..
Thanks for the rishbala version..
nice and interesting first part...
eagerly waiting for next part..
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for ur new story
RK and madhu are married and he left her on the
wedding nite
very interesting
update it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start...continue soon...
can u pls tell me the meaning of "tanhai"...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start sweta
Rishbala best frnds were going to marry but he left her on wedding day for his dreams though he love her
Madhu has sindoor in her maang whts the twist
Cnt sn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: abi_29

awesome start...continue soon...

can u pls tell me the meaning of "tanhai"...



it means loneliness ...sweety..!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Crazy_Arshi

Nice start sweta
Rishbala best frnds were going to marry but he left her on wedding day for his dreams though he love her
Madhu has sindoor in her maang whts the twist
Cnt sn


baby. ull get to knw the twist I have written the whole story...I just need more comments then ill update the next part...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start...
So Rishab ditched Madhu on their wedding night to fulfill his dream of becoming an actor...how selfish and heartless !!!!
Waiting to know more...
Please continue ...

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