Rishbala 3S: PYAAR HAI (pt.3/pg.1) (dt-31/12)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: Miss_uliuli
😊 will go through all the part and comment. Thanks for PM Sudha..😳

okay dear

welcome

Quote

jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: NehaVdian
ohh god I thought only bala is crazy but this rk is to bigger crazy
both r high profile pagal lol

thank god that bala didn't become Mahan bala

hayee even my hero hates mahaan log lol

superb update diii

I love this ts

now waiting for last part

haha..neha if madhu is crazy then our rk is craziest lol.

haha..all my rishbalas are pagal lol,i like pagalpanti lol.

hey even i hate mahaan bala lol.

glad u love this ts.

will update soon

thanks dear.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Miss_uliuli
wow..simply amazing Sudha. Never saw this Madhu before.so gutsy n bold and yeah so so sexy, both mentally and physically. No man can ignore and stay away from her! RK is also highly attracted to her. While reading the ending of 1st part I was assuming that Dips didn't elope because of Madhu she must have her own piece of story. And see I came right! :D she escaped the marriage for sikky. Rishbala's SR was funny n I was wishing them not to pass out. But they did ;( ok I'll forgive you if you write a superhot SR in 3rd part. ;) plz update soon. Thanks for PM:D

thanks u so much dear for this lovely commet.

glad u like this gutsy madhu. Yes, she is sexy so noone csn resist her lol..thats y rk is attracted to her & D same go with madhu too.

yes u have rightly guessed but she did for her own self toon

haha...even i thought that but later changed d idea as i want Them to comsumate in their conscious state. They shld nt feel they did a mistake later so i made them pass out lol.

yes u will get one passionate love making.

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago

Quote

jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: zoya789
Please Update the next part soon

will update soon dear

sorry for d delay.

Quote

jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: uma88
Finally i got it, i forgot to comment on this story of urs.
the very first thing i want to tel u is sudha, u r a perfect kudimagal, u very well explained abt mixing and side dish, 😆😆

Very nice, so he gonna fall in love madly, badly with her before knowing the truth, so for whom deepali left her, that loser sikki hun? so bad, this deepali has lost her brain, but fine, because of that only our rishbala came together.

its okay akka.

thanks for this lovely comment.

haha..yes i m a good kudimagal lol

hmm..i m in doubt whether he is gonna fall in love or already fallen lol.after seeing him drooling her sexy legs like that.

haha..i always feel sikky & Dips are one best couple so i always pair them lol..

yes if she married rk then where will rishbalas love story go?

thanks again akka.

Quote

jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: Shriya.bk
Sudha di what is this hun?
YOU gave me a total shock!😲
Oho so insanebala became Mahaanbala not bad ...😆
Hai...hai...Rk checking out Madhu hun?😉
O so Madhu you sacrificed so much for your sister hun?🤣
Brandy ...Brandy ...Brandy you did a mahaan thing you know you just made kiss two people so badly that one person's lips was swollen 🤣
Brandy is saying " I know Shriya who it is." I ask brandy "Who it is"?
"It is none other than Madhu aka Insanebala+Mahaanbala " said Brandy 🤣

Oho! Mohan is upset...to...bad...😆
Now I do think Radha should get on the dancefloor to make his mood okk🤣

Dipali ...Dipali...Dipali...You went to sikky thats great😆
Thank god now no more Dipali...😆

This time I would tell thank you for pm akka!😆

why so shocked shri?

still she did that for her selfish reason. If it was not rk she would have chased d groom away But it was our hot rk so she married him by blackmailing lol.

haha..who will not chech out a sexy chic lol.

haha..brandy played an inportant part lol..

haha...brandy bala lol.

haha..radha often needs to get on d dance floor to set mohan straigjt lol.

hayee sikpali my fav couple lol

thanks for this cracking comment shri. Loved it.

Quote

jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life
Oh no!!!!! Tallibala 3.0 has shown up! 🤣 How many more tallibala's are we going to have sudha? 🤣 and not only that...she made RK talli too 🤣

Awesome update sudha...Dips always has to go with Sikky 🤣 wonder where they are right now? 😆
Awww...Mohan is upset...maybe Radha can cheer him up...time to dish that brandy from the bushes 🤣 Raat aKeli hai...🤣 *cue seductive dance moves* 🤣

Glad the RK and Tallibala are getting close...how hard did they kiss each other...that Tallibala's lips are swollen after a whole night? 🤣 Did RK's lips turn into a vacuum for a brief moment? 🤣

Anyways awesome update once again sudha
Continue soon 😃

haha..what a cracking comment meg. Loved it.

even i wonder how many more talli balas i ll introduce lol..

haha..a perfect talli can only make rk talli too lol.

jeez, raat akeli song for modha? Lol..that would be one hot shot romance lol..

a brandy can make wonders lol..they were drinking talking & Drinking till early morning & After that they kissed hard really hard so that her lips was swollen for hours lol..haha may be it turned to a vaccum lol.

hmm..i think actually dips & Sikky are hiding in d bushes & Drinking d left out brandy lol..

thanks dear.

will update soon

Quote

jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Thanks to all my dearies for liking this story. I ll probably update d final part by tonight or before that.

Quote

Titli

@afterlife.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

okay... let me laugh first..🤣🤣 these lines I thought my papa will go thermonuclear on us but u made a tiger to a pussy cat" 🤣🤣🤣
n what both RM applied to their respective SIL "Oh c'mon, Papa, dont behave like a typical villain. That look doesn't suit u...u look so soft, sweet & caring
sorry dear but I skipped the sikpali part n the later family drama a bit.😆 i was rushing for SR part then! i knew it's going to be at last para so I read it 1st!😉 i stopped right getting this What's the need to change? U just stripe me out of this dress & I ll unbutton ur shirt☺️☺️☺️ RK, the man is obsessed with his Biwi's legs!😆 all he wants to make love with her legs. God! man she has other bodi parts too..look at them🤢 and Madhu wants baby just after their first night!😲 loved Rk's dialog there. Work in progress, biwi...soon u'll get the finished product"😆☺️
finally u made me blush Sudha..thanks a lot for it.🤗🤗 I was bugging u y'day for this update.thanks for fulfilling my wish..😳do write more like this..

Edited by Miss_uliuli - 10 years ago

Quote

Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#220

Resss

unresss

Superb sudha!!!

I really liked and loved the final part most, madhu's carefree nature shocked me, because any girl at that place would definitely give back, but she again became a mahaanbala, Lol. And madhubala is an AUDITOR here, well this is your story on rishbala or any of your dream for ur future life, 😆 😆 😆

Revelation of sikpali truth to both parents were also unexpected, u didn't dragged it much, as u know ppl may skip those parts if u drag it, RK using madhu dialgue for his FIL impressed me,ur RK's always impress me, what to do.

And finally, last paras were very much worth reading, it was such a fun reading their reaction, and that too madhu's dialogue, WHATS THE NEED TO CHANGE, U STRIP ME AND I WILL UNBUTTON UR SHIRT, god, this girl waited patiently for one month and not a minute now. She is completely crazy. And RK is so much in love with her legs than her. On the whole, a very nice story sudha dear. Thanks for giving us a chance to read this story, waiting eagerly for other stories too, esp the os.

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago

Quote

1 ... 20 21 22 23 24 ... 29

Bala

Rishbala 3S: PYAAR HAI (pt.3/pg.1) (dt-31/12) - Page 22

Related Topics

Explore Topics