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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Shriya.bk

Congratulations on your 1st story Nisha.

The prologue is interesting.
Continue soon. ...

Thank you Shriya 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sarcastic_teen

The spy nxt door is one of my fav movie. Chan was awesome...how he dealt with kids and his secret side of life!
coming to ff
Well will be able to give a correct review when you would update the 1st part
But yes I'm finding it interesting. Who's the spy here? ;)

Hope you'll like my story 😆 updating soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

welcome to our forum dear 🤗

wonderful start. 👏
I guess trouble of d century is our very own madhu or kid if dis story is like dat movie
n d person getting troubled is our RK 😆

Thanks a lot 😳 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: zrj-jolly

Congo for urstoryinteresting prologuecontinue soom

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: -Vinu-

The spy next door is one of my favourite movies 😃 Awesome prologue! I wonder who is the torture of the century is 😉😆 Waiting for the next part! 😳

Thanks a lot Vinu 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Interesting start. Pls do continue. And pm me whenever u update pls..

Thank you 😳 will update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
The spy next door - Chapter 1



No. 20A-3,
Via Cesari Beccaria,
Flaminio,
Rome.

I checked the address. That is my address where I'm gonna stay for another couple of months, or may be years. I don't know! Now I have to focus on my mission on finding this place.

Another headache! I don't know this stupid language! Italian! Why couldn't I learn a little bit before I come? Most of the people don't talk English! God damn why? I felt so helpless in a new country. I was turning around scratching my hair. I sought help from 3 Italians, but neither of them could explain where it was. They didn't know how to explain in English and I didn't know Italian. The sign language didn't work either. I was pretty amazed to see how some of the tourists manage to walk through this city without any help.

I didn't have a map. How will I manage during my stay here? I knew a little bit of Spanish, but it didn't help me either. I felt like going back to India in the next flight. But how can I? I'm here for a reason. I have to accomplish it.

Suddenly a loud noise made me nearly deaf. It was a sound of car horn coming behind me. I looked back. It took a few seconds me to realize that I am standing right on the middle of a street.

'Signor, Cosa stai facendo l?' (Mr. what are you doing there?) 'Huh'? I looked back puzzled. I didn't understand a single word. An old man who might be in his late sixties shouted waving his hand. 'Prendi ad un lato' (Get to a side!) He shouted again. I figured out that he was a taxi driver.

I was so tensed where to go. Another car came across. Now I am stuck between two cars. It started tooting too. 'What the hell? This is making me sick!'

Yo! What the eff are you doing? you are blocking the road! Finally I heard something I can understand! It was a female voice. I guess whoever it was, might have figured out my situation. I hurried my steps towards the car.

'Excuse me ma'am! Can you help me please?' 'I wanna go to Flaminio' She was wearing shades. I couldn't see her face properly. 'Oh it's just 4 miles away.' You can take a bus from here. The station is right behind that big shopping mall.' She pointed to a colorful shopping complex.

I was attracted to her from the first sight. All I was doing was staring at her moving red lips. I was wondering how beautiful her eyes could be, which were covered by the shades. I was mesmerized by her beauty.

'Um, excuse me?' 'Did you understand what I said?' I came back to normal. I felt embarrassed. 'Um.. yeah.' 'Thanks a lot.'! I lied. She didn't know that her beauty has grabbed my whole attention.

'Or you need any help Mr.?' ' She asked again. 'Umm.. well.' I was struggling to find words. 'Umm want a lift?' 'I'm also going to Flamminio.'

She must have figured out that I have lost my way. She looked at me for a while. I smiled back hoping that she would help me.

'You are wasting time!' 'Aren't we going home?' Somebody spoke up inside the car. I felt so much familiar. I couldn't believe my eyes in the very next second. It was none other than that girl who was troubling me throughout the flight.

Oh god! I don't wanna ruin my day again! ' I spoke to myself. ' Why should we give a lift to a stranger!' 'Let's go!' That troublemaker muttered. She have already noticed me.

I felt so bad about that beautiful lady who tried to help me. How sad? She is related to such a mischievous girl.

'Umm.. thanks a lot ma'am.' 'I can find my way.' I replied. 'Uh.. well okay then.' She smiled. I wished she would have removed her shades. My bad luck! The car drove away. I would have gotten a chance to go to Flaminio without any trouble if that troublemaker wasn't there.

Finding my destination alone is thousand times better than riding together with that torture. I saw a church near by. I need to go there and relax my mind before anything else.

Finally I could reach Flaminio after struggling for hours. I was lucky enough to be guided by a police officer. I was walking along the streets looking for my apartment.

Suddenly a red ball came bouncing across the road. I heard a giggle of a kid. A cute little girl who must be barely 3 years old came running. She was standing in the opposite side. I figured out that she was chasing the bouncing ball.

Without wasting a second she came to the middle to grab her ball while I was waving my hand to stop her. I had already noticed that a truck was coming in a high speed towards her direction.

'Lisaaa...!' Somebody called out in a loud, worried tone. Must be that girl's mom. I knew what's gonna happen within the next few seconds. I dropped my bags and ran to rescue that innocent child who was unaware about the truck coming towards her.

To be continued..😃

Hows the first chapter guys?😕😆 I know it looks blehh and completely messy!🥱 and too short! Wrote it in a hurry! Lol 😆I won't be able to update my story regularly. So I'll update it twice a week. Hope you are fine with that! Will update the 2nd chapter most probably in the weekend 😃
Edited by ..Annabelle.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Beautiful update Nisha..
short and sweet update..
poor rk suffered too much
because of the flight co-passenger
girl..now I think the beautiful
girl who offered the lift is none
other than madhu..
eagerly waiting for next part.
continue soon dear..
Edited by drashtira - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Very nice 1 st chappy
The guy must be Rishab and if I am not wrong the mischievous girl from the fllight is Madhu. And who is that the beautiful lady who offered him a lift ?? Waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
lovely start nisha
i think the guy is rk
the girl who was driving is madhu
the child must be madhu's or his bro or his sis ...don't know
i will wait for ur update to get the answer
form ur update ur going to teach us italy😆
ok ready to learn😆

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