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Wow mind blowing :)) awesome da :)) so nice :))
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TS: Do I love you?or Do I hate you?
-Written by Shriya.bk
At last I came to the last part!😆
I know this is a crappy story! But please do tolerate this with me.
I know you all would like to chappals for not updating this story at all. But i'm really sorry guys! Now here goes the last part!

BEEP...BEEP...BEEP came a sudden sound from the oven which disturbed both of them. They both suddenly parted and realized what they did. Madhu was totally shocked of what she did with Rk. She agrees that she is attracted to him but she didn't even realize that in the world of passion she kissed him. She didn't know what she was going to tell him.

Here Rk knows that he loves Madhu .He was just admiring her when she was talking so animatedly about the food. In his admiration he totally forgot what he was doing and without thinking he just placed his lips on hers .When he realized what he was doing and was about to part but then Madhu started kissing him. He was drowned in passion and totally forgot about everything. He was disturbed by the beep of the oven and then realized what he had done. Now he didn't know what to do. He was confused whether to tell Madhu that he loves her or just say sorry and go away? He knew that Madhu would be angry on him after what he did. So now if he says I love you to her he was sure he was going to get a slap oops sorry not a slap but actually double slaps for what he had done before. Rk knew that Madhu is surely gonna slap him. Think Rk ...Think Rk...he kept chanting in his mind.

Madhu was thinking what to do? Whether to scold him for what he had done or whether to ask sorry because she was also enjoying the kiss. Suddenly someone tapped her right shoulder. Madhu saw who it was but couldn't find anyone and once again she felt the tap so she decided to see her shoulder itself. She saw a small angel who just looked like her and had wings and a small magic stick with her. She told Madhu "Madhu what are you thinking? Just go tell him sorry for what you did. He just placed his lips on yours but you were the one who reciprocated right, then go tell sorry to him for your behavior" .Madhu nodded her head . She then felt someone tapping her left shoulder .So when she saw it was none other than her but in an evil form or you can say devil. She told to Madhu "Oiye Madhu don't listen to her listen to me. That Rk whom you hated has kissed you right? Madhu nodded yes. "If he has kissed you then you should put all the blame on him" said the evil angel smiling evily. Then the other angel told "No Madhu don't listen to her listen to me". The evil angel told Madhu listen to me not to her . Then both the angels started quarreling with each other which made Madhu get annoyed a lot and she shouted "STOP! STOP! Both of you I am not going to listen to any of you! I am just going to listen to my heart".

Here Rk who was going to say sorry when he saw Madhu looking at both her shoulders and nodding he got confused. When Madhu shouted stop he thought that she was saying it to him and he stopped. Here Madhu saw Rk coming towards her and then standing. So she went near him and told "Rk I'm really very...very...sorry for what I did. I agree that you were the one who kissed me but I was the one who responded so I'm sorry for that." "No! No! Madhu I should be sorry for what I did! It was me who kissed you right I should be sorry for what I did. I am extremely sorry for what I did . I didn't expect a sorry from you Madhu but instead a slap for my behavior" said Rk chuckling. Madhu couldn't help but smile. "Madhu why were you seeing both your shoulders and nodding after that why you screamed?" asked Rk with a slight frown on his face. Madhu started panicking. How can she tell him that her both good and bad angel were giving her advice and then they both quarreled which annoyed her and she shouted because of that. He would surely laugh at her for this she thought. So she just told "Nothing Rk!". "Okk Madhu but now I am totally famished after asking sorry to you and after what I did a few minutes before" said Rk and then he realized what he had told. He was going to ask Madhu sorry again but after he saw Madhu blushing he left the sorry thought.

Here they both had their food and this time it was strange because every time Rk used to talk unnecessarily to Madhu when he came to have food in her home but today both of them where quiet especially Rk. After eating Rk just bid Madhu saying "Madhu I'm once again sorry for what I did and take care".

In the night Madhu was totally confused because of her feelings towards Rk .She doesn't know whether she loves him or hates him.

The next day Madhu got up early and went to College. She was eagerly waiting for Trish to come soon. When Trish came she pulled her into the canteen "Arrey Madbala suddenly why you pulled me into the canteen." Here Madhu just told her to keep quiet and pulled her into a corner. "Trish I wanted to ask something to you. Can you please answer me without your extra talks" said Madhu "Okk Madhu I will tell you but before that first tell me what you wanted to ask" Replied Trish "Trish I just wanted to ask you can somebody fall in love in a month? Please don't laugh Trish" said Madhu. Trishna was trying to control not to laugh at Madhu for such a silly question and also she knows that somebody is Madhu itself. "Arrey buddhu Madhu! Haven't you heard about Love at first sight', Love is blind' and all. Madhu love just happens yaar it doesn't need any date or time. And by the way why are you asking this suddenly?" asked Trishna while raising her left eyebrow. Madhu started stammering "Wo...it's nothing Trish ...just a weird thought" said Madhu as she thought that she would tell Trish all at the right time.

After this Madhu went home. Here Trish was also going home when suddenly Rk came from behind and screamed "Boo!" which made Trish also scream "Ahhh!". After hearing Trish's scream Rk started chuckling which made Trish get angry. She started hitting him and he told "Trish stop it yaar! I like scaring you and you know that". "Hahaha..very funny right" said Trish. "Okay Trish listen just yesterday I realized that I truly, madly, deeply in love with Madhu yaar and I also need a favour from you". "WHAT!?" screamed Trish . "Trish don't scream loud. Everyone will get to know if you scream like that" said Rk in a pleading tone. "Okk...look Rk I already know that you are in love with Madhu before you could know because I can see it in your eyes and Madhu I know that she also loves you but she is still confused about her feelings towards you. Now you can ask your favour." said Trishna in a serious tone. "Aww Trish you are the best I could say! Before I could ask you itself told me about Madhu's confused feelings and as per the favour I want you to help me in making Madhu fall in love with me. Please ...Please..." replied Rk. "See I'm the best right! I will surely help you because I love playing cupids" replied Trishna while winking. "Trish...Trish...Trish...yaar...you are the best sister I could ever have!" said Rk while hugging Trish.

Rk's and Trish's plan "Mission Madhubala" was in it's last stage. Well Trish helped Rk a lot in conversing with Madhu. The first one was making Rk as Madhu's partner in all the activities which helped a lot. The second was she made Rk visit Madhu's place frequently for notes, projects and many such silly things. Madhu didn't even get to know that Trish was helping Rk. She didn't even have a little bit of doubt on them. Madhu now just forgot her confused feelings for him and started loving him. She had even told Trish about her feelings for him and Trish encouraged her saying that she even thinks that Rk is in love with Madhu. After hearing this Madhu was really very happy. Tomorrow was really a very special day for Madhu as it was her birthday. Like every year Trish used to call her first but this year she felt that something special was going to happen.

At midnight 12:00 am Madhu felt her phone buzzing so she picked it up."HAPPY BIRTHDAY MADHU!" said Rk on the other line. Madhu was shocked to hear him wishing her the first time and she was happy at the same time because her love was wishing her. "Thanks Rk" Madhu replied. "Arrey Madhu why do need to say thanks hun. By the way there is surprise for you" said Rk. "Rk what surprise? Please tell na? You know that I cannot wait!" said Madhu. "Madhu you will get to know the surprise soon! Now go to sleep and will see you in the evening party" said Rk and he hung up. "Today would be the last day of Mission Madhubala" said Rk and went to sleep. On the other hand Madhu couldn't even sleep as she was wondering what the surprise would be.

Madhu got up soon and went down. "HAPPY BIRTHDAY MADHU BABY!" wished Padmini and Shamsher together. "Thanks Mama and Dadda" replied Madhu. Then she saw few of the servants running from the living room to the kitchen. Then she asked her Mama what was going on. Padmini said "Baby did you forget we celebrate your birthday every year grandly so this time we thought to celebrate it super grandly". "Oh...Mama and Dadda you both are really very sweet" saying this she went and hugged both her parent's. Her parent's hugged her caressed her hair."Wow!Wow! What a family drama" said Trish while walking in. "O...Hello Drama why ddidn't you wish me first?" asked while parting from her parents and went to Trish. "Oh...Sorry Madhu I slept off! By the way Happy birthday!" she wished her and hugged her and Madhu also reciprocated the same. Trishna told "Madhu sorry now I have to go because I am going out of station with Mummy and Papa. Bye dear take care" saying she went away

Soon it was evening Madhu was dressed in a baby pink gown. She looked like a Barbie doll in that. All the guests started coming and wishing her but she wasn't interested in them, she was just waiting for Rk. He told he was going to give a surprise to her. She saw his parent's coming , she went near them they wished her "HAPPY BIRTHDAY MADHU BETA!" she told "Thanks aunty and uncle. Has Rishab come?" "Your most welcome beta! No beta he is still getting ready , he will come soon" replied Radha Rk's Mother.

"Good evening Ladies and gentlemen! As you all know today is My daughter Madhu's birthday, like every year we celebrate her birthday grandly but today with the celebration there is another celebration also but that is still a surprise. So now to break the surprise I would call upon Rk or Rishab." Suddenly the lights dimmed and the main light was focused on Rk. Rk was dressed in a black tuxedo. He was looking very hot and sexy in it. "Thanks Malik uncle. Now it is high time for me to break the surprise and now to break the surprise I would call upon the birthday girl Madhubala! Come on the stage Madhu" said Rk. Madhu was totally confused about what was happening around her. She was broken from her trance when her Mama told her to go on the stage. When Madhu came on the stage the lights dimmed and music started. "And one more thing everyone before the surprise let's all have a dance" said Rk to the guests.

Bg Music: Tum Hi ho

Rk came near Madhu and asked "May I have the pleasure of dancing with you Madhu". Madhu nodded her head in yes. Slowly Madhu and Rk started dancing and soon their dance became a passionate one. Finally the music ended and Rk and Madhu stopped dancing. "So here ladies and gentle men I am going to reveal the surprise of the evening." Said Rk. Rk suddenly knelt on his knees near Madhu. Madhu was now totally shocked. "Madhu today I'm going to confess what I wanted to confess so many days before. Though we might have been enemies from childhood but I don't know when and how I fell in love with you. You are the first girl who came in my life and you will be the last girl in my life. So Miss Madhubala Shamsher Malik are you willing to be My Dream girl and the My love of My Life". Asked Rk. Madhu was more than happy, she felt like she was in the seventh heaven. She had never expected Rk to propose her like this. She was also shocked that even her parents were involved in this. She first turned to her parents and asked whether she could go ahead through her eyes. Her parents happily nodded their head. "Yes Mr. Rishab Kundra I am more than happy to be the Love of Your life and your Dream girl and a last thing I was confused because of my feelings towards you but not today because I am already in love with you! " said Madhu nodding happily. Rk was happy to hear her say that. He took out the ring which he had specially taken for Madhu. It was a diamond ring with a cute heart at the center. He just slid the ring in her finger and she happily accepted it. All the other guests clapped for them.

"Okk everyone thanks a lot for waiting eagerly for the surprise. Now you all can go enjoy the party" said Rk and then he turned towards Madhu and hugged her. "Madhu I am so lucky to have you in my life!" said Rk while hugging her. "I am also lucky to have you in my life Rk!" said Madhu while hugging him."Madhy I already told that you are my dreamgirl right but I still don't know who your dream boy is? And that day I heard you talking with Trish regarding your Dreamboy. So tell me now who is your Dream boy?" Rk said while raising his left eyebrow. "Oho... Somebody is already jealous hun" said Madhu winking. Rk just frowned."Okkk who do you think Rk my dream boy would be? It would be none other than you buddhu!"said Madhu and hugged him. "I will and always be your Dream boy" said Rk reciprocating the hug.

Later they parted from their hug and Rk pulled Madhu separately. "Rk what are you doing hun?" asked Madhu. "Madhu I just wanted to tell you something" said Rk."Okk Rk tell" said Madhu. "Firstly Madhu promise me that you won't get angry when I tell you this! Promise me!" said Rk. "Okk Rk I promise!" she said."Madhu Trishna only helped me in conversing with you and she only told about your confused feelings to me and then I decided to make you realize your love for me. In this also Trishna only helped me Madhu. I'm sorry for what I did but it was the only to make you realize your love for me Madhu." Rk said in a pleading tone. Here Madhu got angry and started hitting him "You cheater you made me fall in love with you! I hate you! I hate you!" she said. "But Madhu I always love you baby!" Rk said very sweetly which made Madhu smile. "Rk but I still hate you! And I also love you! And by the way Rk I have a confusion. Do I Love you?or Do I hate you?' asked Madhu with a slight frown on her face. "You do both My love" he said and pulled her closer and whispered "Now if you will allow me to finish what we left half away a few days before" he said winking which made Madhu blush. He placed his lips on hers and they both started kissing each other passionately.

THE END

At last the story is over😆😆😆
Guys Please do drop your likes and comments!😉
Edited by Shriya.bk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome ending to an awesome story shriya 😃
The kiss at the end was just fantastic

Conflict and Madhu?! 😆 that's a first time I'm seeing that...poor angel and devil got knocked off the shoulders by Madhu heart 😆
Mission Madhubala was a success...congrats RK...even if she still hate you deep down inside for cheating her into love 🤣

The dance and proposal scene was also cute...and I was imagining them dancing together 😳

Thanks for the pm that served me no purpose whatsoever... 😆 Come back with a new story soon shriya
Edited by Abhiya4life - 11 years ago

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