Rishabala Os: Do I Love you or Do I hate you?

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Hey Guys. I am back with a Ts.
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RISHABALA TS : Do I love you? or Do I hate you?
Written by Shriya.bk



"O God what should I do to this girl I don't know? Every day she gets up late because of her stupid dreams" said Padmini while walking inside Madhu's room. "Madhu ...Madhu ...Madhu get up dear it's already 9 and you have to reach your college at 10." said Padmini very sweetly. But Madhu was always Madhu. "Mama just 2 more minutes I will surely get up" told Madhu. "NO!!! you will tell two more minutes and you will get up at 9.15 correctly like you always do. But not this time because your favorite person is going to pick you up and drop you also." Madhu eyes were wide awake after she heard the word favorite person, then she asked "Mama is it Daddy whom you are talking about?" But to her disappointment her Mom told it was not him but it was "Rk". Madhu hated that name itself .Rk what a stupid name .How could someone sane like her go with a moron, idiot, insane person like him. He was always her best Enemy from childhood .If her parents were not family friends she would have by now killed him .He would always irritate her and would hell tease .But she was relieved for these whole 1 week that he had gone for a trip with his parents to London and yesterday she heard that he had come back from the trip. She shocked that he would pick her up and drop her also because whenever her driver was not their he would pick her and drop also but today he has willingly accepted to drop her means there is something fishy she thought while drying her hair. She then came down and wished her father "Good Morning Dad" kissed her dad on his cheeks and was going to the kitchen to have her breakfast. She went and hugged her mom and told "Good morning Mama" and sat on the breakfast bar and had her breakfast. "Madhu today you have wore summer dress you usually wear jeans na, anything special baby?"asked Padmini .Madhu told "Nah Mama nothing special it's just I and Trishna decided to wear summer dress because she was tired of seeing me in jeans" after saying this both mom and daughter started laughing because they both knew how crazy Trishna was about Madhu and how crazy Madhu was about Madhu. Well Madhu and Trishna were Best friends from childhood .

Suddenly someone came in and said "Wow!!! What a Lovely show between Mom and Daughter." said Trishna while trying to wipe her fake tears. "Trishna!!!" screamed Madhu and went and gave a bear hug to her .Trishna told "Arrey Madbala leave me or else I will fall down because of this hug." Madhu left her and told "How come you are early today? Always I will be the first one to wake you na?"and Madhu came near Trishna's ears and told "O I forgot right today your great "Rk" is going to come from his 1 week London trip . You would always be irritating me because of his absence" Madhu said acting the same way Trishna does and came running outside the kitchen with Trishna chasing her from behind . " Madbala wait today I'm not going to leave you" said Trishna while chasing her from behind. Well Trishna and Rk were like brother and sister. They both together would always irritate Madhu which would always make her annoyed.

While running Madhu suddenly bumped into someone and when she was going to fall on the ground, a pair of muscular hands wrapped on her waist and saved her from falling down. Without seeing the person who had had saved she said "Thank you" and removed his hands from her .Then she heard him saying "Your Welcome Madz". She immediately recognized this voice and shouted "YOU!!!" He told "Yes, Me only The great Rk' Are you shocked to see me Madz? I thought you would have missed me for this whole one week and you would tell "Rk I missed you sooo...much. Why did you you leave me alone and go?" and you would come running to hug me". "No problem Madz I would only give you a hug" saying this he hugged her. Madhu already was annoyed when her Mother told that Rk was going to pick her up and she couldn't deny also because her mother would feel bad as she likes Rk as her own son. And now on top of it he is hugging her. She suddenly pushed him and told "You Moron, Stupid Rk how dare you hug me huh? And who told you that I missed you? For your kind information I was leaving very peacefully without your torture do you know that?" said Madhu and while saying this her cheeks turned red. This made Rk chuckle. "No problem Madhu I know that you missed me and don't try to cover it up by scolding me" said Rk while smirking. "Now can you Please move so that I can meet Paddy aunty and Malik uncle and drop you to the college and it's already 9.30". He went inside the kitchen and said "Hey Paddy aunty!!! How are you and where is Malik uncle?" Padmini replied "Hello Rishu beta I'm fine and uncle is in his study room checking some important mails. How are your Parents and how are you?" " They are fine Paddy aunty and Mom and Dad are also good. I will meet Malik uncle after coming back from college." said Rk while walking out of the kitchen."O My what a coincidence Trish I was just thinking about you and here you are in front of me" said Rk after seeing Trish " O Rk I missed you so much" said Trishna and went near him and hugged and Rk reciprocated the same to her

"Come Trish go call Madhu so that we all can go together to college." said Rk and kissed Padmini on her cheeks and went away. Here Trishna went in search of Madhu and saw that she was already standing out near the car to go and went and stood next her. Rk came out and went near Madhu and said "Someone is already ready to go Trish" and went inside the driver's seat and sat in. Here Madhu and Trishna sat on the back seat. Rk told "Hello Madams I am not your driver so please someone come front and sit with me". Trish told that she was not going to sit front and told Madhu to go sit front which made Madhu to give Trish a glare. She grudgingly went and sat in the front seat as she didn't want to have a fight with that Moron as it was already late for her to go to college.

The journey to college was silent. After reaching college Madhu was the first one to get up and Trish followed her outside. Rk went to park the car in the parking lot. After he came back he saw that only Trish was there and asked where was Madhu and she told that she went to the class. Rk , Madhu and Trishna were studying in the same college and were studying in the same class also .This was the last year for them in the college. Rk was the most popular guy in the college. All the girls were always behind him and he used to not give a damn about them. Many of them were also jealous by Madhu because Rk used always irritate her and used to care about her.

After few lectures they all had a break and went to the canteen. Rk was with his group of boys and Madhu and Trish were sitting in the next table behind him. Many boys were drooling Madhu which went unnoticed by Madhu and Trish as they both were in their own world taking but was noticed by Rk. Rk became angry and this was not the first time that boys were drooling on her .He used to get angry at times but he would control himself as he himself has a crush on her and for this whole one week he was not here and in London also he was just thinking about Madhu and was missing her. He realized that he always irritates her and troubles her because he likes her. He also knows that Madhu hates him because he irritates her and he just loves to irritate her from childhood . The first time he broke Madhu's precious pencil when they were in 1st std and when they were in 8th he used to irritate her by calling her Madz and now also he calls her the same name because she gets angry whenever he calls her by that name. He chuckles while remembering all these and he decided that he will not irritate her and will only irritate her when needed.

After the college they all went to their home and Rk went to madhu's house to meet Malik uncle as he did not meet him in the morning. He went in and went directly to the kitchen to see what Paddy aunty prepared. "Wah...Wah!!! What an aroma Paddy aunty. Don't tell me you have prepared Pav Bhaji because it's my favorite" said Rk while entering the kitchen." Yes Rishu beta I prepared your favorite snack today. Come and have" replied Padmini. "Yes aunty I will have it after meeting Malik uncle and I have to copy notes from Madhu also na." said Rk and went to studyroom to meet Malik . "Hello Malik uncle . How are you? And before you ask any questions I will only tell you that I am fine and my parents are also fine" said Rk. Malik just chuckled and told "I'm fine Rishab and I know that you will always be fine" said Malik . "Ok uncle now I should go and copy some notes from Madhu also. Will meet you later." He said this and went away.

After coming out he directly went into Madhu's room. Here Madhu was just listening to some songs and dancing on the bed. Rk was mesmerized seeing Madhu dancing. He was just watching her when suddenly Madhu shouted "You!!! Why did you come here huh? If you want to talk with me then I am really not interested in talking with you at all" said Madhu with a straight face.

Why did this moron come here? Wasn't it enough for him irritating me and again he has come here I don't know what he wants from me said Madhu in her mind.

"Nothing Madhu I just want some notes from you as I was not there " said Rk Madhu suddenly found his behavior strange and this the first time that he has called her Madhu instead of Madz. "Ok wait Rk I will go bring my notes" said Madu and went to bring her notes.

Rk what happened to you yaar? Why are you suddenly calling Madz as Madhu? From the time you realized that you always irritate Madhu because you like her you are behaving strange and also today you couldn't take your eyes of her. Thank God that she didn't notice you or else She would have killed you said Rk in his mind.

Suddenly Madhu came in front of him and gave him the book. He just nodded and asked "Madhu if you don't mind can I complete my work here itself or else I will forget to bring your book tomorrow and also you will start scolding me and I don't like you scolding me.". Madhu got another shock because Rk told her that he doesn't like getting scoldings from her and she has always seen him happily laughing when he gets scoldings from her. Madhu felt that she would faint any minute after hearing all this because Mr. Moron Rk , the person she hates the most and would always tease her has told her that he doesn't like getting scoldings from her.

Madhu suddenly overcame from her shock and went near Rk and touched his forehead and asked "Rk are you alright? Did have any memory loss in this one week or did you eat something in the afternoon that affected to your brain" asked Madhu becoming concerned. Rk chuckled and replied "No Madhu Nothing has happened to me and I can understand the reason for you being shocked. It's just that I realized that I should stop irritating you and I know that you hate me for irritating you. So today onwards I won't irritate you and will try to be good with you." "And I'm sorry Madhu for irritating you".

Madhu told him "it's ok Rk. Now complete your work fast till then I will go bring snacks for you". After having snacks and completing the work Rk bid Good bye to Madhu and her parents and went away.

In Madhu's dream. Madhu was dancing with a beautiful young man whose face was covered with a mask. "You always come in my dreams and dance with me and every time and when I try to see your face my dream will get over but today I really want to see your face" replied Madhu while dancing with the man. "Today I'm all yours Madhu. You can see my face as today no one is going to stop you" replied the man. Madhu slowly opened his mask and got shocked to see his face and told "Rk" and he pulled her by her waist which made Madhu's eyes widen in shock and the next moment she felt somebody's lips on her lips. She realized that she was been kissed by none other than Rk.



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Rishabala Ts: Do I love you?or Do I hate you?
Written by Shriya.bk
So guys here goes the second part.One more part to go.
Well some of you misunderstood that Rk was in love but no, he just likes her in part 1.

Madhu woke up with a sudden jerk. Sweat trickling down her forehead. She had never expected that her dream boy would be Rk and she never thought that he would kiss her. Well she agreed that Rk was handsome and good looking and she herself has a crush on him. Madhu got up from her bed and went to drink water. After drinking water she came back and tried to sleep but sleep was very far from her eyes. She was just trying to close her eyes but every time when she tried to close her eyes she could only see Rk's face coming in front of her.

Next day Padmini went to wake up Madhu as usual but was shocked to see Madhu already dressed up. She went near Madhu and asked "What happened baby? Today you got up early without me waking you up and why are your eyes swollen?" Madhu replied "Nothing Mama just for a change I got up early and yesterday I didn't sleep properly that's why my eyes are swollen." Padmini became concerned and asked "What happened bay? Anything troubling you? Did you have a nightmare?" Madhu said " Nahi Mama it's nothing no problem at all it's just that I had very very cute and a sweet dream from which I woke up all of a sudden and after that I couldn't sleep." "If you have any problem then do tell me baby I am always there for you na." said Padmini and went hugged Madhu. Madhu reciprocated the hug and told "No problem Mama .When Mama is there then why should I worry" saying this Madhu started giggling and Padmini also joined.

After having breakfast and wishing her Dad Good Morning she went to college. In college she met Trishna and told her about last night's dream leaving the kiss. "Trishna I am really worried. What if Rk really becomes my Dream boy? Though I have a crush on him I still do hate him for his irritation" said Madhu to Trishna. Trishna replied " O hello Madam didn't you forget about the phone call which you made yesterday and told Trish today Rk came to my home and told that he would like to complete his work and also apologized for irritating me all these days and also instead of calling me Madz he started calling me Madhu. Can you believe it?'Now please don't tell me that you forgot about the phone call". "No Trish I didn't forget about the phone call. It's just that I'm confused." said Madhu.

Suddenly somebody came and told "Hello girls is anyone talking about me?" said Rk coming and standing between Madhu and Trishna. "No Rk we were just talking about something else and do you want to know on what we were talking?" said Trishna while winking at Madhu. Madhu just gave her a deathly glare and told her to be quiet by her eyes which went noticed by Rk .Well Rk was always curious to know about anything related to Madhu. "Well yesterday Madhu got a dream in which she saw the face of her dream boy and was telling it to me but she is not telling who her dream boy was that's why I am pestering her to tell it" said Trishna once again winking at her and Madhu just ignored her and was waiting for Rk's reply. Rk told "Oh...I thought you both were talking about me. Well I'm really very curious to know who her dream boy is? Well as far as I know about Madhu she wouldn't tell about her dreamboy. Right Madhu?" saying this he winked at Madhu. Madhu didn't know how to react and just smiled.

After the college they all went back home. Here Rk was very curious and was eagerly waiting to know who was Madhu's dream boy. This was the first time Rk was so much eager. Yesterday just like Madhu even Rk also had a dream in which he and Madhu were dancing and when he had kissed her the dream ended. Today in the morning also he was very eagerly waiting to see Madhu in the college. He went to see Madhu in the college where he heard Madhu and Trish talking. He got curious on what they both were talking. So he went and asked them both whether they talking on him but to his utter disappointment they were talking about Madhu's dream boy which made him angry. He didn't know why he got angry. Like always he controlled himself and acted to be interested but was totally opposite to that.

3 months was over and Rk was still obsessed with the dream boy thing. Though he and Madhu used to talk regularly and now they were friends. He still didn't forget about the dream boy. He started developing special feelings for Madhu which he knows and also has a soft corner for her in his heart. After the day he got his first dream with Madhu, he regularly gets dreams with her.

Madhu also became friends with Rk and regularly talks with him. She would always have him in her dreams and now a days she doesn't get worried of Rk being her dream boy. She had a separate place for him in her heart and like Rk she also started developing special feelings which she didn't realize yet.

Only one person knew that Rk is falling in love with Madhu and Madhu was falling in love with Rk. That person was none other than Trishna as she knew both of them very well. She would always observe both of them and all the time when Madhu and she used to talk, indirectly or directly Madhu would be talking about Rk and the same was with Rk also. Trishna is eagerly waiting for them to realize their love for each other and confess it.

One day after the college everyone were going home Madhu realized that her driver was not going to come today as he had taken a off and today morning also her Dad dropped her. She was thinking how to go home when Rk came and asked "What are you thinking Madhu?" Madhu said "Rk just now I realized that my driver is not going to come today and today morning also Dad dropped me. Now if I call him he would be busy in his meeting right. So Rk can you do me a favour? Can you drop me till home?" "It's okay Madhu I would surely drop you" said Rk.

Rk dropped Madhu near the gate and Rk asked her "Madhu can I meet Paddy aunty because I want to have her tasty food and I'm hungry." Madhu told Rk "Is this a thing to ask. You can come whenever you want. This like your home only na. Thanks a lot for dropping me" said Madhu and called him inside.

"Mama...Mama...where are you? Rk has come Mama come fast" Madhu said while going inside the kitchen when she saw a note on the fridge. It was from Padmini "Madhu baby I'm going to meet your aunt and will come back by 8.I have kept the food in the fridge. If you feel hungry then have it baby. Love you, Mama" was written in the note.

Madhu came out and told "Sorry Rk Mama is not there at home but don't worry she has kept the food for us. I will go heat it till then you wait in the living room." Rk told "No problem Madhu .Even I also will come inside the kitchen. What will do here sitting in the living room? It would be boring for me right." "Okay Rk you also come" saying this Madhu went inside while Rk came behind her. Madhu took the food out from the fridge and saw that it was Palak panner and Roti which she loved the most and told "See Rk Mama has made my favorite dish. I will heat it till then you wait". "Eagerly waiting Madhu heat it fast" said Rk .

Madhu kept the food inside the oven and set the timer for 10 minutes and when she turned back she bumped into Rk and Rk caught her from falling down. Their eyes locked and Rk made her stand straight and pulled by her waist. He brought his face closer to hers and Madhu just closed her eyes felling his hot breath on hers. Rk was just mesmerized with the beauty he was holding and he could hear her heart beat racing with their proximity. Rk just placed his lips on her smooth and sweet lips. He started sucking her lips with passion and Madhu was in such a daze that she felt hat only they both were there in this universe and no one else. Rk suddenly stopped realizing what he was doing and was about to withdraw when Madhu suddenly started kissing him with equal passion. She slowly fisted her hands in his hairs pulling him closer. He bit her lips which made her gasp and he took advantage of this and entered his tongue. He started caressing her mouth with his tongue and slowly their tongues met and the passion between them exploded even more.

Well guys I know that you all want to throw eggs, tomatoes and all for giving such a late update. But sorry everyone I was busy.
Please do drop in your likes and comments.
Hope you like the update.
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Edited by Shriya.bk - 10 years ago
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Guys I know you all want to all kind of things for not updating but what to do I am busy in studying and I had a lot of work to do in school. Uff too much of work!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Coming to the story I don't know from where I got the crappy idea to write the story. I know I totally suck in romance!!! So finally finishing my stupid speech I would like to tell you all that I will surely post the last part on Sunday. I have already written the last part guys I have to just proofread it. I will surely post in on Sunday because I will be totally free on that day.

Pakka wala promise guys. Update on Sunday.

Hope you all will understand!πŸ˜ƒ





Edited by Shriya.bk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Party All N8 And also DAy!!!!! I came 1st ...yahoooπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Congratulation ur new storyπŸ‘
OOO My U dedicated me thanks ShriyuπŸ€—πŸ€—
Nyc writing dear
Madhu having dream of her HERO and At last she saw his face😳😳😳
Love the way RK irrited Madhu
Aur ha RK called madhu as madz at 8th standard huh?????πŸ˜‰
And Rk knows about his heart that he loves madhu
and madhu????
She doesntπŸ˜†
Waiting to know how will she know that she loves RK
Madhu considered RK as her best enemy [:))]
LMAO
BT WAY THE TITLE OF UR STORY IS PERFECT
AND THE ANSWER YES I LOVE U SHRIYU

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rs/unrss...
yippeee...me second...
awsome start princesss...
really love this friends plus enemy...hehehh...
like their when she get irritae nd he enjoy...so one week distance change some thing...
waiting for next...con.ssooonnn!!!!!!
Edited by Arakshiya_58 - 11 years ago
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Awesome part. Loved it.
Haha. It was funny. Enemy= Friendship πŸ˜†
Loved the title. It is cute. And also, thanks or the dedication.
Waiting for the next.
Edited by shriyakadge - 11 years ago
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nice one tfs for pm 😊
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First thanks for dedicating this TS for me and the others.😳
It was a cute and funny first part.
The way RK irritates Madhu and the nhok jhok between Madhu and Trishna.πŸ˜†
I knew as soon I read she was happy that he was away, that it would be RK that was in love with her...πŸ˜† Also that he will realise it. But I didn't expect him to stop irritating Madhu in this update, I thought maybe it would be in the other part. But I am glad it was in this update. Cause then we would have a chance to see Madhu fall in love with RK...RK protecting her from some guy that eyes her in collage.
And since their parents are long time family friends that they will accept those two's relationship and suggest marriage.
I have so many more things going on in my mind, one of them other possible angles you can proceed with this story.πŸ˜†
Sorry for the late unresing and somewhat short comment.
Again thanks for the dedication for me and the others.
Thanks for the wonderful TS and the PM.
Continue soon,πŸ˜‰
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Congratz for new story.πŸ‘Awesome start dear Shriya.πŸ˜ƒ
Loved Trishna,Madhu frndshp and Rk irritating Madhu.😳So Rk realize that he loves Madhu bt Madhu don't till now.πŸ˜›So much change in 1week.
Lovely Banner.
Cont.soon.😊
Edited by RM14 - 11 years ago
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congratz for ur first story Shriya...
is dis ur first story? I can't believe
it..such a flawless writing...
beautiful banner Shriya...
loved all characters...so,rk
realised his love for madhu..
I guess madhu will realize her
love soon..superb start dear...
continue soon...
Thanks for the pm dear..
Edited by drashtira - 11 years ago

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