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Originally posted by: madhurish

Hurray!! victory!! VICTORY!!🥳Party time Yeah victory. And vengance will be mine. 😈

dont play with me Meg.. 😈 You should listen to Sudha. And Sudha take you own advice. Don't play with a person who is awake most of the time. She will get her vengance.😆

stalker rules lol😆🤣

sorry meg😳

go sleep ni.. Thanks for d update though u made us wait & Fight for this spot😆 I said I would update on friday and when every comment have been replied to. Friday has barely come and I had only one comment to reply to.

for the 7th time out of 11 Parts i came first to comment & Consecutively for 5 Times i m grabbing this spot... Great!!⭐️⭐️⭐️ Wow. Someone is counting.

unres...

awesome update Ni. 👏👏 Thanks.

but i have lots of confusions...yes till now i was quite clear but after reading this part i have confusions regarding ages & Yrs of events taken place. I know because I wasn't very clear About the months.😆

if i m wrong anywhere please tell me bcos i might mistook something...

malik, paddy & Radha died 10 Or 11 Yrs back in combustion...that time madhu must Be around 15 Or 16 Yrs... Exactly. 10 months bak it was 10 years. Now in this update it was 11 years. They had their Little Death anniversery somewhere in those 10 months. I rounded off. As a math lover a big no, but as a Economist and years of correcting someone with the same and later stopped because there was no end in all of that, this happened.😆

now aryan is 5 Yrs but sullu left his agency when aryan was born..so 5 Yrs back...that time mse ceo was someone else... So sullu replaced him & That didn't go well with him...& Also sullu found d frauds taking place in d company & Also d plan for merging mse with other company but he didnt let that happen...so they warned sullu even tried to bribe but sullu dared them & we know wat happened to sullu lol.. He had it coming. As much I liked him being Madhu's brother I have the urge to kill him off again. 🤣 But sullu got killed only before 10 Months back to present. Did he took nearly 4 Yrs to find d truth? Yes. Because he didn't have any prior experience in being a CEO. He was an agent all along. So it took time to being briefed and taught up what a CEO does and eventually he got the Picture. As for the fraud. As a fellow Economist student you must have read about this. Every year a CEO must oversee and give his signature on the company's financial statement and by that giving his Word that Everything has been condutced according to law, that there aren't any anomalies in the booking. But, and this is a big but because a CEO has his own crew of statutory auditors, during the time he oversaw the process he came across something that wasn't right in the statement. Later looking it up and finding the truth. So if you Count in it takes about one year to teach him. And him might not notice this right away, lets say two years. During that last one year he made some digging and find the truth. Cause going through old finanicial statements with the account records and matching them up takes time. Especially cause those who were involved have probably covered up their tracks in order not to get caught. Well this is a mix of too much Movies and have read BA last semester. 😆 And it made sense to me, but I should have probably taken it in and explained it for those who doesn't know.😆 & Wait they could have merged d company shortly after maliks death right? Yes they could, but couldn't. That's the Beauty of the entire thing here. 😆 Sultan and Madhu are the successors of Shamsher and Padmini Malik. They inherit Everything that was theirs. And since this happend when Madhu was 15, Sultan being 3 years older than her, 18. He was legally an adult. And the only family Mahdu had was him, so he was her Guardian. A Company can not get merged with Another one without the major shareholders agree to it. Which are Sultan and Madhu. But since Madhu being 15 and have no saying in it, it was only Sultan. So no merging could have happened. The board can only appoint a CEO but not overrule their voting. ...hmm but before dying sullu met rk & Said how guilty he felt for accusing madhu when she was innocent & At no fault but that idiot didnt say who was behind it to rk? Is it mohan? Won't say. 😆 Thats y even madhu is now hesitating to name d person to rk bcos mohan is his dad? Well, i ll give d reason y i think mohan as culprit...firstly he was not at the time of accident..he could have planned to kill malik & Paddy but radha also fall prey in his plan..but he made everyone think it was madhus mistake & He could have become d ceo of mse as he holds next highest no of shares but after 5 Yrs from d accident sullu quit his job for aryan & Trish & Joined mse & Being A major shareholder he became d ceo as decided by d board...& sullu could have found mohan behind his parents death...mohan could have betrayed malik for status... Even madhu said bhatia acted as a puppet but d sting was in some other persons hand so who is d someone? Haha won't say.😆 Evil of me. I can only say you will soon find out.😆 With giving regard to d above said reasons i suspect mohan but why would he kill his Llown son in law? Is he so cunning? No it could not be possible so who is d master mind behind bhatia? Any balraj like character to show up? Or any abhay kappoor who could be a rival to mse?? & Bhatia working for him? Okay that u clarify in future updates...Beautiful analyses Sudha. I love it.😛 Actual I have to admit I made an error regarding the economical aspect.🤣 But won't say which.😆 And it is minor important.😆

so now partners are in mission to kill the killers who killed their parents & Sullu...so action is on d way...interesting...Yes. First Comedy, you know what I am talking about.😉😆

u made me go through d entire story once to mske myself clear... I dont know from where i got d thought that they died in car accident & Madhu was d one driving so everyone blamed her but here u said something else so i checked previous updates not fully but vaguely...No. Never mentioned a car accident in the previous updates. Only an accident, cause I have Always imagined to be a big kitchen blast, blaming the gas and the smoking habit Shamsher had.😆

even rk blamed madhu for his mother& Her parents death but how come he trusted later & Startd dating with her? Did he simply trust her that she couldn't have done that if so i m happy..Well at first like any other person he would have blamed her, but later gotten over it and stating it was an accident and not her fault. But there would Always be a piece of him thinking she was the culprit. but wait i didnt get d reason behind his break up? Why? Okay he promised he will not say anything to madhu but that sullu himself told everything to madhu & Cheated rk? Yes, he cheated RK in the last second. He knew he would get killed. So came to Madhu. 🤣 He wanted her dead as well. 🤣 Would you have been happier if it was RK getting shot and almost getting killed?😆 See he didnt know abt d murderer but madhu does? Why this play? Sullu could have directly told everything to rk & madhu...I Think you answered your own question above.😆

one more thing...in one update u said madhu was tortured but why & By whom?? Yes. And soon you will find out. I didn't forget that.😆 They are spies but why they r taking so long to find everything...see its been 10 yrs but still d killer is not punoshed & He is roaming around freely? To be fair everyone was blaiming Madhu. And stuff like this rarely suffers up again. Again to much Movies.😆 But keeping it simply. Money talks. 😆Even its been 10 Month since sullu died but now only they r on there mission when madhu found it earlier itself...Yeah mission together. What makes you Think that Madhu didn't do anything herself during these months? How do you Think she found out Everything other than that chit.😆 She knew about stuff even RK doesn't know, meaning she Went the extra mile.😆 Actually wat she foundfrom d book..what clue was that? He told her about a Place, where he has all the information he had gathered. Actually I thought about revealing that in the coming updates during the fun parts.😆 That i didnt get so clear me.

okay two months back in bar what hapened u showed, then taxi kiss scene, then they stayed together, last part their morning knok jkok...i mean silly fights then she brought rk to this place blindfolded & Made him spill d truth by threatening him to kill lol with walle...my dear eva u r so challu hai...making a kid lie lol... Even kavya di's madhu lie la didnt do this lol & Now pulled this act against rk...but he is so in love with his jungli billi so only taking ur hate bites, angry kicks & Killer bullet short & He said everything like he was telling a ryhme to his teacher lol..& U didnt give him a chance to dance lol i mean romance...not even let him to seal d day with a kiss...again kiss miss...I told you Sudha. Nothing will happen like that in this FF.😆

okay, so partners are well planned & They r gonna create a hungama in d party with which u started this story but went in to flashback cube...finally i hope from next update we will get back to d party wer d mask will be out & partners will get into action...i hope i m still on track but not deviated anywhere if so let me now...Exactly end of all Flashbacks, and the revelation of the torture and the reason behind it.😆

sorry for this long comment, Ni but confusions & Curiosity made me type so long..

eager to read next update..I am glad you wrote this. A oure analyses.😳 And I am happy I could reply to most of your questions.😆

thanks for d pm which really served its purpose as ever lol..😆It will someday. Mark my Words.😈

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life

Nooo!!!!!!! 😆

My stupid net failed my at the last moment 😆 I know the feeling.😆
I will avenge my defeat next time 😆 congrats sudha...I appalud the skilled stalker 👏Do that.😆 But not like this.
Why does the net have to glitch out when I need it the most? 🤣 maybe Rohan possessed it...or Tallibala hacked my phone 🤣 I Think it was Sudha's doing not those guys.😆

Anyways I did enjoy spamming the thread...but now you are going to get your revenge Nina...Yes I will 😈 You have 3 threads so I have to choose.😈 and I now have to wake up early to finish my homework 🤣 Haha. 🤣 At least you got more sleep than me.😆The stress and pressure was so real 😆 my heart jumped whenever I saw your comment 🤣 🤣and you evilly removed your update from the previous page... 😆 I got first there...and then my happiness was killed after that edit 🤣 shot down from the sky Well serves you both right. I told you to keep it down. But you couldn't wait 10 minutes.

Finally onto the update...now what do I say...It was a long and amazing update Nina. Liked how everything was cleared up between RK and Madhu and now Madhu isn't upset with him
Eleven bullets in that gun? 🤣 She already shot one, so technically there were 12 in Walle. 😆 Wow...Tallibala I must say...you came prepared...to face a guy who won't even lay a finger on you in a harmful way. Those poor bullets will never get to fly in the air 🤣 They could. You never know when an enemy is lurking.😆 and one of them got shot in the floor...concrete doesn't seem like a comfortable place to get smacked into 🤣 I've been through it once 🤣 I almost punched the kid who did that to me 🤣 The mature me is saying good for you for taking ht ehigh road, while the other one is saying what the? You should have done it. 😆

Glad Madhu found out the truth...and now that she isn't the murderer...and finally RK and she are together again...well maybe 😆 You will found it out.😆 I brought a good Little twist in.🤣

And Walter has a nickname now...along with Madhu 🤣 I love the movie walle by the way 😆
And ice queen reminds me of Frozen..."let it go...let it go..." 🤣 let's go build a snowman 🤣
Plenty of snow in Sweden 😆 Northern Sweden yes. South thankfully no.😆 It's already dark, windy, raining and foggy at 2-3 pm in daytime. And add the snow, accidents are bound to happen on the highway, thanks to uncareful drivers. I almost wouldn't be here Writing this comment.🤣

Waiting for the next update Nina...and I will get first...I will 😆 And hopefully you will.
Longest comment written ever... 😆 wow I am insane Congratz Chotu. And thanks for Writing it on my FF.🤗


Kuku Bhatia...Tallibala is coming for you 🤣 Unless I get to her first 🤣 Be careful Chotu she has Walle.🤣

Originally posted by: madhurish

Thank u ni for that crystal clear reply to all my doubts. Yes i got whatever u said abt d time delay in finding everything. Hmm..being a accountants student i shld have thought this before but d thing i mainly missed was sullu being a newbie to d business bcos its not such a big task to find a fraud now a days & That merger thing i know madhu was minor but sullu was major so that question raised..but u clarified that too..

so everything is perfectly clear for me now so i can run one step behind u in d race bcos i cant compete with d author but only with other readers. I think if d readers see that reply of urs then may be their confusion get clear if they have any or i dont know whether i was d only one with so many confu.. & Ques..

anyway thanks for ur reply & Also finding my analysis beautiful.. Thats really a good compliment to here from an analysis queen. Sorry its one lengthy comment so i thoight not to decorate it futher.

Originally posted by: madhurish

Well ni that accident thing was actually my misconception..whenever i hear d word accident car will come to my mind as u could see many car accidents in many stories but i not only gone through ur updates to find that but also clarify some age details & That recap mainly served well for me will doig this. U see in suspense stories its quite hard to remember every single info right? Glad u r brilliantly keeping everything in mind & Seeding it when the right time come.. Good job bondy..👏

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

Nina u love to confuse ur readers
now dont u like sudha dii pointed out some points abt ages even i had those doubts in my mind but i m too lazy to write any so plss do answer me in that regards I answered, check my reply to hers. And I will post along with the next update.😆

Coming to update
wat can i say i m in love with this
idiotic love sick puppy spyman Well I didn't expect anything else.😆
he doesnt even fear her gunshots lol No he doesn't.
now that is something too much for me to take
n huh spybala wat a move u used rks sautan to spill the beans n he gave in recited the
night story to u n did u just slapped him Actually I wanted a few more slaps, but that would be too much this early in the story.😆
for saying the truth abt u behaving like victim Of course you are agreeing with K🤣
huh u really need to get a thorough checkup
my darling sautan bcoz u actually behaved like a silly victim if u already knew the truth
u cld have taken action already na
y throwing ur tantrums over that poor guy She should check herself in an asylum. 🤣

okay as u havent clarified that who was the girl rk kissed so i m assuming it was me
who dare to kiss him back lol Yeah who sares if it isn't Neha.🤣 Actually you'll find that out also soon, if I don't choose to drop it. But the alternative is so much fun.😆
as only i wont fear his junglibilli n neither
can she harm me wen rk is with me hahaha Of course one jungli billi meets Another.😆
okay my dreams abt him wont end
as u see u made me love him more with this update lol I knew I would.😆
so i m in all my claws n nails n to kill bala lol
awww atleast she cld have allowed him to seal the deal he wld have thrown a party definately then
hehe he can do that in future Wait wait. I am Reading this right?😲 You were disappointed because Madhu didn't kiss RK? Neha disappointed?😲
or maybe some more force kisses will bring bala on her knees as no one can be left spared with his charms 🤣

it was a gripping update
now waiting to read wat they will do Thanks Neha. Hopefully it will be next week.