TS: Being Again *Part 3(Last) (page 24)*

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

hmmm..what I can say abt the update...Madhu is in such a state..I guess she can hardly recognize her own Shadow...and this RK wanted to help her..

will she be able to...goshh...the way u described abt the painting..is so amazing..

I so wanted guys like RK...will that be possible...

will wait for next update...thank you for the story dear👏👏👏

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ashitha235

@ashitha235

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Very beautiful and touching update... you have written madhus state of mind so well... especially about her nightmares... for feeling disgusted about herself ... considering her beauty as curse and betrayal from her to be life partner... everything beautifully shown...liked it when Rishabh said his decision will not depend on that one day ...

Now want Rishabh to build confidence in her to face life, people... if he says yes yes now she will think he took this decision out of sympathy...

Waiting for the next part...

Pls update soon...

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BEEVI

@bevi-najim

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

it is more than lovely ,awesome,amazing ,outstanding,super and ect

if i say its heart wrenching,heart touching ,very emotional its is very very...less too say

compare to madhu's pain the girl like her they pain is 1000 time more than these word they r less to her pain

if i say i can feel her pain i can't say it is true or not

her pain we cannot compare to normal pain

but when i was reading the update and now

something inside me is aching and my eye r filled with tears

it is to hard to think

i know rk some how make her to fell that she is special for him

make her to accept that her life is more worth than that worst night

and that devils who trying to making her life worse and make her to fell her like dirt

i prying to god to send more more angel like rk to make the life of those angels in darkness as ray of light

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tvcv

@tvcv

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Wonderful update...

You have described Madhu's emotions perfectly!!!!

The pain ,trauma she suffered was depicted very realistically .

Please continue soon...

Waiting for the next update...

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Very beautiful update, dear

U portrayed Madhu's feelings very well

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Wow amazing update pls cont fast

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Momi

@momi78

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

OMG .. how beautiful! You described Madhu's pain so precisely ... so emotional .. Please continue soon.

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SreeRK

@SreeRK

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

RK is damn right..its high time Madhu forgets those monsters..

so easy to say na

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Amazing! Chapter 2 was fantastic.

I did not expect Madhu to tell RK. I thought her parents would tell RK's parents as that seemed to be the pattern in this situation.

I love that you are giving us both RK's thoughts and Madhu's thoughts. I appreciate being able to know what they are both thinking.

Madhu's outburst was wonderfully written. You can feel her pain and ongoing nightmare. By the way, I hate her ex-fiance. Disgusting.

And RK's thoughts and response to Madhu's confession was just - I have no words. The decision RK takes without even realizing it - it is like he is a gift from God.

The way he sees her pain, and feels it too! That is one special human being.