The Vengeance Lover.......Updated Part 27 @page 118 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: drashtira

hi vandy,happy to seeu as a writer. 🤗
interesting prologue.
continue soon.pls bring
madhus character as bold,
bubbly and intelligent..
dis is first time I am reading
a ongoing story from
prologue itself.pls pm me
whenever u update.

hey neera...thnx dear...🤗
yeah madhu will b strng in ds...
aww thnk u so much fr readn it...wl pm u fr sure
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: shasha1989

interesting story dear..continue soon & do pm me when you update

thnx dear...wl surely do...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: PRATHA1

Awesome prologue! Nice Banner & character sketch!
Interesting revenge story! Poor & innocent RK accepted jail for his love! Who was the girl betrayed RK?
waiting for the update! please pm me!

thnx alot dear...
in 3-4 updtes u will knw...wl surely pm u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Ni33

Awesome, intruinging start Vandy. 👏👏 I am glad you took this step, becoming a writer.

And thanks to Sweta for helping and pushing you to write this story.
May I know what movie inspired you to write this story.😳
Oh by the way I love Rasha's ans Deepti's comments and I completely agree with them. 😆
And I am sure I would do the same with Amna's comment.😆
I don't know if you will send PMs when you update this story. But if you do, please add me in the list.😳

thnx dear...
yeah thts our cc movie...v keep makng tht in our cc which is most hilarious one...😆😆
i will surely send u pm dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: ferii

Van look I am promoting our movie in u r story thread 😆 😆 ...

haha...thnk u so much dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: TRPS

hello, Rasha suggested me to read this story.now looking forward to read it.
P.s- as my signature says i am not good in expressing thoughts.

thnk u so much fr givng it a try...
thnx
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

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.this part is written by sweta...my crazy frnd...🤗

Ughh...u look absolute delicilious she said kissing his neck...she inhaled his masculine scent which played with her senses.

He held her back as she planted kiss on his neck. For him it was the same thing he did for last 1 week. He let her take the control...she bit his neck and he hissed clutching her hairs tightly. She licked her lips smirking she loved his dominance...Women all are the same behind money or sex...he thought..

She leaned forward...and traced her tongue on his perfect m shaped lips ...he tighten his fingers in hair pulling her behind...smirking..

She looked him raising her brow to which he shook his head gently giving her a sly smile..

She groaned in frustration pulling back and moved aside to get her purse...while he stood her with hands folded to his chest...

She removed the cash and came to him thrusting them in his hand.

RK grinned and put them in his pockets...and then grabbing her ..

She smiled wickedly before she ran her hands all over his naked abs...O boy he was such a hotty..

She tugged his arm and made him hold her waist before brushing her lips to his...

AFTER A WHILE

He threw the bundle of notes on his table..

Mukund lifted his face from the book he was reading and saw him. He also saw the bundle of notes...Mukund sighed in pain..
u don't have to do this maan..kab tak chalega yeh..kab tak karoge tum yeh.. he asked him

RK looked him in his eye and said with a sad smile...here u go Mukund.......maine tumhara debt utar diya..thus I have returned all the money..u had lend for my sister..m grateful to u..

No..RK..i don't..i don't want ur money he placed his hand on his shoudler..

RK we r frnds..its not about the money..I m much more worried about u..every day u go..and flirt with some or the other girl..who...who satifised her thrist of body using you..and..he sighed..RK kab tak karog aisa...

Since last month RK was with many women only to get money. He kissed them hard n did all they wanted him to do...only to get money.. He wasn't that same medical student who was ambitious...he is a human with no heart... He has no feelings not once he cared about the men from whose wife's he used to get money.

No words came out of his mouth...he just stood there completely blank..
RK...
Mukund called him once again..

RK tum ab kya karoge..jab se bahar aye ho..yeh paise mujhe wapas karne ka bhoot sawar tha tum par..now what..

Aur yeh sab karne se kya milega...RK yeh cheating dhoka dene se

RK smirked...Mukund thank u for everthing u did for my sis when I wasn't here..u really took a great care..and I dint want to be in ur debt always..

He hardened his tone..But now this RK isnt the same one..cheating aur dhoke ne mere 5 saal ki khusiyaa hi nahi..meri aur meri behen ki ane ki zindagi bhi chin li...Aur isliye I wanted to master this coz this will be my payback to her...he gritted his teeth..

Maine apna pyaar bahkhubhi nibhaya..aur ab..badla bhi achese hi nibhaunga......

RK Mukund said shockingly..

Yeh tum..kyaa..

Nahi Mukund...RK shook his head gently indicating him no..

Don't stop me..whatever happen changed my life..and I wont let it ruin Trishna's or my life..

I want everything back..each and every happiness back in my life...she has to pay for that Mukund even if it costs her life she has to...

Mukund flinched with the instenity of his worths. His eyes were dark which were obsessed with revenge..deadly revenge.

Revenge is a confession of pain- Latin Proverb


Precap- flashback...


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Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
nice update ...pls pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
omg i feel so bad for rk
he is suffering for years now

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