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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys it's Aleena here and I am going to tart a new ff on Rishbala. I m new here in IF and need some help so plz help!!! šŸ˜›

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well here is the Prologue:

It was a dark and stormy night and Rk and Madhu were trapped inside a haunted haveli (Mansion). Madhu and Rk were with the Cid members all trapped in a circle while masked men were holding guns at their temples 😭. In the middle stood Sultan, the antagonist of this story.

"Hahaha" laughed the evil Sultan as he glanced lustily at the beautiful women around him.

So guys that's it for now. I need at least 10 comments before u post the CS

Thnx all and good bye
Aleena
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hope you start it soon Aleena.

I will totally read your book🤔

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Posted: 10 years ago
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start it soon Aleena


I will totally read your bookā­ļø
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Definitely I will
Thnx for all ur comments guys and luv u
If I get at least 6 more comments, then I will do the CS tomorrow
Thnx
Aleena šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely start
continue soon.we r waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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[SIZE=4]Character Skech]
Thnx so much guys for all ur comments

So here is the CS as I promised!!

Madhubala Malik- a sweet, smart, brave, athletic and witty CID officer. For her family comes first and especially her Purvi Di. She is the youngest sister of all the women in CID. She, with her whole CID team get kidnapped by a criminal named Sultan who has a bad eye for women.

Rishabh Kundra (Rk)- an arrogant, courageous, handsome, rude but smart CID officer. He is the youngest brother of all the guys in CID. He absolutely hates Sultan because of the looks he gives to his sister-in-laws and Madhu.

ACP Pradyuman- the boss of all the members of CID. He is also the oldest brother of all the men in CID. He is the husband of Forensic Doctor. Sonali. He has a strict but caring personality.

Forensic Doctor. Sonali- she is a caring and smart doctor of CID. Wife of ACP Praduman. Oldest sister of all the women.

Purvi Malik- she is Madhu's favorite of all her sisters. Purvi is the GF of senior inspector Rajat who is Rk's favorite brother.

Sorry guys for the short CS but these people are important in the story. The rest if the CID members are not that important so that's why I didn't write a CS for them.
I know that some will not like theses CID couples but sorry they are some of the most bravest and awesomely people I know in the world (other than u guys)
Thnx again and goodbye

Aleena
PS- I will try to update every day but I m in grade 8 so that may not always be possible. šŸ˜†
MaanandZaina thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
I loved it but I had a question like I always do!

Why is RK in the story?


Is it because you like him or is it because you hate him?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Would like to read this story Aleena dear
Please continue soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnx guys for all ur comments and here is

CHAPTER 1

"Kaminey!!" Madhu screams as Sultan laughs evilly at her futile attempts to hurt him.
Madhu looks back and glares at her fellow CID member, Rk, as he holds her arm preventing her from doing anything stupid.

"You Idiot Cid people can never defeat me! I m the best." Sultan yells over Madhu and her teams voices.
Sultan then walks over to each of the women in turn and smirks at them. But before he could touch any of them, Rk grabs Madhu, Pradyuman grabs Sonali, rajat grabs purvi and all the other people grab their girls and run into different toms and loch the door.

"Let me go," screams Madhu as Rk slams her on the wall and shuts her mouth with his hand.
Rk slowly let's go of Madhu as she begins to calm down and bursts into tears. Rk gives Madhu a hug till she calms down.

As Rk slowly loves away from Madhu, he notices that Madhu has fallen asleep in his arms. He quietly picks her up bridal style and puts her on the bed which was in the corner if the room.
He puts the blanket over her and goes to the window to look outside.

Guys this is all for today cuz I m at school. Sorry I wasn't able to write yesterday as I was very sick because of the weather change in Canada. 😭
Guys plz lots and lots of comments and I will surely try to update tomorrow!

Recap- sultan calls everyone out for a party and a dance coming up 😳
Thnx all
Aleena

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