RiMa SS: Crave For Love.. part 21:page 57.(29/5)

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Ahmadalli

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Posted: 10 years ago

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pls continue the story waiting you sais you ll be back in march now its nearly end of april

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@Arakshiya_58

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Originally posted by: Ahmadalli
pls continue the story waiting you sais you ll be back in march now its nearly end of april

ya i know i said tht but wht to do too much busy schedul ...willl try to update sooonnn ..b..
thanks nd sorry for being late...

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Aaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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loved ur story...would loved to read more...waiting for an update... :-(((

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Aaniya

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already send u buddy request...if u do pms then pm me also... :-)))))) !!!!! :-)))))

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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update soon ... missing d story

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Part 7

Madhu

I observed his changing expressions when he saw the file...Dont know what was there in that file but his face was showing totally shocked mode...I call his name for the fifth time and finally grabbed his attention...

He hmmm in response and quickly start gathering files which were lying on floor...In a few minutes he ran away from there muttering see you later... I sat there like an idiot...Dont know what just happened...

In just some minutes his smiling face's charm flew away...But why???? What was there in that file???

"Madhu!" Liza shook me hard while I gave her angry look...She tooo glared back and ask "where were you losted?? Ab ghar nahi jaana kya??" I nodded my head Saying " Yeah...Lets go..."

Finally wedding is over...We are free for studies as after fifteen days exams are going to start and have to prepare lots...

Finally we reached at house and Liza hugged me tight...Me too hugged her back... After some minutes we broke hug nd I asked " so when will we meet next..." "Keep guessing.." She repliied playfully...I gave her angry look...I want her answer as tommorrow as its my birthday..Here she is replying like this...

"Okk...Then I will wait...As its your turn to come at home..." "I knew that Madhu!! Chal bye..." She walked away as her father was waiting from little far...I offer them to come but they refused ...so me too waved my hand saying bye...

I lied on my bed finally after this tiring day...Strange...All are on bed now...No one is awake for wishing me as sooon its going to be twelve...Arrgghh...Forget it...They always did same... Surely they will come with surprise...

"Madhu ...Tum aaj phir nahi gayi na check karne??" Mom asked angrily... " Ab kya check karna tha mujhe mom ???" I asked my mom little irritatingly... As now I m feeling to tired...Not in mooed to check something...

"I told you na that check upper room before sleeping..." Arrhh... Is it incomplete still??? "Why me always...??" I asked more irritatingly... "Because all are already driffted in sleep and only you are awake...So go..." I slipped into blanked and shout from inside " Mumma me bhi so gaya..."

I feel a little hit on head nd peeped out...Its dad... I smiled at him and sit up... Mom looked at me...And I turn to my dad for help...But he say " Go Madhu! !!"

I jumped out from bed and ran to tarrace...Again to face him... I came on tarrace ..Its little dark as shining stars cover its darkness... I smiled to see the view...

I walked towards flower pots and start talking with them... "O,,,My sweeties ..How are you..??I know me too bad.. do din se milne nahi aayi but me kya karu wo humare new guest..." I stopped in middle as it hit me that I am here for some work..I smacked my hand on head and walk towards his room...

I knocked slowly two three times but no reply...But the door open as it isnt locked...The scene shocked me...There he was in sleep...continiously calling Mom and dad... I quickly ran towards him and saw sweat bends on frorhead... He looks totally frightened..

I didnt understand what to do??? then I called his name softly... But he kept shivering...Finally I start crassing his hair..Making him feel easy...I kept it doing until he stop his words...and looked little relax.. me too take deep breath... and take my hand back.. In just some minutes he opened his eyes...

He stared at me...Now I looked in his eyes trying to get what was going in his mind...?? Why was he so much frightened??? Its just a dream or something else which is bothering him???

"You here??" He asked sating on bed looking away...

I realise our closeness...In just some moments we were so close... I quickly step back thinking that he dont like it... I turned towards table and saw everything is there...

" Haa..wo mumma ne bheja tha to check the room..If you need something..." I replied looking away... He didnt say anything so finally I turned to go back...

As I take steps he called my name...I stopped in way and turned to ask "Haan??" "Thanks..." I said its okk... But at that time he was totally in sleep so why he said thanks???

"For the first time I woke up without screaming...I think its because of you...SO thanks for that..." He replied my unasked question...But why this kind of things happening to him... I am going to ask but again he start "Aur me is bare me ab baat nahi karna chahta...Good night Madhu!!"

I feel bad for him...Want to know about him but may be its not correct time ...I have no right to push him to tell truth... "Good night...Dont worry will not say anythying until you told me... Please take care..."

I again made my way but this time stop by not my name but something else... he said "Happy birthday Madhu ... May god gives you all happiness of your life..."

I turned around and stare at him...As he was smiling at me...Some moments before I saw totally different part of him and now he had mask his pain so easily... This time I give her hearty smile as I m really happy that he is one who wish me first!!!

"Thank you so much...bye..."he nodded and finally I walked out...

Next evening...

He...

Now another day is passing..and it remind that another day is over and I am still at same point...That person is still living a great life who destroyed my family...Who snatched away my mom and dad from me...

At that day I promise myself that at any cost I will find him... He deserve the punishment ...He deserve the worst... I will not leave him...Who was the reason of my situation... Because of whom m getting those nightmares which are past of my life...

Nights...Last night...I dont know what happens there...Is Madhu saw me in that state or what she did??? Just know that after years I got up without screaming... And got someone by my side...

Still...I dont want someone who knew my this side...As I dont want sympathy and fake concern...But when I found her ...I feel strange... Want to share but why?? Will she understand me?? Will she help me???

Arghh..I dont know what is happening with me...I have to stop thinking about her...When she dont want to come near me...So why its bothering me??

I Know why she was there...Aunty send her intentionally as they want to give surprise...

Khush has offer me to come but I refused at that time...As that file's contents are bugging me...Yeaterday I found a link about my aim...Soon I will catch that b******..

I climbed up the stairs... and opened my room... But then my eyes catches something else...

She was sitting there on bench like before ...May be enjoying roadside views!! Suddenly it hit me that I have something for her...As its her birthday...

I Walk towards her...And stand behind her...She was so lost in her thought... "Hi miss birthday girl!!" She turn around and I gave her quick look...

She muttered hi...And give me side to sit... I get surprise by that... As today she give chance to be with her...But what is the reason???

She was looking little upset... "I am missing my friends..." She said looking roadside... For the first time she talk something about her without asking... I looked at her as she continued...

" Last year was the bestest birthday for me...They gave me such a wonderfull surprise...And today we didnt even meet..." I dont know what to say??? Just its the reason for being upset...

" It happens sometimes Madhu. ..happy with what you have..." She looked at me for some seconds then again turn her gaze... "You are right...Me bhi kabhi kabhi bachcho jaise behave karti hu... I have to be happy with what I have..." "Exactly..." I agreed with her... And she smiled looking at me muttering thanks...

I smiled back..As I am happy to help her... Its click me that I am here to give her birthday gift... I called her hasitatingly...Dont know why I m hasitating...May be its because this is the first time I am gifting something to someone...And she is girl...

She looked at mew questoningly and keeping her loose strand behind her here...Silently she encourage me to continue...

I took out a gift box which was wrapped up in golden paper and extend it towards her... She looked at me "yeh me.." She start... I ruffle my hair as m feeling strange... How to say...

"Wo...Wo its your birthday na so I brought this for you..." Finally I blurt out and take a deep breath...As if I had answered my teacher's question and waiting for response...

"Thank you..." She smiled brightly like a child "No sorry and no thanks in friendshi..." I leave my sentense as it that struck me that still we are not friends... I feel her gaze on me...I looked at her... She both didnt say anything...

Finally I stand up saying bye and turn around...But then feel a grip on my hand... I turned towards her raising my brows... And she leave my hand... Extending her hand she asked "Friends???" My heart jumped with joy... Finally its time to start a friendship. ...

Sorry for that...Please leave you view...That means alot to me...

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Edited by Arakshiya_58 - 10 years ago

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PART 8...

Madhu. ..

I was waiting for his response extending my hand...And in a few second as if without giving second thought he shake hand with me and our friends relation get aprroval...

Happiness was reflecting through his eyes...As if he was waiting for this day for very long...I remember first day when he met me here ...First thing what he asked about is friendship ...And i was being stupid ran away from there giving his stupid excuse...

That day was thinking I am stupid and now today I am feeling like being selfish...Yes...Reason is like I can not understand my action for extending hand...Just I knew i was feeling alone I want a friend and just his some words made me do that...What was he thinking about me...

After that handshake both were just finiding words as for me its first time a boy is my friend and for him I dont know the reason ...

But finally he broke the silence... And actioned me about gift...Ya my this year's first birthday gift from my new friend... I was going to unwrapped it when he stopped me... I looked at him with questioning eyes...

"Madhu .. Tumhari exact like to nahi pata so if pasand na aaye to bata dena..." I gave him smile... " I think aapki choice mujhse to achchi hi hogi...So dont worry.."

I carefully unwrapped it as I do always...Then a round shaped box fall in my hand...I opened it in that there was a brecelate of white shining moties it looks like just crystal...

It was too beautifull...As per my choice...Not so heavy...Not so less...Just perfect combo...I kept looking at it... "hows it??" he snapped me.. " Its beautifulll...Really thank you so much...One of the prittiest gift of my life..Specially iske moti its just looking like crystal...And I just love it...Thank you thank you so much..."

Rishab...

For the first time I saw her exited mode where she was beaming with happiness...Really it reflect how much she like my gift... In my mind I apriciate my choice as its first time and I am passed...I chucked my stupid thoughts ...She was kept thanking me... suddenly a thought came in my mind...

So I stoppped her thank you session... "Ok..Okk..Madhu itna bhi preity nahi hai...Thanks blona band karo..and tumhe pasand aaya isiliye i m very happy...But now we are friends No thanks and No soory..Ab ye tum Samjhi ya Samjhaoo..."

She looked away and say.. " Samjh gayi but jo cheez mujhe achchi lagti hai wo mere liye most pretty hai so aap aisa nahi bol sakte ke ye itna bhi achcha nahi hai...Ab ye baat aap Samjhe ya me samjhao.."

"Achcha mera dialogue mujhe hi mara jar aha hai...Himmat hai to jara meri taraf dekh kar farmaiye jo abhi abhi aapne kaha..." She became silent for some time ... Then "Aap.." She was going to start to say something when I stopped her... "Sabse pehle to tum mujhe aap bulana band karo... warna me bhi Ab tumhe Madhu nahi bulaunga..."

"nahi aap aisa nahi kar sakte.." "Arrey..Ye kaisa rule hai tum jo chaho bulao..Aur me nahi bula sakta..." "Par Madhu achcha naam hai..." "So you mean Rishab bura naam hai isliye tum aap bulati ho..." "Maine aisa kab kaha..."She fight back...I was enjotying her annoyed mood...So I continued my demand...

" mujhe aap bulana band karo warna me tumhe ek dusra name mil jayega...Choice is yours.." "Me nahi bulane wali aapko naam se.." She replied quickly saying mujhe aadat nahi hai...

"Ok..To mera bhi decision final hai..." "but.." "par kya..Ha??" "Madhu is good name.." "Again... So Rishab is bad haa??" "NO..No..No...Its very very very good isiliye to naam nahi lete.."

I was silent for a moment after hearing that...just looking at her..While she was looking here and there avoiding me... "Fine bataiye aap mujhe kya naam denge??" I smiled at my victory..."Itni bhi kya jaldi hai...Will call you till night...Ek baar to bulaunga hi...Samajh sako to samajh lena..."

She looked at me with confused expression then chuckled like as if she didn't care... Then I looked at my watch...It being 6;00 ..we were blabbering quite long on a stupid talk...But for me friendship is this... some fights...Some care ...Some love...Some trust...

Finally I said bye going to walk away... When she stopped me... " Thanks for changing my mood.." I smiled at her... "No thanks Miss..." I leave my sentence incomplete...

"Kal milte hai...at in auto..." I joked idiotickly..."Why...Tomorrow..?? Dinner baki hai ..Niche nahi aayenge..." " Have some work...will come...But not sure...Why are you asking..??" "Nothing...But ab hum friends ban hi gaye hai to mujhe nahi lagta ke invitation dene ki formality karni padegi..."

She said and walked away...For sometime I put pressure on my about invitation then I remember her cack cutting time...Obviously...She was inviting for it... Ghumaye bina to koi baat nahi kehti Miss.Malik..!!

Another happiest day of my life...Ya happiest day...For which I have very small list...Now today's day is going to be included ...As Crystle's birthday...

Madhu...

I cannot believe what just had happen on tarrace...I feel like no hesitation ...No fear..Those all thoughts were like flew away from my mind when I was talking to him...I just know now we are friends and nothing will come between our FRIENDSHIP...Will be friends always...Just best friends...

"Madhu Cake kaate.." Mom asked placing a vanilla cake infront of me..I looked around everyone was here except my brother Amar ...Even Rishsb too came but no trace of him...I looked at door as I want to wait for bro...I invited him may be if he remembered he will come...

Suddenly I hear " bhai kaam me busy hai..." I looked back...Its Khush...who was standing besides Rishab in corner...My dad also confirm the news so finally I have to cut the cake..

I closed my eyes and make a wish then blew the candles finally cut the cake...And a loud clap and bursting of bloon's started with a birthday song...

I looked at him was clapping and smiling continuously...As I looked at him he again wish me...Then one after one I feed all my sisters but started from mom-dad..As I know once our sisters attack begun...There will nothing for them...So I feed them first...And received blessings...

Then I feed them ...My sises and they too...But too our bad luck mom had already put some pieces at side for bhai and family...So now no masti with this...

Lastly just one person was left and its him...Rishab Now what to do...?? I took a piece and and forwerded towards him...Not to feed..

Khush who was standing beside him... Said "Aww.." Putting her hands on mouth...I looked at her confusingly...Now what had happen she is reacting like this... "What??" We both asked together...

"Midhi cheating karti ho...Apne bhai ko to apne hath se khilaogi aur mere bhai ko aise?? Bad manner Midhi..." I looked at Rishab was just smiling at her childish demands...Suddenly mom called me...I mentally thank her...As i get reason to ran away from there...

We finished our dinner together still there was no trace of bhai...I was waiting for him... Suddenly we hear knock on door...I thought finally he came...

But My bad luck...Its not him...There was Mr.Sahil Rathore... I bad a face..."inhe bhi aaj hi apna chehra dikhana tha.." I just dont like him...Because of his deeds...Amar bhai loves him so much and gave so much respect to him...But he always busy with his bigg ego...

He settled on chair...As always mom started her loving -caring session towards him... I gathered aall plates and made my way with Khush...

"Happy birthday Madhu ..." I looked at him...I nodded my head and left from there...We all four were stealing cake from kitchen when hear mom shout from outside...

"Chori karli ho to bahar aa jao tum sab..." We all looked at each other and really mom is mom... Always caught us...!!!

We can out innocently as if we hadnt done anything...Oohh...He was still there...I just dont know why I dont like this person...

"So you are mr.Rishab??" He asked to Rishab... While he nod and made handshake "you are Sahil right???" Yes... " So here for studies ...Where is your perents..??" Finally he asked what I think he dont have to...Always wrong question...

I looked at Rishab...Who was silent for moment...But then my dad interputt saying "tum yaha kaise Sahil??" Always correst timing of my father...

" Hi uncle...Wo me ye inform karne aaya tha that marrige date and venue fix ho gayi aaj...So mom ne bheja tha.." I asked What!!! Suprised...Where is bhai..."When and where???" I asked surprisingly...

" Madhu surprise to aise ho rahi ho jaise achanak shaadi fix ho gayi hai...Its after 1 and half month ...At villege..." "What??"This was the biggest surprise...At villege buit why..From the first day I was asking them do it from this place and finally result...Why??

"Ha to kya hua...Hamari puri family hai waha...Phir hum return yaha aa gayenge..." He said seternly...

Now I dont want to hear anything more...So I left that place...

Next morning...

Rishab..

Last day was little bit strange...So many things happened in a single day...Our friendship...Then that her brother's marrige news...Madhu being upset ...I can undersatand...As they all have just a single bro...How her wish like...

But its depend on their family...Hope today her mood will be better...Taking my bag I came down where already both Khush and Madhu were fighting...

Strange ...Khush was shouting on her...And she was making puppy faces...She looks so cute...

I interputt their fight wishing them Good morning...Both looked at me...And wished me too... "Ye kis baat pe fight ho rahi thi?? May I know??" "Bhai ...Ye sab Midhi ki fault hai...Dekho doodh nahi pi rahi..." Khush complained... "Haa..Aur ye meri mummy banke mujhe daant rahi hai..."

I laugh a little... "Khush is right..."I defend her...While Madhu made bad face looking away... "Yehh..Dekha..Bhai is always right...Me win.." Khush show tounge to Madhu while she replied same way..

Finally after sometime and my tea session we walked out for School together...

So guys friendship begin..With little tifs...Hope you are not getting bore...

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Edited by Arakshiya_58 - 10 years ago

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Insaneniyu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Amazing update finally they r friends
I think sahil is going to cerate prob btw them

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parimaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

yeeepee finally u updated thank u

n love their friendship moments sooo much...u made my day 2day 2 giving us such a lovely update...cant wait 4 next now...pls update soon

Edited by parimaniya - 10 years ago

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silverfire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#170

Great story.👏

Read all the update in one go.

There is a big mystery behind RK's parents death. I feel it has something to do with madhu's bro. His friend Sahil is also a wired character. Is madhu's bro getting married to sahil's sis? That part is very confusing.

At last they r friends. Happy about that.

Plz update regularly. Love this story.

Thanks!