Rishabala OS : The Moon Series 2 : Sun & Moon - Page 4

hats off to u dear for writing such a wonderful story!!

whenever madhu asked Rk to kill her, my eyes were welled up with tears! i don't know whether i'm so weak & emotional or whether ur story is strong that makes me cry easily!! anyways, i can happily read any kind of lazy's story knowing full well that she will never give a sad ending!! in this story also i thought may be madhu will lose her control over kiraat so she will bite Rk's neck & kill herself for their sake or the mangalsutr will broke when she was out in sunlight & die or in full moon Rk with go out of control & kill her like that i was expecting something bad but i'm so so glad u gave a beautiful ending by madhu learning to control herself & killing that monster sultan & kiraat back save in her mama's embrace. perfect!!

madhu trusted him & loved him unconditionally even after knowing he's werewolf & now he paid back the same love & trust!! great!!

haha... slaves of sun & moon are together forever with their baby boy!! lovely lovely!! thanks for giving ur this awesome story & for pm too!!

P.s never forget to pm ur stories to me dear!! i'm coming to the forum mainly to read ur story!! please!!