Rishbala TS : Born To be With you [ Completed ]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi everyone😃 !!!
I am back with a TS this time , this was supposed to be a OS but when i started writing it got very long so i turned this into a TS .This is dedicated to Suru and Shriya as they are not able to serve you all rice and khichdi and I cant see you all starving (If you know what i mean 😉). So here is the first part and THIS IS ALSO DEDICATED TO A CLOSE FRIEND OF MINE ALIFIA , WHO I HAVE LOST TOUCH WITH AND THIS IS LOOSELY INSPIRED FROM HER GRANDPARENTS STORY ! I wish i get in touch with her again ^^


Born To be With You


Part 1
"Madhu do you know why Trishna is not coming to school from last 3 days?" Rk asked. "I dont know Rk, yesterday I went to her house also but her mom dint let me meet her" Madhu said. "Lets ask Deepali to go today, hope she gets to know something" they were talking about Trishna when Mukund came there. Mukund was senior to them he was in class 10 where as Rk Madhu, Trishna and Deepali were in class 8. "Hey guys do you know Trishna's marriage has been fixed" Mukund said "With whom?" Madhu asked, "There is a man from the city he is 35 years old" he replied. This was not shocking news for them, in their village child marriages were common once the girl reaches the age of 12 their parents arrange their marriage. If the girl doesn't get married early, people start talking bad about her. The people were least bothered about educating the girl.

After the school was over Madhu's brother had come to pick her, she was very upset after hearing about trishna . Madhu had 5 elder brothers , she was always pampered by them. She was walking with her brother when Deepali came running to her. "Bhaiya can I talk to Madhu for a minute" saying this Deepali pulled Madhu towards her and said in her ear. "Madhu tomorrow morning we are going to Ramu kaka's mango farm, you also come with us" "No Deepali bhayya wont allow me" "Arrey buddhu who is telling you to ask him. In the morning when your mother goes to the lake to bring water we will go at that time" "No Deepali I am in no mood of going" "Okay but please try Rk specially sent me to tell you" "Oh did Rk send you?" "Yes" "I will try to come" Madhu said with a smile. "Madhu if you are done talking with Deepali we will go. Buaji would be angry if we reach home late" Madhu's brother said "Ok bye Deepali" "Bye" Then Madhu and her brother went to their house.

Next morning when Madhu and her mother were on the way to lake Madhu said "Mom can I go with my friends to Ramu kaka's farm" "No Madhu if your dad or your brothers will come to know about this they will scold me" "Mom why are you so scared of them. You know how much I love mangoes, please I will come early they will not know about it" "Ok go fast and come I will come I will be waiting for you at the lake. Please dont be late" "Thank you mom you are the best" saying this Madhu ran.

Later at the farm the boys climbed the tree and plucked the mangoes while the girls kept an eye because they would be punished if they were caught stealing them. The mangoes were equally divided between everyone to avoid fights. Madhu was enjoying eating the mangoes Rk came and sat beside her "So you enjoyed" "Yes thank you Rk " "You were upset after hearing about trishna so i planned this specially for you" "Awww... rk you are the best" " I know madhu and take this mango for your mom" "Thanx Rk , mom also likes mangoes, Okay now i will go mom must be waiting for me".

At school they kept telling everyone about their trip. That day they got their exam papers , madhu has topped in the class ,she was a very bright student. When madhu brother came to pick her that day he looked very angry he dint tell a word , after madhu reached her home her buaji called her. Madhus buaji was a very strict women. "Madhu where did you go this morning" "I went with mom buaji" "No madhu you are lying ,munna has seen you with your friends at Rammu's farm" "Sorry buaji we went to eat mangoes" "Your brothers and your dad are spoiling you. When i was your age i was married and Look at you" "Sorry" "Today i will talk to your father about you" saying this buaji went madhu was very worried.Later that night madhu's father called her "Madhu what your buaji is telling is that true??" "Dad we just went to eat mangoes" "If you want to eat mangoes tell me i will bring for you" "Sorry dad" "Madhu beta I am not getting you married and letting you study dont make me regret your decision" "Sorry dad i wont repeat it again"

Days passed by and madhu's and Rk's friendship got stronger with time. Madhu dint know when she started liking Rk but all she knew was she has fallen in love with Rk and the best thing is she knew that rk also had feelings for her but things were not simple as they sound. Rk couldn't say to madhu that he loved her , they were still teenagers and this was not acceptable in their village if anyone would come to know about them It would be a very big problem for them.

They were in 10th standard now. Madhu was the only girl studying in her 10th all the girls have got married or their education was stopped because of some or the other reason. There were only 12 boys and 1 girl in their class. Madhu always helped Rk in studies. One day Rk came to know that madhu's parents had started searching a groom for her he got worried. The next day when they met Rk asked Madhu " Madhu do you know that your parents are searching a groom for you" "Yes Rk i know about it , Buaji wants me to get worried but bhaiya has promised me that he would let me complete my studies" "Madhu one day or the other you will get married but I want you to know something" "What is it Rk" "Madhu I Love You" "Rk what is this nonsense , What are you telling" "Madhu I love you and i also know that you love me please dont deny it" "No Rk I dont l love you , You must be having some misunderstanding" " Madhu I dont want to lose you" "Rk stop this now" "No madhu you cant do this to me" "Rk I am not doing anything and i guess it is better we dont talk from now. I dont want to give you any false hopes".


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Posted: 10 years ago
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See I came as I promised!!!!! 😳
New TS I was dying to read something on RISHBALA nd u fulfill my wish 🤗
Now here I start First Yiiipppeee I on number one... 🥳

Coming to story u penned it marvelously as I said before!!!!
very new concept to read!!! loved RK nd madhu's friendship bond!!!
nd madhu only one girl in 10th reminded me of my school days!!! did I tell u me too was a alone girl between 13 boys in my 10th class but I never felt strange coz I was studying in that school since 4 std so it was my second home!!! 😳
ok back to story so madhu is topper nd wanna study nd that's why denied RK's proposal feeling bad!!!! but I know wats nxt so need to be sad 😉
now as I know u hv penned nxt part too so do update soon as in xam time I really need something to read a refreshment!!! so I m eagerly waiting!!!!
lastly THANKS for Dedication!!!! 🤗 love yaa ❤️
srry I m not able to serve rice all coz of xams!!! 😔
Edited by My_VivJaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh oh! my dear azra & suru babies will u ever let me come 1st in ur stories?? this is cheating yaar! u guys plan & then post LOL!! always u too are coming 1st in ur stories! *pout* (just kidding sweeties)
okay! coming to the update,
superb update! i loved it!
nice concept! even madhu loves him rite? then what happen at the end? y she is denying his love? is she not wanting to hurt her parents & brothers trust they had on her & let her study?? i love that she loves & respect her family more than her love. but what to do? Rk was "born to be with her" so even destiny will fear to separate them!! i guess they will fix rishab as madhu's groom!! only after marriage madhu will come to know that she's married to her love her Rk only! lets see how u r gonna take this beautiful story forward!!
i loved the mango farm scene though i dont like mangoes much i do climb on trees & pluck mangoes for my cousins bcos i'm monkey LOL!!
thanks for the pm but i resed after suru res on ur post lol!! i missed the spot in seconds!! be careful suru i may catch ur place one day & same goes with u too azra!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yo! Me 3rd 🥳
sorry for d late unres ..u knw i m busy these days
but awesome concept..loved their bond
so madhu wants 2 study further n she denied his proposal...i dont need to say update soon as u have already updated ..its me who is late here 😆
going 2 read nxt part 😉
Edited by shriyakadge - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsmm Update
RK gonna marry her?
Yaar thanksss😳
Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A very beautiful start to a realistic story!
Keeping the thought process of a rural village the story is nicely written.
Thanks a lot for the PM and continue soon!
Edited by drashtifan1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsome update
Rk n madhu best n they love eachother
Rk confessed his feelings but madhu is not accepting
Waiting to see what rk will do
Cnt sn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
tfs for pm
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh lord! Why did she deny her feelings for him? Maybe she knows that her family won't agree .. please continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just awesome
really do still child marriages exist??
ohh madhu denied abt her feelings to rk so bad

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