RiMa OS: My Parent| part 2 on pg 9 updated 15/9

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Anish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Cutest 😳 and hilarious 🤣 story

Loved it very much

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ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Loved the OS, R.K-Madhu love story from their child's point of view, how beautiful.

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ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

OMG this Ratul is so advanced, wants to eat chinese and other foods, trying to impress girls from now only, thinks his dad is stupid. Loved the 2nd part. Beautiful TS, loved it.

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Titli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: girivanam
Hi,
I have no idea about the characters based on whom this story is written. But I enjoyed the concept and the flow of narration from the baby's POV😊. Cute!

thank u so much.. I'm happy that u liked it as individual..😃

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Titli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: anish17
Cutest 😳 and hilarious 🤣 story
Loved it very much

Thanks dear for commenting..😳😳

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Titli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Loved the OS, R.K-Madhu love story from their child's point of view, how beautiful.

Originally posted by: ananya2010
OMG this Ratul is so advanced, wants to eat chinese and other foods, trying to impress girls from now only, thinks his dad is stupid. Loved the 2nd part. Beautiful TS, loved it.

Happy to know dear that u liked it n found it funny...😊

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vasavi_sri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Nice concept

It's from the child 's pov

U have written it very well

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Titli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri
Nice concept
It's from the child 's pov
U have written it very well

thanks for feedback..thought to write something funny thats why. 😃😳

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

It was such a cute and beautiful OS...I laughed out loud when the morning romance of Rishbala disturbed baby Kundra...😆

Poor RK being called stupid by his baby even before it took ts birth...😆😆 well sometimes he is one...like labour pain in 5th month...only RK can think this...

So again the world famous fight of Rishbala regarding their baby starts...poor baby Kundra...his awesome kick shot failed miserably...😆

Okay so Mr. Dumbo Kundra brings bananas?????? Like seriously????

but all over it was great story...I am already in love with baby Kundra...how nice it would have been if this could have been showed in the show...

thnks for pm...