Rishbala/Maaneet FF - Yaariyan - Pt.7/Pg38 - [18/01] - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: cool_sri

Hmm nice start!! Waiting to read more!! Thank u for the PM...



Thank u 😛
Ur welcome
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Thank u 😊
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! really excited to read more & more...😃



Awww thabku u sooo much...glad u liked it 😃 😳
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Thax 😊
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Originally posted by: momi78

Nice start! So the bestie is Rishabh??



Thank u and keep reading to find out 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane



Thank u 😃 pleasures all mine😳

Hahahha I love ur comments for the guessing u do!aww.. thank u dear😳 Its so much fun and exciting to read it and knw what u r thinking..so please do keep guessing Sudha 😳 yep! i 'll do guessing!! i cant just read the story without predicting!!

Ok good that u atleast like them...yep! they are one cute couple! DD looked bubbly in geet!! I am hust scared that some people who dislike them won't see them as characters needed in the story.. those who have watched geet will love to read this story & remaining wil also love for rishbala bcos we know u ll focus mainly on RM & next priority will maaneet right? 😉 dont worry through ur story u can make everyone love the other couple too!!

I will try but no promises 😛 😉 oh thank! at least u said u'll try!!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally replying to comments Done!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey People!!
Thanks for such a great response!!! Glad that u all liked it and hope u will consider Maaneet as characters..😊 Also i replied to all of ur comments so please do check it out😳 And Character Sketch will be updated after a few parts as I don't wanna reveal about them too soon.😆😉

Also i would like to Dedicate this Part to Sudha (Madhurish) for coming first against Nina (sorry sis😆) Congratz Sudha for coming first and being the stalker u r 🤣 🤣

Anyway here goes Part 2 ut it is short...so sorry for that but i will give a short update for BrokenTies as well then...so one short plus another short i think is ok😆

Part 2

"Hey wow Madhz nice car!""Like it??""Dude this is awesome..btw where is that driver of yours""Dad said I can drive this!" She said proudly"Well that wont be for long""Oye!!!" And he bursted out laughing while she hit him on his arm."Ok ok...no need to be angry Madhz" he said teasingly. "Buddy thank you sooo much!!" "For what?" "For convincing Papa of course..." she said duh-uh' look. "Oh don't worry you will need to return the favor.." he said with a grin. She knew that was coming. "Anyway Madhz..""Stop calling me 'Madhz'!! You know how much I hate it!!""Alright Madhz...Madhu from now on" he said with a chuckle as he again called her that.."Go to hell Maanuuu!!" She said pulling his left cheek."Oh please not that..." he said rubbing his cheeks with his palms. He could hear light chuckling from people around them and made a face."You call me by my name and I'll call you by yours deal?""We'll see.." he said grumpily.

Maan and Madhu were best friends since High School and on top their father's turned out to be friends aswell. Unlike Madhu, Maan has a proper family with a Father, Mother and a loving younger sister. Both were just a year older to Annie, Maan's younger sister. But to her fortune the Khurana's treated her like their own daughter giving her all the love which she deserved.

"Woah! Awesome car Madhu" interrupted Deepali who walked up to them while Varun, a tall well build up guy, followed her with Ishika next to him, who seemed the most decent one among them. They all greeted, hugged and Hi-fived each other. "Madhu..how did you convince your Dad to let you drive?" asked Varun. "All thanks to Maan" she said side hugging Maan. "MK gotta say...dost ho to aisa!" said Ishika teasingly. They all laughed and chatted some more, until the bell rang and they all messing around walked towards their class.

"Morning class...i am your new Maths professor...," he carried on in a strict voice to which most students sat up properly but Madhu was least bothered. Having a quite high IQ in Maths as her Dad has been teaching her that since childhood and also being an all-rounder helped her a lot as Maths was something which she never enjoyed but did it with ease. She quietly sat there observing and playing with her nails but still listening what was going on in class. Half of the lesson had passed all she had done was either look at her nails or message/play games on her phone as her friends were in across the classroom . She didn't care of making notes as she would get them off someone anyway. "You!" that new professor pointed at her. She looked up at him, tiredly. "What's his name again?" she whispered to the person sitting next to her as she stood up. "Mr. Mehra.." he whispered back "Yes Mr. Mehra..how might i help you?" she said. "May I know your name?" "Madhubala Malik Sir.." she said proudly. "Oh so Miss. Malik, would you care to explain and resolve this problem?" he said with a smirk. He had observed her throughout the lesson and not even once did he notice her paying attention. Aameer baap ki bighri hui aulaad(Rich father's spoilt brat)' that's what he thought of her, whose father could just easily buy the grades for her. She walked towards down towards the board with a slight smirk on her face. She could hear some students giggling at the thought of Mr. Mehra indirectly challenging her; they all knew her, how intelligent she was which she never really liked to show. She stood in front of him, gave him a winning smile, took the board pen and started solving the problem with such and also started to explain it to the class. The class seemed to understand it very well as Madhu explained it very well and clearly. Mr. Mehra looked at her in awe! Never would he have thought that she would even know what method to apply let alone explain it and that too with such an ease. "Anything else Sir?" she asked in a sarcastic tone with a grin, then just walked back to her seat and returned to what she was doing earlier, examining her nails or played on her phone until the double period passed.

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Okay so here is a bit more about Madhu and also a bit of Maan...you lot will learn about these two more in the next update..😛

Please do like and leave feedback😃


Edited by Mentally-Insane - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
res (will unres once i read the update)
unres😛
hey! i won🥳

Nina, u lost it baby!😈
wow baby, thanks for the dedication hun! 🤗

coming to the update, hmm... as i guessed madhu is maan's friend!! interesting!!😉
now u showed a little bit of Madhu & maan but when will u show my hero's entry?😕 oh i heard what u are saying "WAIT" rite?😆

is Rk from the same college? or they will meet in any inter college cultural? competition btn two college where madhu & rk will fight for the trophy? hate - dosti - love relationship huh? or something else? i want to know how rishbala will encounter?😉😆

i liked the class scene even i dont pay attention if i know something already lol!! & that scene also reminded me of Nina's crazy day in school lol!! hope she have told u abt her maths eco prob!!😆

nice youthful story!! 👏
short but it was sweet update!!😳
Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago

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