Rishbala/Maaneet FF - Yaariyan - Pt.7/Pg38 - [18/01] - Page 17

over to the update.

fabulous update lubz.

i loved it & Enjoyed reading this fresh youthful story thoroughly. After a long time u came back with a mast update...with my rk's entry...great!! i was desperately waiting for rk's entry but finally u brougt him in the 5 Th chapter... Aww...i m dead when he came out of d car & Removed his shades...masha allah!!

i m dancing in joy to see him & his last line "madhubala...ahaan" I like it.. Which i missed terribly.,

why one week? U could have send him for 2 Or 3 Day? - Padmini mummy one or two days is no time for d birds to fall in love. Atleast they need a week to know each other then fight then friends then love...lotz are there to do in this one week & Thats why clever daddy cut his son maans role for a week, if he was here then madhu will eat his brain 24-7 & will give no attention to my london return hero lol.

haha...i loved d end bit to d core. It cracked me completely lol... Dont play smart with jungli billi rk..lol...

waiting for next update lubz so please do update soon...soon means really soon lol.

yep..baby...i think u wrote the parts really well...

lazy lazy lazy 😆

Update soon...na i m waiting !!!

" DONT MESS WITH MADHUBALA...HUH" loved her attitude...

and Rk's entry was fantastic...hahaha..

waiting for the next part and thank u ...for updating this...baby!!

Continue soon.

Update next chapter soon will be waiting.

N plzzz pm me

rishabh's entry was too good

thanks for pm

After a little more than 2 weeks I am unresing...🤣

Wow that must be a record of some sort...😆 But I guess it's because we are sisters...🤣 We aren't just insane but equally lazy as well...🤣

Okay...What do you think I thought about this update? Any guesses?😆

Well let me put it like this...I am deciding whether or not I should start #WeWantUpdate...🤣 And make others join me in this as well...🤣 I love and miss your writing...and I guess soon that little plot of mine will come true for ATOF...Yes I know what happened with it...🤣 I remember...But you should always double or triple check on things before you start something like that...😆 I think you learned that lesson the hard way...😆

Well I liked the entire update...Varun being like that...Randeep uncles plan on getting RK settled...But the part I loved the most which is also the sadest part in the entire update is the last two paragraphs...Yes its sad...Only a carlover would know what I mean...😆 A scratch on the car? A freaking scratch... Right then and there I wanted to slap RK...🤣 No...not slap but punch him... He scratched a brand new car...If it was a Mercedes, BMW or Audi...He should have counted the seconds he had left in his life...🤣 What he got in return was nothing...I wouldn't have put paint on his car...By the way why did she have that paint in her car?😆 I would have scratched his car beyond recognition...🤣 Okay maybe I wouldn't... I would have blast on him...But if he did the same thing he did with Madhu...Offering her money...Two scratched cars here we come...🤣 I honestly thought before I read about the paint thing that Madhu would scratch his car with her keys...And instead of painting MB scratching it with MB...😆

My guess is...RK has found his long lost Madhubala...But it wasn't that kind of first meeting after that many years he expected...🤣 I wonder what will happen next...Cause I have no idea if you would continue Writing about the happenings in school or if you would jump to the part after school or when Maan returns...And my next guess is it's RK that knows Geet...She would come and visit him making Madhu jealous...The only remaining question when that would happen...

Thanks for the long awaited update and for the PM sis...Now I can finally delete it...😆

Please update the next part soon. I just love this story pls give regular updates.

Thanks for the PM