Rishbala OS: Lost Souls ( Last Part Page 39 ) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Tainar

Mujhse rula diya. 😭😭 It's such a heartbreaking, beautiful OS. You write exceptionally well, which is why I must demand, why haven't you written any stories before?

Now I too shall join your sisters and start up a new trend.

#ShreeWriteMoreDammit 😆

Originally posted by: _Angel-Juri_

heartbreaking os...
plz write next part of this story...

Originally posted by: sufidox

Everyone please dont say "I cant write like..." coz the net output will be awesome and I have experienced this 😃

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

such a heart wrenching story shree dear!!! I loved it the way u portray the story!!! do write more!!!

Originally posted by: madhurish

shree dear! a huge applause for ur very 1st work!! 👏

i cant believe this is ur 1st story!! its outstandingly awesome!! i loved it to the core!!😛

oh god! u brought tears in my eyes during the tight wala hug scene!!😭 oh my rK! i cant see tears in my right kamina's eyes!!😭

this story has the essence of meiej serial!!⭐️

u have written it too well!!👏 a heart wrenching story!!🥺 but please do continue the story dear!! pls unite rishbala forever!!😳 please baby, its my requset to u to continue this story at least give one more part & end in a happy note!!😃

& one more request , u r really good in writing so pls do write more & entertain us dear!!😉

p.s i loved ur intro para where u mentioned abt all the three stories (twist, beats& forbidden) written by 3 lovely writer!!😛

i'm so glad they forced u to write & only bcos of them we got to read a lovely story from u shree!! 😳good job girl!!👏

Originally posted by: k.atrina75

BRAVO!! great story..

u should write more

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome and beautiful os update Tfs for pm 😃😳

Originally posted by: SreeRK

Good story😊

do write more😊

Originally posted by: zubeada

awesome story...

keep writing dear...