Rishbala OS:~Follow Your Omen to Find Love ~

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Rishbala OS:~Follow Your Omen to Find Love~

he saw dipali coming..he was seeing her happily..she said"my father said yes for our relation, rishu"..he scooped her in his arms..n twirled around happily..he was living peacefully..he had a small shop n he was deeply in love with dipali n now dipali was going to be his forever..his life was settled..he didn't want anything more..he felt that he got everything..but he didn't knew that destiny had sumthing else destined for him..he was sleeping ..suddenly his dreams started again...everyday..he dreamt of a girl..then he saw that girl touch him..he felt magical ..hen she disappeared n he saw metal changing into gold..but everytime, he ignored it..he didn't believe his dreams..but his dreams started haunting him..he wanted to get rid of his dreams..dipali had told him abt a dream teller..he thought he had to go to him to know abt the dreams atleast..then he can get rid of his dreams..

when he went to the dream teller.dipali too accompanied him.he saw that the place was very tiny ..with sunshine symbols surrounding all over the place..the god symbols were hanging all over the place..he saw an old lady with a stick ..she came n sat on a typical ghost n lighting kinda chair..she called me"rishabh, r u haunted by ur dreams?".he nodded instantly..she said"I cud only say, follow ur dreams..ur dreams r ur omens, which will guide u to ur destiny..god has destined a destiny, which u haven't achieved yet soo just follow ur omens to achieve it.."he was highly confused by her talkings..soo he n dipali went away..dipali said"she must be blabbering rishabh..leave her..i need to buy sumthing..just wait here for a moment"

he smiled at dipali..she went to buy sumthing..at that time, he saw an old man stumble with his load..he moved to him to help him..he helped him with the load..the man smiled at him n asked"why r u standing here?"..he smiled at him n said"I m waiting for dipali my lover..".he smiled at me mysteriously n said"did ur omens guide her to u?"rishabh said"noo.."he said"follow ur omens..u will get everything in ur life"saying this..he handed me three stones which shone blue..he said"keep it..it will guide u.."rishabh was abt to return the stones..he saw that the man disappeared completely..dipali came n asked"what r u searching?'..he shrugged n then they both went..

after reaching home, he searched in net abt turning metal to gold..the only answer he got is "ALCHEMY"..he saw further info he read that the alchemy is still performed in the oasis of behrain..he need to go there to know abt his destiny..he talked to travels abt travelling to behrain..he saw the expenses..he was shocked..he was a middle class man..he cannt afford it but he wanted to stop this dream haunt..he decided to sell his shop..he contacted to the broker n talked abt dealing of the shop..this was heard by dipali..dipali came near rishabh n said"what is this? U r selling the only thing u have for ur living.."..rishabh said"dipali..i have to find abt my dreams..i cannt live haunted by dreams.."dipali fumed n said"ur destroying ur lif..for just mere n stupid dream.."rishabh held dipali n said"listen dipali, after I come from behrain everything wud be gud."dipali said'I cannt be waiting for u..u have nothing now..i cannt trust u for my living..this is over I guess"..then he remembered old man sayings..he consoled himself that dipali was not destined for him..he let her go..

he started off his journey to behrain..he took the stones given by the old man..he somehow in his heart knew that there was sumthing in the sayings of the man..he reached behrain..then he saw a attender coming near him saying"sir I may guide u.."without thinking he said"yes"..he drew his hands to his pocket..he saw that the stones were black ..he got suspicious..when he turned to see the attender..he flew away with his language..he ran behind him..but alas the thief ran away..he thanked his stars that he had the habit of keeping passport n every other id proof..he had some money too..now he had to get to the oasis with this money only..he got down n asked a man"can I get a guide to the oasis?"..the man smiled at him"I m here naa..why worries? I will guide u.."he again looked at the stones..it was brightly shining..he knew he can trust this guy..

as they reached the oasis, the guide was continuosly chattering..while rishabh wondered how his life changed from a single dream..what was destined for him?.he saw some gang attacking the ppl..he got down..while the guide told"don't get into it..u will be destroyed.."rishabh saw the stones..it shone brightly..he got his answers..he took the right decision..he said"u go away..i will go to my destiny from here alone..bye this was the end of our journey together.."saying this rishabh left..the guide left his way..rishabh saw that some goons were misbehaving with the girl..the girl had burkha hiding her face...he went to them n started fighting with them..then he took the girl away from the goons..as he took the girl away..her burkha moved away from her face..rishabh witnessed the most beautiful girl in the world..he was mesmerized..the girl tried to hide her face..he said"why r trying to hide..u r out of danger?".the girl said"did u see my face?"..ihe told"yes ofcourse"..she said"then ur my lord..i belong to u only..take me as ur wife lord"..rishabh was shocked..he said"what?"..she said"lord..u saw my face..soo u got to marry..thats my tradition..take me as ur wife lord"..rishabh said"I cannt"..she dropped her head n said"as u say my lord.."..to change the topic , he asked her"do u know the way go oasis?"..she beamed at him n said"I know..i will guide u.."..sumthing stirred inside him seeing her smile..she saw his wound..she took him to a place..then tore her dupatta piece n tied it around his arms n started mumbling"u shud be careful lord..why did u fight with them lord?"he idnt hear the rest..he was just staring at her..then he remember abt his dream

he shrugged her off n said"lets go to the oasis.."..she looked at him n smiled at him..then proceded forward..he followed her..they got near the oasis..she said'this is it..where u want to go lord?"..he said"noo..dont call me lord..i think I can go alone from here..u go to ur home.."she said"where u go there is my home lord"he said"no lord..go to ur parents..."she said"ur command is my wish"..then she departed..while she was going ..he felt empty..he saw the stones..it was shining brightly..he asked abt alchemist in here..they guided him to a house..when he entered the home..some guards stopped him..he said"I want to meet the alchemist..in here"..the men were dragging him outside..suddenly a man called"let that man enter"..he entered n saw an old man..he asked"what do u want?"..he said"I want to know the secret of alchemy my dream"..he said"u cannt know that..only my generation or the boy who marries my daughter can know this secret..soo u can go"..rishabh felt everything as waste..he lost everything in a stupid dream..dipali was right..he felt to be aloser..he was abt to go..when he heard the man call him"r u ready to marry my daughter then I wud tell u the secret?"..he was bewildered..suddenly the girl's face flashed in his mind..he felt as if he was cheating her.he fell in love with her..he looked at the stones..it shone brightly..soo he said"yes.."

the marriage was arranged soon..the bride was kept in the opposite direction..he sat in the opposite direction..he cudnt see the face of the bride as she hid her face using dupatta..the priest asked her"the daughter of shamsher mallik, zohra madhubala mallik..r u willing for the marriage?"..she said"qubool hai"..as he heard her voice..he felt her voice to be familiar..he looked at the direction..he saw it was the same girl whom he fell in love with...now he saw the stones..he believed in destiny..following the omens ..he got everything in his life..now he felt complete in his life..he saw madhubala beaming at him..when they were left alone in the tent..he frowned thinking that madhu whom he loved n she used to claim that I m her lord ..she was ready to marry someone else..as madhu entered..she smiled at him..she asked"r u unhappy that I made u marry me forcefully?"he was shocked..he asked"what?"..she said"I saw u entering our homw..i heard ur convo..soo I said baba to get u married to me..i cannt leave u my lord..soo only I did this forgive me lord"..he smiled at hern engulfed her in his hug..she too smiled at him..he saw the stones..it was shining brightly..madhu saw the stones n asked"what is this?"..he kissed her forehead n said"these r the omens"madhu asked"omen?"..he said"this is the one who made me met u..thats enough I think..."he looked at her passionately..she blushed n said"lord.."he kissed her for a new beginning of his life

he achieved not only his destiny of becoming an alchemy but he also found his true love..

now his love is forever with him n his omens too...

@reader's note:i m facing writer's block..i m not able to write up anything good..soo caution this stuff might be very bad...soo bear with me..i might not write up for few days as i m not able to produce sumthing new



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uma88 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice os, we will miss ur writings, start back soon
Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago
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it was totally diff concept Christy dear!!! really awesomeee liked it!!!
nd zohra that's my name u added with madhu 😳
just relax nd write ur stories no rush...
Edited by My_VivJaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one, reminded me of The alchemist.
will be waiting for your stories.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nd ya me second to commnt yiipppeee!!!
christobelle thumbnail
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Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Nice one, reminded me of The alchemist.

will be waiting for your stories.

yup i love that book
i wanted rishabh in that character..soo tried this stuff
Edited by christobelle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os👏

i also believe in destiny every thing that happens is written in our destiny 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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outstandingly amazing story!!
very very different story! i loved it a lot!!
keep it up dear!!
thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice! Please keep writing, don't stop!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awesome chris
loved it

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