FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 65

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Awesome update.

RK's inner turmoil was so well written. As expected he is thinking practically n have decided to stay away from Madhu. The newspaper picture has added to it.I think for now he will send her back.

Manav has realized his mistake, hope it's not too late.

eagerly waiting to see how you are going to take this forward.

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

hmmm...the way you explained Manav's guilt and his reactions and confusions..thanks, the thoughts of me about Manav has changed a bit..

Oke now, RK's is in Dilemma...actually he is not in between his feelings or hers, he is still thinking how can he trust somehow...how can he believe in the word call "LOVE"...or affection...

Oke from this chapter, i came to this conclusions...

Firstly, he might end ups ending Madhu back as he don't want any hurdles to get divorced and be a free man..

or something else????

thank You for the wonderful Update TK...lovign it

Originally posted by: karamukku

Nice update... Glad that Manav realized his mistake... Wondering if Madhu knows anything about going back to Tony?

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

I love this best story u r best writer keep updating cant wait for next update👏omg so RK-Madhu made a headline of their hand in hand romance😲 at last ahaan lols i knew it this is coming😉 Poor RK gonna have deal with this too 😆 uff this media people will always remain brainless everywhere anyways brilliant update awesome one 👏⭐️so little bit but finally love feelings has started to take it's place in RK's heart for Madhu 😳Poor he is hell confused frustrated totally Trishy baby thanks to u 😉somewhere i m sure madhu too has the same feelings too but it's just that they are unaware of their new true feelings for each other and ignoring it at their best but at last they wont be able it hide it soon i know 😉!! Hope that Just soon madhu tells RK her problem and he protects helping her out soon before some bad happens 🤔!! lastly madhu's little bro has brains😆as manav understood his big mistake by hurting his Didi not trusting her and ignores that muku's calls 😆hope sis-bro unite soon 👍🏼!! do pm me your index of other stories also ok 😊

Originally posted by: memad

omg part 1...felt for both rishbala...Rishabh venting out his anger suffocation n the victim madhu helpless of her miseries n distress in her life...from description, she seems to be a paid escort/ mistress/ sex worker...

i had read a FF called MISTRESSS DUOLOGY: THE BEAUTY AND THE BEAST by another fav writer of mine, book.worm...her writing style is lil soft n light hearted, so even her sad n heart-wrenching stories r less excruciating n painful for me...still that story had given me sleepless nights especially in the concluding parts..
Ah..but here u r the writer, expert in depicting the torturous n hurtful plots so well..omg can't imagine how i will be at the end of the story...

eager to read next...

Originally posted by: noiseygirl

M feeling sad for Manav...he really feeling suffocated ...and madhu
she is stuck on her life ...their past is really painful ...
Hope Rk will realize his feelings...But I don't think so
Now the photo...what will happen????
M waiting for ur update
thanks for nice update and pm

Originally posted by: Mikolingam

I am addicted to this love story. Can't believe RK is not in control of himself .

Originally posted by: Mayajh

Nice update!!
Good that manav realized his mistake and avoided mukund's call.
Hope RK doesnt send madhu out becasue of the picture 😲
Waiting for next already :)

Originally posted by: shriyakadge

I am so sorry for not commenting here since so many updates, Kinda stuck with my books. Also i am trying to stay away from this place :( But I have read all the updates. They are super cool. I love the way you describe every emotion...be it Madhu's or Rishabh. In the last update, Manav's POV was beautiful. I understand wat he might be feeling. Rk's POV was my fav :P In the last to last update (16 chap) I really felt bad for Madhu. That bloody Mukund! How dare he? -.- Idiot! Madhu went through so much! I really feel for her :( I wish she gets a lot of happiness now. Rk, now you better fight wid ur mind and realize tht ur relation is not just a physical one 😆 But to be serious, I even understand wat Rk is feeling :( He is confused -.- Trishna is super cool. I love her :P

Finally, awesome updates. Excuse me if i dont comment on every update. But i will surely try to comment here whenever i get time :D Coz this is one of my fav stories. And also, I would love it if you dont finish this soon. Trust me, people are liking this. So dont end it for tht reason :D

Originally posted by: ashitha235

Madhu knew manav is very short tempered but he is understanding also... she is right...now he is actually thinking about his behaviour towards his only family his sister... he is guilty for what he did... that is really shows he loves his sister...he might contact RK to reach madhu...

RK was so torn between his mind and heart... it was written beautifully... he just couldnt ignore madhu, he cant see her in pain,he really cant put limit to her... he tried doing it but the moment he saw her tear stained face he forgot everything... now the new twist... badly worried for madhu...whats in store for her.. will RK be her saviour?

Fab update... eagerly waiting for next... thnx for pm😊

continue soon plz...