FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 46

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri

Nice update

The way u write each and every character is

Perfect

In Manav pov he is feeling that Madhu left

Mukund for luxurious life

But she cannot tell him what she went through

She has no body to share her feelings

Hope at least she opens up to RK

Or Rk try to know her past

Originally posted by: Anntempleton

Hey emotional update... But mukund "jijaji"yuck! I thought manav will be reasonable but since he is unaware its expected. Poor madhu!
N I have no problem with speed updates as I have fallen in love with this story. Keep up your good work n update soon:)

Originally posted by: ashitha235

Emotional and amazing one... manav's harsh reaction was unexpected... though he doesnt know the truth he shouldnt hav reacted that way... may b mukund helped them but he know his didi right... if she is saying something then atleast he should listen to her... felt really bad for madhu... she is killing herself daily just for him but his behaviour broke her completely... but what i liked most is her control over her emotions... she did take RK's comfort for a minute but soon she realized her mistake... she is really strong... love her positivity towards her dark life...

RK couldnt see her broken state... he did think her to be same as others when her brother accused her but somewhere in the corner of his mind he knows she is innocent... waiting to know whether madhu shares her pain with him or he comes to through patil... how will he react to it...

Hey i love this story very much...so even if u update daily i dont complain... 😊

thnx for the pm...

Originally posted by: madhurish

Firstly, i m so happy with ur frequent updates dear. In fact if u update even more faster then i ll also be happy. I love this story a lot & I have said this over & Over again. If get 10 pm & In which one is ilsaam then this will b d first one i open to read.

okay coming to d update.

awesome update. Loved it.

very emotional & Nicely written. Especially d last bit of poetic line. That was amazing & Very true.

see, here too i didnt get angry with manav's behaviour to madhu but little disappointed. Yes, he dont know anything in detail what all happened in her life but cant he just trust her sister's words? If she said its not safe to see mukku cant he simply agree. Poor girl lost everything in her life & Living only for her brother & He too hating her must have left her heart broken. He is in his teenage, immature & Getting angry is normal but hiw could he accuse her like that? Dont he know her sister? Is she ever fancied being rich or greedy? Even now she is trying to give him a secure safe life. I hope he understands his mistake or atleast rk could meet manav one day & tell him abt madhu's situation not in detail but vaguely but for that first he need to talk to her & Try to learn her past.

great going dear. We r all ready to read fast updates. Even like u we all r not able to take our mind from this story. At least i feel in that way.

thanks for d pm.

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Rk has heard naa when madhu told that he sold her hope rk dosent misunderstand madhu
Awesome update

Originally posted by: Crazy_Arshi

Thanks for regular updts
Amazingly written
Feeling bad for madhu her own brother misunderstood her hope he gets to know the truth soon n he will understand her
Your shayaris are amazing

Originally posted by: Tainar

Damn! I can't stop balling. :'( These two, especially Madhu, have suffered more than enough to last a lifetime. Yet the past keeps cropping up and haunting the poor babies. :'(
Brilliant writing as always...damn... I need more tissue!

Originally posted by: rdave1

I will NEVER complain about the quick updates. :)

Phenomenal chapter. I will refrain from saying anything about Manav because I will just see red. I adore adore Trishna; even with out trying she is helping RK and Madhu out, helping them seek each other out.

As for the utter heartbreak Madhu was just served by her only family. I'm not sure how it will change the dynamic of her relationship with RK because somewhere deep down she still held on to that old Madhu for Manav for his Didi but now that he has practically disowned her; how will she see herself? Her self worth in her eyes?

Update soon. Excellent brilliant job as always.

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Awesome update Teekay

Jiska dar tha wahi hua. Maanav is misunderstanding Madhu. Teenagers are difficult to handle, manav is thinking high of Mukund. I think he have to know the truth of Mukku selling Madhu to a pimp. There is no point of hiding things from him. But how will he react when he came to know that she is Rk's mistress? . I want to read more . Waiting teekay

Originally posted by: punam2712

all men whether young or old are basically selfish who just want what is best for them

manav is ready to trust mukund as he put him in school and to think the worst of madhu even knowing she loves him and wants the best for him

and bet even after coming to know the truth, he will be willing to accept madhu and what she is doing as long as she is footing his school fees