FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140

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manna43

@manna43

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#411

Thanks for early update .Really the story is engrossing. I eagerly wait for next update .

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Bon_Vivant

@Bon_Vivant

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#412

Superb update. loved it.u r an awesome writter.this is my fav story so i am very happy with ur frequent updates.

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candle_light

@candle_light

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#413

superb update
didnt expect this type of reaction from manav
i thought there will be some sweet moments btw them but not this
feeling very sad for madhu

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#414

awesome update 👏 uff i didnt liked manav atleast being a younger brother he could respect his elder sister's advice and support her rather he shouted on her hurt her and supported that muku gosh cant believe his reaction 😡poor madhu well now i really want Madhu's past to revealed to RK soon it's highly needed really want them together and him helping her come out of her pain just like she did and lastly both RM deserve happiness 👍🏼 !!

Edited by -ChitraRocking- - 10 years ago

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#415

Nice update

The way u write each and every character is

Perfect

In Manav pov he is feeling that Madhu left

Mukund for luxurious life

But she cannot tell him what she went through

She has no body to share her feelings

Hope at least she opens up to RK

Or Rk try to know her past

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sanju1205

@sanju1205

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#416

emotional yr..
yr last line is best...
THERE WAS HOPE

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Anish

@anish17

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#417

Emotional and lovely update

Beautifully written

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aaliya14

@aaliya14

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#418

who the hell is complaining😊 i wait for your updates eagerly so this is a treat for me. nice update .manav's reaction was horrible towards madhu but i guess i can't blame him because he doesn't know the truth.the car part was cute

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#419

Hey emotional update... But mukund "jijaji"yuck! I thought manav will be reasonable but since he is unaware its expected. Poor madhu!
N I have no problem with speed updates as I have fallen in love with this story. Keep up your good work n update soon:)

Edited by Anntempleton - 10 years ago