Rishabala SS: Haunted House Part 5 on Page 1 (25/07) - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
U res. ur place for ur story parts but where r u waiting for ur update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Please Please don't make my RK a ghost !! & please post the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Dear where r u waiting eagerly for all ur stories
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Please update Kuku.😭

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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
waiting to know who is the ghost i don't think is rk
come on yaar give the updates i love all ur stories
👏 👏👏 come out of ur deamland
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
awesome update however i wouldn't want to be in madhu's place😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
really enjoying it 😆
lovely yaar
madhu what is this why can't she use her brain dear did she sell it to some one she dig her own grave
wow what a ghost story😃😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
freaking awsmmm...thanks to u di that u dont make my rk ghosttt ...waiting 4 next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was an awesome update Kuku!👏👏👏

I hoped that the ghost wasn't RK, and it wasn't. It was Trishna.😆
Now since I am a sucker for Comedy. I know, I have been saying that a lot. But is true.😆
Madhu, Madhu, Madhu. 😆 First you thought the voice came from a ghost, and made a fool out of yourself before even meeting RK. And then you tried to trick RK. Sure you believed that he was a butler who wouldn't let you come in.🤣 But why run at such assumptions. Just because the guy didn't introduce himself doesn't mean that he is a butler. 🤣🤣 Now that revelation through the intercome. 🤣🤣 I am RK.🤣🤣🤣🤣 That was truly priceless.
And their thoughts about each other, pig, crazy and arrogant.😆 I truly hope that this kind of humor will stay through out the story.😳😆
Now how will a couple of girls bond if not bitching about a common person who annoys both of them.😆
And Trishna, trying to presuade Madhu in to calling him. What a tactic. He is handsome. Doh of course he is, it is RK we are talking about. 😆 But as Madhu said he is a pig. 😆 But our crazy, arrogant beautiful girl forgot about that the second she thought about how handsome he is.😆
Are you singing a song? Are you mad. It's not Always about you, idiot. 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Ah Kuku, this humor, it's so me. I love this kind of humor.
Now when you revealed why Trishna died. A Michael Jackson popped up in my head. Smooth Criminal. But instead of Annie, it is Trishna. 😆
Trishna are you ok?
Will you tell us that you're ok?
There's a sign in the window
That he struck you - a crescendo Trishna
He came into your apartment
He left the bloodstains on the carpet
Then you ran into the bedroom
You were struck down
It was your doom
So, Trishna are you ok?
Are you ok, Trishna?
Trishna, are you ok?
So, Trishna are you ok?
Are you ok, Trishna?
You've been hit by
You've been hit by
A smooth criminal

And the history was about to repeat itself with Madhu. Thankfully a very angry ghost came to her rescue. 😆 Which reminded me of another Michael Jackson song named Ghost. 😆 Well I can't post two songs now. That would be too much, wouldn't it.
I loved the ending with RK actual believing that Trishna is a ghost. And Trishna lovingly looked at her brother. 😳
Thanks for the update and PM.
Hope you don't mind this little extra long comment.😳 I usually write longer ones. 😆 But I am on tight schedule so am trying to complete all those resed posts.
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Part 2 was awesssome
I m loving it
Story with a ghost backdrop
Too good Lazy
Edited by sarcastic_teen - 10 years ago

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