~Rishbala SS-Fanaa~(Part 6 updated-Pg 25) 01/09 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: LogicalNonsense

Nice updates SK.

It seems that koi connection hai Malik family aur RK ke beech...😛or i maybe wrong.
Thanks for the PM.

Congrats on school reopening hun!🥳🤣

Thnks Amma
wah aise occassion pe badhayi 🤣
Waise ab to 10 din ho gaye
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Hey nice start cont soon n pls pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Hey nice start cont soon n pls pm me

thnks will surely pm u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Hey people how are you? Here I am with the next part!
2 weeks since I have updated I know😆
Thought to update tomorrow or day after that but having Maths test so here you go...

Part 4

Madhu came half an hour later just like she had come before, holding tray in her hands.Again she didn't said much except 'Have your dinner", didn't meet RK's eyes and left. This time also Rishabh knew that there is no way he can talk to her. He was confused but yeah he didn't say anything. May be she is not that girl who talks to strangers much. But she is a little weird also. Sometimes he feels she don't want to meet his eyes. Something is really wrong with her. But what is it he don't know...and he wants to know that. The very first time he heard her voice it was exceptionally sweet ...there was also some kind of familiarity but at the same time strangeness.

C'mon I have others work to pay attention at instead of thinking about a girl. I have started working on my plans. The assignment which was given to me its very important. So much is happening in the country. 3 terrorist attacks.

His seniors have sent him on the mission related to it. Few soldiers are missing. Military thinks that the same group is behind all this. He has to keep HQ updated abt all happening in here in Kashmir. He has to leave this place soon. But he can't do this...he had to wait. This weather...injured body...n also he can't do anything until he get orders frm army.
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Next morning

"Madhu just understand okay"

"I know very well what I have to do." said Madhu seriously "You will do what I say!" after a pause she said "Trust me".

"Madhu..", Mallik stopped seeing Rishabh. "We will talk about it later", he muttered to her.

"Ah Rishabh", his expressions changed, frm serious to again glimy...but he wasn't as enthusiastic.

"Madhu you can go n take rest...ur head was paining no? I will do chitchat with Rishabh".

Madhu left taking last glance at his father.

"Come Captain Kundra we three will enjoy this weather."

"We three?"

"Oh yes yes, you, me and my bottle. It is very helpful in this weather. Will keep you warm"

"Yeah sure"

Rishabh said after gulping one glass (It seems like Mallik had already had enough drinks)

"Um Mr. Mallik can I ask u one thing?", Rishabh asked Mallik though he felt that he shouldn't ask...it will sound weird.

"Ya of course, poocho"

"Why Madhu behaves so odly?"

"Who Madhu? Ah leave her, leave her" she is a kind of reserved girl you know. Hate strangers n above that the stranger who belongs to army"

"Army? Why?"

"Leave it. Stupid girl she is"

"Want more?", said mallik filling his glass.

"No no thnks"

"Theek hai bhai, tumhari marzi"Mallik drank another glass and left the hall leaving confused RK behind. Hate for army people? n what were these two talking about?

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"Why you had to drink so much in front of him...I told you not to take more than one or two glasses"

"You are no one to give orders alright?"

"Listen I don't want you to ruin everything"

"Don't order me like that"

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ps- In next update only Rishablala will be there. I will find a reason so tht Mallik can take one day leave n update can focus on Rishabala😆.
And ya I will update it jaldi frm now!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Ahhh!! Finally you updated Richa!!! 😆 I was missing it yaar!!!
It was a nice update. And you see... I can relate to it as I have watched Fanna from this sequence only... Always missed the first part... 😆
Even I want this Malik to go to a one day leave in this bad weather... 😆 The Malik Madhu conversation was kinda mysterious!! Will wait to know more about it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Nice! Is she a captive held against her will too? Or, is she the ring leader? 😲Can't wait to learn more ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
nice update richa tfs for pm and updating 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Superb update Richa Di!Thanks fr pm!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Love your SS
Fanaa is one of my Fav movies
Do PM me next time 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
okee awesome update
sorry for being late

so my bak bak begins hehehe
ye malik madhu se kya chahta hai...
i m really suspecious...
i want to know...this malik k barey mein..

next oho
rishabh was thinking about madhubala
ahannn

want this story to go forward soon

awesome update

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